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Post by Argus on Wed Nov 23, 2016 9:53 pm

Personality and the Basics


Name: Argus
Gender: Male
Type: Western
Species: Mineaus Docani
Age: 3 years
Date of Birth: January 30th
Personality: Argus is very, very needy. Not so much greed wise, but as his body is frail and weak, making him need constant assistance. This leads to him being a highly friendly and social dragon. He will often seek out others just for the company of being with someone. If he is not with someone he will often act before thinking, making rushed decisions yet timid ones at the same time, knowing the wrong thing will kill him. He's a very personal dragon, hoping to keep his history to him, only him, and nothing but him. However, he also wishes to give back to those around him. If he senses someone is sad, he will go to cheer them up. If he senses someone is angry, he will try and talk with them to make them calm down. Loyal to those who help him and or he's helped, he will do anything he can to make them happier.
Hobbies: Argus is commonly found trying to combine things and make something out of it. He'd seen dragons use a forge and wishes to be like them when he grows up.
Likes:
Argus loves to create and make things.
Argus loves to adventure and see new places.
Argue loves to help and give back to others.
Dislikes:
He hates temperatures too cold (Below 10*F)
Cold harsh winds.
Very nasty, bad storms.
Fears: Argus fears abandonment, and will nearly cling to any stranger he sees.
He also has a fear of abuse, as he already is frail as it is, he wouldn't be able to stop it.


Origin, Culture, and Family


Place of Origin: Shveki
Tribe: Rogue
Position: N/A
Language: None, But can hardly speak universal.
Home: They live on the coast of Shivak, near the light forests and gravel beaches.
Parents: Deceased
Siblings: N/A
Relatives: N/A
Mate: N/A
Offspring: N/A
History: Argus lived the normal life of a hatchling. That was until his 2nd birthday. He expressed to his parents his newfound love for magic. This went on for a week until his parents began to think he was a 'witch'. They left him in the woods, fearing the worst. He was highly ill prepared. Unable to speak, not knowing how to fly, hardly able to catch a squirrel. Due to this he's extremely malnourished and lacks most basic skills.



Physical Appearance and Accessories


Height: 5 feet
Length: 15 feet
Wingspan: 30 feet
Scale/Fur/Feathers: They have a OD green, triangular overlapping scale body, with a Dark OD/Earth brown underbelly.
Eyes: Light Grey
Accessories: A small necklace, with a wooden carved bird on the end.
Armor: N/A
Horns/Spikes: The back of their neck has small, developing spines.
Overall Appearance: They have a frail, weak body. Hardly able to catch food they are underweight and malnourished. He hardly gets to drink, leaving him even more weak. He is missing several scales from malnourishment  and has small osteoporosis from lack of calcium.



Abilities and Strengths



Abilities: They have the power to manipulate plant life. Now this does not mean make trees pick people up or entrap someone in vines. He can only carve shapes into wooden surfaces like trees with his mind, which comes rather easy for him and he can be seen making art and carvings commonly. Along with this power he can bend and weave smaller grasses and stemmed plants into objects like bracelets or clothing.
Strengths: They are very mentally sound, as any other normal dragon would be. However they severely lack physical strength.
Weaknesses: His lack of strength gives him a major disadvantage, and he can hardly play with other hatchlings, fighting is out of the question.
His lack of eating and malnourishment make him extremely weak and frail, easily able to be quite literally broken or killed from and sudden changes.
Fighting Style: At the moment, they quite literally can't fight. The only way they can hunt is by hiding in foliage and surprising a passing by squirrel.
Magic: Kind of, His abilities are his magic. It's all explained there.


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Re: Argus the frail one

Post by Oculus on Thu Nov 24, 2016 9:21 pm

Hello! For origin, did you mean Shveki?

Also for your age, what is the 30/1000 human years? Are they 3 years old? 30 years old? Or 0.03 years old?

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Post by Argus on Thu Nov 24, 2016 9:33 pm

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Post by Oculus on Thu Nov 24, 2016 10:09 pm

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Re: Argus the frail one

Post by Guest on Sat Nov 26, 2016 2:28 pm

I'm Primalus, and I'll be the second person to grade your app.

First off, would you mind making all of the text (besides the category names) the same size as all other text on the site? It's incredibly hard to have to squint to be able to see it, especially on mobile.

Next, would you mind adding his parents? Or at least saying that he has some? The way you put it, it makes it seem like he never had any parents.

Last, I'd like to have you fix this sentence. I know that it's a very minor detail, but it's still something that I'd like to see fixed.
@Argus wrote:Due to this he's extremely malnourished and lacks most basic human skills.
This is a dragon roleplay site, not a human one.

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