Log in

I forgot my password

Our Discord
Our Discord
Latest topics
» The Royal Meeting (Semi-Closed)
by Haven Today at 8:25 pm

» Summer Themed Art Contest!
by Storm Today at 4:18 pm

» Heading Off For The Weekend ^_^ (Athena)
by Storm Today at 4:16 pm

» A Rainy Afternoon (Open!)
by Athena Today at 1:30 pm

» One small step for Draken kind (Open)
by Athena Today at 1:18 pm

» Kill, Kiss, Marry! GAME
by Athena Today at 4:39 am

» Shiro
by Artemise Yesterday at 4:48 pm

» Krygem The Riddler -Needs app-
by Artemise Yesterday at 4:44 pm

» Bond of Power (Private with Athena)
by Storm Yesterday at 2:44 pm

» Growling Thunder -Open!-
by Chrocey Yesterday at 12:14 am

» Zoltann NEEDS APPROVAL
by Oculus Tue Sep 19, 2017 10:33 pm

» Coronation of a King (Open)
by Delillah Tue Sep 19, 2017 11:18 am

» Leaving... (Hopefully Temporarily...)
by Athena Tue Sep 19, 2017 4:48 am

» Two Lies and a Truth! THE GAME
by Arkhor Mon Sep 18, 2017 10:15 am

» Would You Rather..? GAME
by Athena Mon Sep 18, 2017 2:51 am

Top posting users this month
Athena
 
Artemise
 
Oculus
 
Scortia
 
Storm
 
Chrocey
 
Draken
 
Caramina
 
Vortex
 
Riddler
 

Staff Online
Who is online?
In total there are 9 users online :: 4 Registered, 0 Hidden and 5 Guests :: 1 Bot

Artemise, Chrocey, Tsidia, the mind player, Vortex

[ View the whole list ]


Most users ever online was 41 on Thu May 04, 2017 4:06 pm

Sapphire - The Mountain Gemstone

View previous topic View next topic Go down

Sapphire - The Mountain Gemstone

Post by Sapphire on Thu Dec 08, 2016 7:38 am



Personality and the Basics


Name: Sapphire
Gender: Female
Type: Western Dragon
Species: Furred Dragon
Age: 24
Date of Birth: May 31st
Personality: Sapphire mostly is curious about pretty much everything, wanting to explore and find new things to enjoy. She's friendly and caring with being at times excitable. Fairly social she enjoys helping others and reading, thanks to her role for the tribe she as easy access to records and information to expand her knowledge. Sometimes Sapphire can get almost too excited which leads to her ignoring things inless they calm her down. Thanks to her being excitable she can be too trusting leading to being gullible.
Hobbies: Reading, exploring, expanding her knowledge and experience. Practising with medicines
Likes: coldness, talking with others, helping dragons in need along with animals.
Dislikes: Being hurt both physically and mentally, aggressiveness, hot weather.  
Fears: Sapphire is afraid of loosing control, mainly with loosing her mind, she fears that all her knowledge may lead to becoming insane. Along with that she is afraid of harsh sunlight mainly due to the heat.


Origin, Culture, and Family


Place of Origin: Etcan Mountain range
Tribe: Vuari
Position: Emara
Language: Vuarish + Common tongue
Home: Mountains with the tribe.
Parents: Unknown sadly lost.
Siblings: N/A
Relatives: N/A
Mate: N/A
Offspring: N/A
History: (For later)


Physical Appearance and Accessories


Height: 28ft
Length: 40ft
Wingspan: 55ft
Scale/Fur/Feathers: Blue scaled, along with blue furr and purple/blue feathered wings.
Eyes: Ice Blue
Accessories: None
Armor: None
Horns/Spikes: Only horns on her head, two white horns either side of her cheeks.
Overall Appearance: Mostly a simple design, yet like shown in the above image she has a icy blue mane matching the same colour as her fur on her chest. Along with a small patch on her chin scaled. Her tail is simple with a pointed end yet her mane goes all the way down her back to the tail. Her feet thick paws matching the same colour as her body.


Abilities and Strengths


Abilities:

Icy Aura: Her body gives off a cooling effect, as her body is suited for the coldness in the mountains its simply a way to keep her cool as she can't handle warm temperatures. The Aura only reaches out by a metre from her body, only lowering the temperature slightly nothing to cause harm to others.

Ice Breath: Simple as the name suggests, Sapphire has a darkened blue ice breath (similar to her name) which she can use to freeze wounds and attack foes. Yet warm temperatures disable her breath, along with she can only use the breath for a short amount of time (3 post recharge). When attacking foes with her breath she slows down movements as their body starts to freeze, for completely being frozen it takes 5 full posts so this is very unlikely. Effects of the slow down and freezing lasts 1 post. Being in warm temperatures or harsh sunlight stops the freezing, along with rapid movement it is rather easy to dodge. Using another breath attack against the ice breath would certainly cancel Sapphire's out.

Ice Healing: Thankfully her ice can provide faster healing, freezing wounds can repair the damage within 4 posts depending on how serious the damage is. Same with her Ice breath this takes time to recharge (4 post recharge). Sapphire can only heal wounds medium sized and below, for example deep cuts and bites.

Strengths: Tough frame, even though Sapphire is a healer she has quite the sturdy frame similar to a fighter, yet her strength isn't as strong. Knowledge is her main access and healing.  
Weaknesses: Fire, pretty simple fire counters her aura and breath giving her a massive disadvantage. Running out of ice breath which makes her vulnerable. Fighting against larger foes as she doesn't have a lot of stamina. Slow movement as she is used to colder climates this effects her reaction times slower than average.
Fighting Style: Using both her breath and melee attacks focusing on using her tail.
Magic: Only simple healing spells which uses her ice powers. Very much used like her Ice healing ability, she mainly uses that to help others in her healing position in the tribe. Along with medicines and methods which the healers use.


Last edited by Sapphire on Tue Dec 13, 2016 4:08 am; edited 3 times in total
avatar
Sapphire

Status :
Online
Offline

Posts : 54
Join date : 2016-12-08

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Sapphire - The Mountain Gemstone

Post by Artemise on Thu Dec 08, 2016 9:02 pm

Place of Origin:

Sapphire wrote:Eccan Mountain Range

Etcan*

Abilities:

Sapphire wrote:Ice Breath: Simple as the name suggests, Sapphire has a darkened blue ice breath (similar to her name) which she can use to freeze wounds and attack foes. Yet warm temperatures disable her breath, along with she can only use the breath for a short amount of time (3 posts recharge).

Can she freeze all wounds, whether it be major or minor, or can she freeze minor ones only? Also, I don't quite get "Ice Breath" and "Ice Healing". You mentioned that her ice breath can heal, so why are they stated as two different abilities, with two different recharging times?

"Attack foes" - what does it do to the opponent? Does it freeze them temporarily? If so, how long? And how much of the dragon's body will be frozen?

"She can only use the breath for a short amount of time" - how long?

Sapphire wrote:Ice Healing: Thankfully her ice can provide faster healing, freezing wounds can repair the damage within 4 posts depending on how serious the damage is. Same with her Ice breath this takes time to recharge (4 post recharge)

Please put a limit to the size of wounds she can heal. It can be considered OP in battle i she's able to heal all types of wounds, especially if they're major ones, within just 4 posts.

~~

Bump (post bump on this app) when edited.

_________________

wriggly wyrms go wriggle
avatar
Artemise

Status :
Online
Offline

Posts : 362
Join date : 2016-11-10
Location : Error 404: Question not processed.
Rank : Huin
Tribe : Kaamil

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Sapphire - The Mountain Gemstone

Post by Sapphire on Fri Dec 09, 2016 3:22 am

bump edited
avatar
Sapphire

Status :
Online
Offline

Posts : 54
Join date : 2016-12-08

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Sapphire - The Mountain Gemstone

Post by Scortia on Sat Dec 10, 2016 2:55 pm

Sapphire wrote:

Personality and the Basics


Name: Sapphire
Gender: Female
Type: Western Dragon
Species: Furred Dragon
Age: 24
Date of Birth: May 31st
Personality: Sapphire mostly is curious about pretty much everything, wanting to explore and find new things to enjoy. She's friendly and caring with being at times excitable. Fairly social she enjoys helping others and reading, thanks to her role for the tribe she as easy access to records and information to expand her knowledge. Sometimes Sapphire can get almost too excited which leads to her ignoring things inless they calm her down.
Hobbies: Reading, exploring, expanding her knowledge and experience. Practising with medicines
Likes: coldness, talking with others, helping dragons in need along with animals.
Dislikes: Being hurt both physically and mentally, aggressiveness, hot weather.  
Fears: Sapphire is afraid of loosing control, mainly with loosing her mind, she fears that all her knowledge may lead to becoming insane. Along with that she is afraid of harsh sunlight mainly due to the heat.


Origin, Culture, and Family


Place of Origin: Etcan Mountain range
Tribe: Vuari
Position: Emara
Language: Vuarish + Common tongue
Home: Mountains with the tribe.
Parents: Unknown sadly lost.
Siblings: N/A
Relatives: N/A
Mate: N/A
Offspring: N/A
History: (For later)


Physical Appearance and Accessories


Height: 28ft
Length: 40ft
Wingspan: 55ft
Scale/Fur/Feathers: Blue scaled, along with blue furr and purple/blue feathered wings.
Eyes: Ice Blue
Accessories: None
Armor: None
Horns/Spikes: Only horns on her head, two white horns either side of her cheeks.
Overall Appearance: Mostly a simple design, yet like shown in the above image she has a icy blue mane matching the same colour as her fur on her chest. Along with a small patch on her chin scaled. Her tail is simple with a pointed end yet her mane goes all the way down her back to the tail. Her feet thick paws matching the same colour as her body.


Abilities and Strengths


Abilities:

Icy Aura: Her body gives off a cooling effect, as her body is suited for the coldness in the mountains its simply a way to keep her cool as she can't handle warm temperatures. Please be more specific as to what this means.

Ice Breath: Simple as the name suggests, Sapphire has a darkened blue ice breath (similar to her name) which she can use to freeze wounds and attack foes. Yet warm temperatures disable her breath, along with she can only use the breath for a short amount of time (3 post recharge). When attacking foes with her breath she slows down movements as their body starts to freeze, for completely being frozen it takes 3 full posts so this is very unlikely. Effects of the slow down and freezing lasts 1 post. I'd say no on the completely freezing the opponent, or at least have it take more than three posts, and how can the opponent prevent being completely frozen? What can they do to fight back?

Ice Healing: Thankfully her ice can provide faster healing, freezing wounds can repair the damage within 4 posts depending on how serious the damage is. Same with her Ice breath this takes time to recharge (4 post recharge). Sapphire can only heal wounds medium sized and below, for example deep cuts and bites.

Strengths: Tough frame, even though Sapphire is a healer she has quite the sturdy frame similar to a fighter, yet her strength isn't as strong. Knowledge is her main access and healing.  
Weaknesses: Warm and hot climates, running out of ice breath which makes her vulnerable. Fighting against larger foes as she doesn't have a lot of stamina.   I'd say add one more weakness, since running out of ice breath is a factor that usually the rper (you) decides when it happens, and no one wants to purposely put their character in a position to lose a fight.
Fighting Style: Using both her breath and melee attacks focusing on using her tail.
Magic: Only simple healing spells which uses her ice powers.I'd say just be a bit more specific. What can the spells heal? Poison, flesh wounds, etc.

_________________
My life in a nutshell:
[21:39:56] Silhouette : (Why the pic?)
[21:40:05] * Blaze isnt over dramatic, he just doesnt like ardent being "one" with Scort.
[21:40:13] Elyn Entezz : Because they're hetalia trash :@

Mixups are Fun:
[21:53:14 19/11/2016]@ Oculus : are you guys mixing up Hetalia with Hentai?
[21:53:26 19/11/2016] Skylar : (*cough blaze/ardent*)
[21:53:31 19/11/2016] Silhouette : (I think that was it Oculus)


Famous Quotes:

"Man, I wish my art didn't suck." - Scortia, commenting on her own art
"Yep, there's wind." - Connie Maheswaran
"YO, WHO'S BABY IS THIS?" - John Laurens, in a comic I read
"so i am basically right." - SolsticeEquinox, about coding with Acer
"Dun worry about it." - Scortia, on various occasions
avatar
Scortia

Status :
Online
Offline

Posts : 300
Join date : 2016-09-06
Rank : Kuz'a

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Sapphire - The Mountain Gemstone

Post by Sapphire on Sun Dec 11, 2016 3:50 am

bump
avatar
Sapphire

Status :
Online
Offline

Posts : 54
Join date : 2016-12-08

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Sapphire - The Mountain Gemstone

Post by Scortia on Mon Dec 12, 2016 3:55 pm

Meh, 1/2 approved.

_________________
My life in a nutshell:
[21:39:56] Silhouette : (Why the pic?)
[21:40:05] * Blaze isnt over dramatic, he just doesnt like ardent being "one" with Scort.
[21:40:13] Elyn Entezz : Because they're hetalia trash :@

Mixups are Fun:
[21:53:14 19/11/2016]@ Oculus : are you guys mixing up Hetalia with Hentai?
[21:53:26 19/11/2016] Skylar : (*cough blaze/ardent*)
[21:53:31 19/11/2016] Silhouette : (I think that was it Oculus)


Famous Quotes:

"Man, I wish my art didn't suck." - Scortia, commenting on her own art
"Yep, there's wind." - Connie Maheswaran
"YO, WHO'S BABY IS THIS?" - John Laurens, in a comic I read
"so i am basically right." - SolsticeEquinox, about coding with Acer
"Dun worry about it." - Scortia, on various occasions
avatar
Scortia

Status :
Online
Offline

Posts : 300
Join date : 2016-09-06
Rank : Kuz'a

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Sapphire - The Mountain Gemstone

Post by Artemise on Mon Dec 12, 2016 5:27 pm

Personality:

You only have 4 sentences for your personality.

Weaknesses:

Sapphire wrote:Warm and hot climates

This weakness is void as you have Icy Aura to keep you cool. Please change it.

~~

Bump when edited.

_________________

wriggly wyrms go wriggle
avatar
Artemise

Status :
Online
Offline

Posts : 362
Join date : 2016-11-10
Location : Error 404: Question not processed.
Rank : Huin
Tribe : Kaamil

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Sapphire - The Mountain Gemstone

Post by Sapphire on Tue Dec 13, 2016 4:08 am

bump
avatar
Sapphire

Status :
Online
Offline

Posts : 54
Join date : 2016-12-08

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Sapphire - The Mountain Gemstone

Post by Artemise on Tue Dec 13, 2016 6:05 pm

2/2 APPROVED

_________________

wriggly wyrms go wriggle
avatar
Artemise

Status :
Online
Offline

Posts : 362
Join date : 2016-11-10
Location : Error 404: Question not processed.
Rank : Huin
Tribe : Kaamil

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Sapphire - The Mountain Gemstone

Post by Sponsored content


Sponsored content


Back to top Go down

View previous topic View next topic Back to top

- Similar topics

 
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum