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Post by Haven on Mon Jan 02, 2017 8:33 pm


Personality and the Basics


Name:
Haven
Gender:
Male
Type:
Western Dragon
Species:
Unknown
Age:
986 years old
Date of Birth:
Unknown
Personality:
Haven does not speak unless he wants to speak. He does what he is told without much objection. He was raised and trained fiercely, with zero tolerance of failure. He keeps to himself to the shadows. He demands respect from the ones he clearly overrules. He thinks, "Of those to who earn the right to live, should live to the fullest. Those who fail, should be put down." Unpredictable in the way he is, he keeps himself closed up. "There shall be no room for weakness". He does not like shinny things, but bones, they fascinate him. He believes in the Death Penalty, or death to those who do wrong. He can be a perfectionist at times, and very flirtatious, but can never keep a mate. He is not one to trust.  He has low tolerance for dragons who think they are smart when they are not.
Haven doesn't interact with dragons, making him a perfect at secret holding. He would die for the one that commands him, almost as if a programmed machine. He knows what he can do, how and when. He acts upon mostly instinct, more savage, little emotion. As a smart warrior, he usually always has a backup plan, and if he fails, even the slightest, he puts himself into mental pain, scarring even, to remind himself what tribe he is in, why he is in it, and why he should not fail again.
Hobbies:
Trains:
Haven trains nearly every day, in areal combat, terrestrial combat, hand-to-hand, and distance. He is well physical fit. Not only does he train his body, he also trains his mind.He trains himself to fight to whatever situation possible. Putting himself through mental and physical torture until he surpasses his limits with flying colors.

Reads History:
Haven learns about other tribes, their history and how if in a time they were dismembered or brought down by another force. He looks at their anatomy, continuously updating himself on their movements and/or fighting styles. If necessary, he would go see for himself... On the battlefield.

Bone Hunting:
As he is very intrigued by bones, that of dragons and of other creatures, he goes to the deserts to search for the white, solid bones.

Studying Shadows:
Of that of which he fights with, together with the shadows, he brings their abilities to his attention.
Likes:
Training: He has taught his body to anticipate and to expect harsh training nearly every day. He can break several bones a day, only to go to the healer to get them fixed.

Flying:
He loves to fly, on his free time he goes on long expeditions to fly out into a storm

Fighting:
In battle, and not training. He loves the rush of adrenaline and the look of pure horror as he attacks another. He is known to take chunks of flesh out of his enemy and eat it before their eyes.  

Dislikes:
Disrespect:
This can be put many ways. If another dragon disrespects him, he would and will put them in their place. If they dare disrespect his Queen, his Majesty, death would be upon them before they could even breath.

Being ordered around by a dragon beneath him: He will not ever have that, reminding them with brutal force.
Fears:
Not being good enough for his tribe
To see his Queen get hurt.
Origin, Culture, and Family


Place of Origin:
In the heart of Shveki
Tribe:
Xoya
Position:
Kommandant
Language:
Strictly Xoyan, a little universal.
If to try to communicate with other's: grunts, growls, roars, and physical body gestures
Home:
In the heart of Xoya, the Empire
Parents:
Unknown
Siblings:
Unknown
Relatives:
Unknown
Mate:
Unknown
Offspring:
Unknown
History:
Unknown until revealed in a role play


Physical Appearance and Accessories


Height:
114 Foot
Length:
200 Foot
Wingspan:
285 Foot
Scale/Fur/Feathers:
Black with hues of dark, dark purple in the sunlight.
Eyes:
Dark crimson red
Accessories:
Sometimes, he wears another dragon's skull upon his own, for intimidation and secrecy. He wears a onyx stone, embedded into his chest by powerful magic, the place holder for his soul when he summons it.
Armor:
Sometimes he wears a bone platted tail band for maximum damage. He wears talons of other dragons as well, making his longer. If they were to break, he'd have his own talons to smash and tear with.  
Horns/Spikes:
He has many horns and spikes. Large horns protrude from his head, long, elegant and sweep to the sky in long curls. His neck, back, tips of wings, and tail all carry long, slender spines that can move, vertical or horizontal. He does not have a nose horn. Little horns can be found on his high cheekbones, under his chin, and connecting to his large horns that come from his skull. Each of his scales have a little point to them, like shark skin, only pointed out.
Overall Appearance:
Haven is very well armored, naturally with his large scales. They act like solid rock, making it deceptively to attack. The larger scales trace along the sides of his neck, shoulders, front of all legs, top of toes, down and on the sides of his tail. His back has the most armored plating. He is like a large, terrifying dragon, bulldozing through the dragons at battle. His shoulders connect with enormous muscles that line his wings. When he walks, muscles ripple throughout his body. His scales can change hue if looked at, at different angels and lighting. Straight on, pitch black, as if light is absorbed, at a glance, his dark dark purple flashes. At any angle, his scales give him the "trippy" feeling in the air, as he moves and glides, continuously changing direction. He has visible scars, nearly everywhere on his body, torn wing membranes, scars line his body. Chipped horns, chipped scales, but he polishes and cleans every day, to keep his glamour at top notch. He has large slits within his neck, three on each side. These are like extra nostrils, to sense fear from 10 kilometers away, and to gulp the sensational snack down. Upon his back, a sail could be found, almost like that of the Spinosaurus.

Art by: Peter Prime

Art by: Ben Wotten
Demon: With his demon form, which he summons from Hells Gates, he becomes his soul, which was locked up and guarded by a demon Finrohir, one of the strongest to guard. He guards Haven's soul from being taken and used by the wrong demons. Haven can summon his soul to and from the locked chamber, even farther than Hades' Underworld resides. Deeper than mythological stories.

Art by: Damie

Ruth Tay

Roar: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LCGjAKpXh6A
This King can roar as loud as a 747 Jet Engine.

Abilities and Strengths


Abilities:
Walking Among Nightmares:
Nightmares consist of feelings of intense terror, fear, distress, or anxiety. He has the ability to jump into other's dreams, but only while he is asleep as well, and only if they are in the vicinity of one mile. If they to wake up, slowly or suddenly, he would be shoved back into his own body, waking up as well. With a fast awakening, he cannot use this power again until two nights. If to slowly wake up, he can jump back into another dream, for the limit of a single post. He would already be pushing his physical and physiological limits. This can also happen in the REM part of sleep, not before, and not after. He can not physically hurt the dreamer, but can put some nasty images, voices, and put his face into their dream. Limiting him to the correct time to enter dreams, his window only open for 1-2 1/2 hours a night. He does not know in that mile of the dragon. When he falls asleep, his power draws himself to their dreams. If they move, then they are rather... Sleepwalking? He will be ripped out of the dream.

Feeding Upon Fear:
Adrenaline can spread through the air, engulfing the one with it in a cloud of the chemical. The sides of his neck can sense it, and hypersensitive pores on the tip of his nose can sense it. (Like a shark can sense electromagnetic waves and blood) Inside his gills, there are hundreds of hypersensitive pores always active. The range would be about 50-100 feet depending on the wind and where he would be at.

Producing Fear Inducing Chemicals:
His body can naturally produce chemicals that can induce fear and jump start the "Fight or Flight" mode in a stage of gas. Naturally, a dragon's body produce these chemicals, cortisol, adrenaline, and then glucose into the bloodstream, to start up the energy to "run". Haven's chemicals have a nasty twist to them, making you only feel terror, to an extent of rarely or to not move at all. Locked terror. This takes little from Haven, since the gas of chemicals comes naturally as fire comes natural from a fire dragon. You can resist this gas, it is possible, but, there is not a way to not feel displaced or strange. A slight tickle of the back of a brain. The fear of there is a fear, but your body does not have to act upon it. The gas itself is gray and black, shifting in the light. It's rang is about 30 feet before evaporating or having little to no effect

Demon:
His soul, stuck somewhere were none could find, can be summoned. It takes time for his soul to reach it's holding stone and melt into the body of the male. His face practically peals itself from it's bone, revealing bloodshot eyes, blood, patches of flesh, and blood. His scales seem to shrink, making him able to defy gravity in the ways of an Eastern Dragon, moving, bouncing and floating upon the air. His body produces his Chemical Gas at rates of 2x of what he can originally. The near site of him can bring horrible terror to one's heart. He needs plenty of space, an open field or something with large amounts of space. Little spaces, narrow spaces, he can not transform. under attack or pressure it will and can mess with his mind. Emotionally wrecked, he wouldn't even dare. If it puts his troops under threat, he will not.

(Limited Time on These Abilities:
He has limited time on each ability, to sensing, to producing chemical fog, and traveling to dreams. Physically, he can keep a battle up, physical and with his abilities, most likely only lasting a few hours before passing out from pure exhaustion. Walking Among Nightmares, Producing the Gas, and the Demon)
Strengths:
Physical Strength:
Haven has trained all of his life, he is lined with muscle and large scales that act as armor. His reflexes are fast, and he can bring down a force of hundreds to bow at his feet. (metaphorically)

High Endurance of Pain:
Physical or Physiological, he's put himself through it all. To being in a cave of life threatening situations, to being put into battle drugged. If he were to be captured, he would die before he would say anything.  

Weaknesses:
Blocked Gas:
If Haven's snout is clamped shut without even the trace of a space that his thick fog can escape, he becomes vulnerable. He does not have normal nostrils upon the end of his snout, only upon the sides of his face where he can breath, not exhale gas.

No Other Long Ranged Weapon:
He does not have another way to protect himself, he does not have fire, ice, acid, or whatever a dragon can posses. Just thick smokey chemicals.

Soul:
Haven's soul is very dangerous, and only to be summoned when the magic that holds it, allows it. And only when the magic knows for a fact that Haven is in danger, other than that, Haven cannot have his soul. If Haven gets angry and asks for it, the magic does not let it go from its box. The dragonness that took his soul and placed it under spell was his own mother. Rarely does he, so rarely Haven is a full blown Demon.

Demon Mode:
Very vulnerable to attacks, scales practically falling off of him. It takes him a day to gain control over his body after his soul has been with him. Almost molting from the skin that has become too small, and back to his original size.

Heat:
Heat drains the energy from him, making him dulled, not only his senses, fighting, controlling his mind. Everything.

Pockets of Pores:
Since these hypersensitive pores are sensitive, if stabbed, long term or permanent damage can take place. They can close up, just like nostrils on the end of other dragon's noses. If not, stabbed, torched, or even dirt can damage them. It can be extremely painful. He can blackout, become aggressive towards his allies, or even death.  This is also a soft spot to pierce a weapon through to the heart, lungs, or other intestinal systems. Fatal, and even death.
 
Fighting Style:
Haven fights depending on his opponent, situation, and if he is with soldiers. The surrounding, whats in it, and if he can make any moves at all. He picks his battles.
He can fight as a soldier, brutal, no mercy. He can fight in a line of soldiers, military like.
Another side, he can fight completely rouge, at times if he does not know how to fight the other, or if he's fighting a dragon that does not... Exactly know how to fight.

Magic:
Little magic is in his blood.

Verse of Summoning:
Summoning can be difficult, even for the greatest wizards of the dragon world, depending on what you are summoning. His mother had created a summoning spell, specifically for Haven's soul, and for Haven only.

Small Spells:
He can pick up small things, lesser than the mass and volume of a book.

The gif at the top: Creator- simul-in-aeternum


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Post by Oculus on Tue Jan 10, 2017 12:10 am

Species/Height:. So Eastern dragons are the long, thin type. Just curious, but when on all fours, are they that tall? Western dragons are the usual ones you know.

Position:. Update

Apperance:. Nice try, i see all those strengths you slipped in without putting em down below in the strength section. Fireproof, sense range, ect.... add them to strengths.

Abilities
Dreams: can a dragon resist him, or can they do nothing? Also, does this give away his/their location or not? And does Haven have to know where his intended target is?

Sensing Fear:. chemicals associated with fear are released in sweat usually. Anyway, range of sense?

Fear Gas: You cannot powerplay someone to be stuck in terror, as their character may be tough to break mentally. As for the gas, range, color, and how much produced per post/time limit.

Demon: There are no gods or goddesses on this site. So this is a transformation spell. What are the limits to this?

Strengths: add missing strengths
Remove not talking (recommendation only)

Weaknesses:
Soul: No gods or goddesses, so need to rework this a bit

Magic:
Summoning Self: No gods or goddesses on this site...

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i did this on iPad so if errors, sorry
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Post by Haven on Sat Mar 04, 2017 12:41 pm

Abilities of Dreams: A dragon could, but it wouldn't be easy. When you're awake, you know you're awake. When you're asleep, you don't know what you're doing. Usually they would just think it's part of their dream (if you know what I mean?) it does not give away position. He would look for them.If he does not have a visual target he can't do his dream thingy.

Sensing Fear: Yeah, sweat, breath, energy (mood). You know when someone is scared, you can sense it (humanly speaking). Range of sense? 50-100 depending on the wind, if it's with or against him.

Fear Gas: You're right, they can resist it. x'D Not denying they can't. They would feel something out of place at least. Gas is the color of gray and black, range is about 20 feet before evaporating or having little effect. Per post? Usually one. This replaces his "fire ability".

Demon: Yes, if there is a small space, he cannot transform. He needs lots of space. Under attack or under pressure, it can screw with his mind. Emotionally wrecked, he wouldn't even dare. If it puts his troops under threat, he will not.
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Post by Haven on Sat Mar 04, 2017 8:45 pm

well actually, YeahhhhHHH it would give away their position because he would have to find them
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Post by Oculus on Sun Mar 05, 2017 11:50 am

Haven wrote:

Credit the image please
Personality and the Basics


Name:
Haven
Gender:
Male
Type:
Western Dragon
Species:
Unknown
Age:
986 years old
Date of Birth:
Unknown
Personality:
Haven does not speak unless he wants to speak. He does what he is told without much objection. He was raised and trained fiercely, with zero tolerance of failure. He keeps to himself to the shadows. He demands respect from the ones he clearly overrules. He thinks, "Of those to who earn the right to live, should live to the fullest. Those who fail, should be put down." Unpredictable in the way he is, he keeps himself closed up. "There shall be no room for weakness". He does not like shinny things, but bones, they fascinate him. He believes in the Death Penalty, or death to those who do wrong. He can be a perfectionist at times, and very flirtatious, but can never keep a mate. He is not one to trust.  He has low tolerance for dragons who think they are smart when they are not.
Haven doesn't interact with dragons, making him a perfect at secret holding. He would die for the one that commands him, almost as if a programmed machine. He knows what he can do, how and when. He acts upon mostly instinct, more savage, little emotion. As a smart warrior, he usually always has a backup plan, and if he fails, even the slightest, he puts himself into mental pain, scarring even, to remind himself what tribe he is in, why he is in it, and why he should not fail again.
Hobbies:
Trains:
Haven trains nearly every day, in areal combat, terrestrial combat, hand-to-hand, and distance. He is well physical fit. Not only does he train his body, he also trains his mind.He trains himself to fight to whatever situation possible. Putting himself through mental and physical torture until he surpasses his limits with flying colors.

Reads History:
Haven learns about other tribes, their history and how if in a time they were dismembered or brought down by another force. He looks at their anatomy, continuously updating himself on their movements and/or fighting styles. If necessary, he would go see for himself... On the battlefield.

Bone Hunting:
As he is very intrigued by bones, that of dragons and of other creatures, he goes to the deserts to search for the white, solid bones.

Studying Shadows:
Of that of which he fights with, together with the shadows, he brings their abilities to his attention.
Likes:
Training: He has taught his body to anticipate and to expect harsh training nearly every day. He can break several bones a day, only to go to the healer to get them fixed.

Flying:
He loves to fly, on his free time he goes on long expeditions to fly out into a storm

Fighting:
In battle, and not training. He loves the rush of adrenaline and the look of pure horror as he attacks another. He is known to take chunks of flesh out of his enemy and eat it before their eyes.  

Dislikes:
Disrespect:
This can be put many ways. If another dragon disrespects him, he would and will put them in their place. If they dare disrespect his Queen, his Majesty, death would be upon them before they could even breath.

Being ordered around by a dragon beneath him: He will not ever have that, reminding them with brutal force.
Fears:
Not being good enough for his tribe
To see his Queen get hurt.
Origin, Culture, and Family


Place of Origin:
In the heart of Shveki
Tribe:
Xoya
Position:
Offensive General
Language:
Strictly Xoyan, a little universal.
If to try to communicate with other's: grunts, growls, roars, and physical body gestures
Home:
Outskirts of Shveki
Parents:
Unknown
Siblings:
Unknown
Relatives:
Unknown
Mate:
Unknown
Offspring:
Unknown
History:
Unknown until revealed in a role play


Physical Appearance and Accessories


Height:
114 Foot
Length:
200 Foot
Wingspan:
285 Foot
Scale/Fur/Feathers:
Black with hues of dark, dark purple in the sunlight.
Eyes:
Dark crimson red
Accessories:
Sometimes, he wears another dragon's skull upon his own, for intimidation and secrecy. He wears a onyx stone, embedded into his chest by powerful magic, the place holder for his soul when he summons it.
Armor:
Sometimes he wears a bone platted tail band for maximum damage. He wears talons of other dragons as well, making his longer. If they were to break, he'd have his own talons to smash and tear with.  
Horns/Spikes:
He has many horns and spikes. Large horns protrude from his head, long, elegant and sweep to the sky in long curls. His neck, back, tips of wings, and tail all carry long, slender spines that can move, vertical or horizontal. He does not have a nose horn. Little horns can be found on his high cheekbones, under his chin, and connecting to his large horns that come from his skull. Each of his scales have a little point to them, like shark skin, only pointed out.
Overall Appearance:
Haven is very well armored, naturally with his large scales. They act like solid rock, making it deceptively to attack. The larger scales trace along the sides of his neck, shoulders, front of all legs, top of toes, down and on the sides of his tail. His back has the most armored plating. He is like a large, terrifying dragon, bulldozing through the dragons at battle. His shoulders connect with enormous muscles that line his wings. When he walks, muscles ripple throughout his body. His scales can change hue if looked at, at different angels and lighting. Straight on, pitch black, as if light is absorbed, at a glance, his dark dark purple flashes. At any angle, his scales give him the "trippy" feeling in the air, as he moves and glides, continuously changing direction. He has visible scars, nearly everywhere on his body, torn wing membranes, scars line his body. Chipped horns, chipped scales, but he polishes and cleans every day, to keep his glamour at top notch. He has large slits within his neck, three on each side. These are like extra nostrils, to sense fear from 10 kilometers away, and to gulp the sensational snack down. Upon his back, a sail could be found, almost like that of the Spinosaurus.

Art by: Peter Prime

Art by: Ben Wotten
Demon: With his demon form, which he summons from Hells Gates, he becomes his soul, which was locked up and guarded by a demon Finrohir, one of the strongest to guard. He guards Haven's soul from being taken and used by the wrong demons. Haven can summon his soul to and from the locked chamber, even farther than Hades' Underworld resides. Deeper than mythological stories.

Art by: Damie

Art by: Ruth Tay

Abilities and Strengths


Abilities:
Walking Among Nightmares:
Nightmares consist of feelings of intense terror, fear, distress, or anxiety. He has the ability to jump into other's dreams, but only while he is asleep as well, and only if they are in the vicinity of one mile. If they to wake up, slowly or suddenly, he would be shoved back into his own body, waking up as well. With a fast awakening, he cannot use this power again until two nights. If to slowly wake up, he can jump back into another dream, for the limit of 10 minuets. He would already be pushing his physical and physiological limits. This can also happen in the REM part of sleep, not before, and not after. He can not physically hurt the dreamer, but can put some nasty images, voices, and put his face into their dream. Limiting him to the correct time to enter dreams, his window only open for 1-2 1/2 hours a night.
How does he find the person? Does he have to know the location of the sleeping dragon? Does the dragon's dreams he finds know where he is?
Feeding Upon Fear:
Adrenaline can spread through the air, engulfing the one with it in a cloud of the chemical. The sides of his neck can sense it, and hypersensitive pores on the tip of his nose can sense it. (Like a shark can sense electromagnetic waves and blood) Inside his gills, there are hundreds of hypersensitive pores always active.

Producing Fear Inducing Chemicals:
His body can naturally produce chemicals that can induce fear and jump start the "Fight or Flight" mode in a stage of gas. Naturally, a dragon's body produce these chemicals, cortisol, adrenaline, and then glucose into the bloodstream, to start up the energy to "run". Haven's chemicals have a nasty twist to them, making you only feel terror, to an extent of rarely or to not move at all. Locked terror. This takes little from Haven, since the gas of chemicals comes naturally as fire comes natural from a fire dragon.
Range? Time for chemicals to take effect? Also, characters may or may not be frozen in terror depending on their personalities.
Demon:
His soul, taken by the God of Demons, Finrohir, can be summoned. It takes time for his soul to reach it's holding stone and melt into the body of the male. His face practically peals itself from it's bone, revealing bloodshot eyes, blood, patches of flesh, and blood. His scales seem to shrink, making him able to defy gravity in the ways of an Eastern Dragon, moving, bouncing and floating upon the air. His body produces his Chemical Gas at rates of 2x of what he can originally. The near site of him can bring horrible terror to one's heart.
There are no gods or demons in Dragons Haven, you'd need to warp this into a transformational ability with restrictions like a time limit.
Strengths:
Physical Strength:
Haven has trained all of his life, he is lined with muscle and large scales that act as armor. His reflexes are fast, and he can bring down a force of hundreds to bow at his feet. (metaphorically)

Not Talking:
He does not talk when he does not want to.
I'd remove this as this is more personality
High Endurance of Pain:
Physical or Physiological, he's put himself through it all. To being in a cave of life threatening situations, to being put into battle drugged. If he were to be captured, he would die before he would say anything.  

Weaknesses:
Hypersensitive Pores:
These hypersensitive radars can only sense the chemicals he himself creates. He cannot sense energy. He does not have enlarged hearing.

Limited Time on Each Ability:
He has limited time on each ability, to sensing, to producing chemical fog, and traveling to dreams. Physically, he can keep a battle up, physical and with his abilities, most likely only lasting a few hours before passing out from pure exhaustion.
Specify this in his abilities section
No Other Breath Weapon:
He does not have another way to protect himself, he does not have fire, ice, acid, or whatever a dragon can posses. Just thick smokey chemicals.
Not really a weakness, would be better to say no ranged capabilities besides gas, depending on range of the fear gas/
Soul:
Haven's soul is very dangerous, and only to be summoned when the Guardian, if the Demon allows it. And only when he knows for a fact that Haven is in danger, other than that, Haven cannot have his soul. If he gets angry and asks for it, the Demon does not let it go from its box. Rarely does he, so rarely Haven is a full blown Demon.
No gods or demons on DH, so you'd need to rework this.
Demon Mode:
Very vulnerable to attacks, scales practically falling off of him. It takes him a day to gain control over his body after his soul has been with him. Almost molting from the skin that has become too small, and back to his original size.
Also add this info in the abilities section.
Heat:
Heat drains the energy from him, making him dulled, not only his senses, fighting, controlling his mind. Everything.    
Fighting Style:
Haven fights depending on his opponent, situation, and if he is with soldiers. The surrounding, whats in it, and if he can make any moves at all. He picks his battles.
He can fight as a soldier, brutal, no mercy. He can fight in a line of soldiers, military like.
Another side, he can fight completely rouge, at times if he does not know how to fight the other, or if he's fighting a dragon that does not... Exactly know how to fight.
Magic:
Little magic is in his blood.
Verse of Summoning:
Summoning can be difficult, even for the greatest wizards of the dragon world, depending on what you are summoning. The Demon had created a summoning spell, specifically for Haven's soul, and for Haven only.
No gods or demons on DH, so need to rework this.
Small Spells:
He can pick up small things, lesser than the mass and volume of a book.

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Re: Haven of Nightmares

Post by Oculus on Sun Mar 05, 2017 2:59 pm

Walking Among Nightmares:
Nightmares consist of feelings of intense terror, fear, distress, or anxiety. He has the ability to jump into other's dreams, but only while he is asleep as well, and only if they are in the vicinity of one mile.
Does he have to know where they are in that one mile before falling asleep? If so, if they move, would he not be able to do this?

(Limited Time on Each Ability:
He has limited time on each ability, to sensing, to producing chemical fog, and traveling to dreams. Physically, he can keep a battle up, physical and with his abilities, most likely only lasting a few hours before passing out from pure exhaustion.)
Please specify for each ability in each abilities description.

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Re: Haven of Nightmares

Post by Sonus Decessus on Sun Mar 05, 2017 3:43 pm

I will specify

I did not want to put the creator right under the gif for it would ruin the beginning of this application. That is was I was talking about on Skype.

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Re: Haven of Nightmares

Post by Sonus Decessus on Sun Mar 05, 2017 3:50 pm

Buump

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Re: Haven of Nightmares

Post by Oculus on Sun Mar 05, 2017 4:04 pm

~1/2 Approved~
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Re: Haven of Nightmares

Post by Sonus Decessus on Tue Mar 07, 2017 2:50 pm

Plazzzzz someone approve

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Re: Haven of Nightmares

Post by Artemise on Wed Mar 08, 2017 5:15 am

Doing this on a phone, so sorry for any spelling mistakes. I'd do it on Saturday but I didn't want to keep you waiting. xD

Abilities:

-Walking among nightmares: change 10 minutes to half a post, or one full post, because

Neru wrote:Time is so fluid in a battle. Fights often get started over how much time has passed.

-Producing fear-inducing chemicals: how can the dragon resist them...? Please add in a few ways to do so, otherwise this ability will seem very hard to fight back against, which would make it a bit op.

Weaknesses:

-Hypersensitive pores: "These hypersensitive radars can only sense the chemicals he himself creates. He cannot sense energy. He does not have enlarged hearing."

This seems more like a limitation than a weakness to me. And how is 'does not have enlarged hearing' relevant to 'hypersensitive pores'?

-Soul: "Haven's soul is very dangerous, and only to be summoned when the magic that holds it, allows it. And only when the magic knows for a fact that Haven is in danger, other than that, Haven cannot have his soul. If Haven gets angry and asks for it, the magic does not let it go from its box. The dragonness that took his soul and placed it under spell was his own mother. Rarely does he, so rarely Haven is a full blown Demon. "

Again, this seems more like a limitation than a weakness.

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Personally, I feel that you need to put in some actual weaknesses which Haven's opponent can use to their advantage. I'm not asking you to put in tons of crippling weaknesses though! Just throw in two or three weaknesses that all types of dragons can strike at. E.G heat, this won't be a weakness if he is facing off against non-fire dragons, or if he's fighting in a cool environment, would it?

Haven also has 6 abilities + strengths and only 5 weaknesses. This would be okay, but Haven has pretty strong abilities, so like I mentioned above, add in some weaknesses.

Bump when edited~ ^^

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Re: Haven of Nightmares

Post by Haven on Wed Mar 08, 2017 2:14 pm

Bump, Arty, his soul is a BIG weakness, to explain better, if needed in the most important times, or to save other and the magic says no, he can't help. If he's injured, the magic sometimes won't release his soul, the possibility of him being killed reaches high, if that does not convince you enough I will change it <3
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Re: Haven of Nightmares

Post by Artemise on Wed Mar 08, 2017 8:26 pm

Oh, I see! Please add in more weaknesses though, because like I said, Haven has pretty strong abilities and weaknessess that not all dragons can get at. Like, he's 114 feet tall (giant ;^; ), and how will a small dragon manage to clamp his 'nostrils' shut? If they're bad at flying?

Artemise wrote:I'm not asking you to put in tons of crippling weaknesses though! Just throw in two or three weaknesses that all types of dragons can strike at.


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Re: Haven of Nightmares

Post by Artemise on Wed Mar 08, 2017 9:44 pm

Also, how can one prevent Haven from jumping into their nightmares?

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Re: Haven of Nightmares

Post by Sonus Decessus on Thu Mar 09, 2017 5:25 am

So, to answer your questions, his nostrils on the side of his neck, shoulders, and chest can't produce the fog. x'D only his mouth, lovely Arty :3
To clamp his mouth shut, well, this is Nature. If a small dragon can not do it, then it can not do it...? I refer to Nature with role playing, so technically speaking, the immovable small dragon would be killed.
Just like a bunny would be eaten by a lion.

No, I personally don't think this is considered GM, for Nature in true is not fair.

There are bigger dragons yes, there is magic, and there are clever little dragons on this site, so to say, Nature always finds a way
NExttttTTtT

I somewhat explained this to Occy.
So (humanly speaking) When you are dreaming, you do not know you are asleep, your body is shut off, and you are in a calm state. Mainly, when you dream you presume everything is a dream, correct?

If Haven were to walk into someone's dreams, they wouldn't really know about it, unless they know it's him. Or some thing they are just dreaming of the terrifying dragon and wake up anyway. They can block me by waking up, but not entering.

For one, Haven wouldn't and can't hurt anyone in their dream. It just can't physically happen. He's just an image in their mind. This really isn't that much of a strong power, its somewhat of a sub power, to talk to others or to gather information.

And, to answer a question you asked above, (a few posts ago I never answered sowwy) to prevent yourself from Haven's gas, you would have to think of things to calm you, true love, a fun time, or the will to live. Happy stuff!!!!
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Re: Haven of Nightmares

Post by Haven on Fri Mar 10, 2017 5:41 am

BAMP
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Re: Haven of Nightmares

Post by Artemise on Fri Mar 10, 2017 6:20 am

*accidentally gets glitter on self and sparkles in the sun*

You need more weaknesses though, 2 or 3 at least, because Haven himself is tall and strong - physically and mentally, plus his powers can trigger fight or flight in a dragon, cause fear so bad that the dragon can't move and all sorts of other weird stuff. Not to mention the demon...

And yes, nature is unfair, I agree, but that doesn't mean you can put weaknesses that only certain dragons can get at. For the sake of fairness in a fight perhaps you could put at least one weakness that everyone can strike at. At least one.

I've been asking you to add more for the past few posts but you didn't D;<<<

Just a suggestion, but you might want to make Haven a bit shorter, the dragons on here are rarely that tall and rping with an enormous dragon won't really be fun. Unless you're trying to get Haven to look intimidating? >.>

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Re: Haven of Nightmares

Post by Haven on Fri Mar 10, 2017 10:51 am

Sorry sorry!!! I thought I did lmaooooo

And I'll keep him large, I like bigger dragons, it's fine if he's the largest I don't mind.
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Re: Haven of Nightmares

Post by Sonus Decessus on Fri Mar 10, 2017 5:05 pm

bamp

That was a REALLY big weakness...

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Re: Haven of Nightmares

Post by Artemise on Fri Mar 10, 2017 5:22 pm

A big weakness that was necessary o3o

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Re: Haven of Nightmares

Post by Sonus Decessus on Thu May 18, 2017 10:57 am

~Out for Edits~

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Re: Haven of Nightmares

Post by Scortia on Thu Jun 08, 2017 5:32 am

Still out for edits?

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Re: Haven of Nightmares

Post by Sonus Decessus on Thu Jun 08, 2017 10:28 am

Yeaa

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