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Re: Haven of Nightmares

Post by Oculus on Tue Jan 10, 2017 12:10 am

First topic message reminder :

Species/Height:. So Eastern dragons are the long, thin type. Just curious, but when on all fours, are they that tall? Western dragons are the usual ones you know.

Position:. Update

Apperance:. Nice try, i see all those strengths you slipped in without putting em down below in the strength section. Fireproof, sense range, ect.... add them to strengths.

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Dreams: can a dragon resist him, or can they do nothing? Also, does this give away his/their location or not? And does Haven have to know where his intended target is?

Sensing Fear:. chemicals associated with fear are released in sweat usually. Anyway, range of sense?

Fear Gas: You cannot powerplay someone to be stuck in terror, as their character may be tough to break mentally. As for the gas, range, color, and how much produced per post/time limit.

Demon: There are no gods or goddesses on this site. So this is a transformation spell. What are the limits to this?

Strengths: add missing strengths
Remove not talking (recommendation only)

Weaknesses:
Soul: No gods or goddesses, so need to rework this a bit

Magic:
Summoning Self: No gods or goddesses on this site...

Bump when edits are done
i did this on iPad so if errors, sorry
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Re: Haven of Nightmares

Post by Oculus on Sat Nov 11, 2017 11:05 pm

Abilities
Chaos projection:
Way too much range, and way too fast an ability, as it’s over the speed of sound.

Cutting: you have no speed or range limits, or how long it it persists when pressed against scales.

Infusion: how many objects can be infused? How long does the charge last? What attributes increase when objects are impowered?

Spikes: how long are they? How far spaced apart? Are they like hair, or spaced out further?

Zap:how much pain/ discomfort? What do you mean it can’t become destructive?

You need to explain more about what chaos energy is. Is it only in certain areas, all around, or what?

Weaknesses: I see only limitations listed here. Convert the last ‘weakness’ with limits on how much energy it takes, and add a few weaknesses too.

Bump when edits are made.
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Re: Haven of Nightmares

Post by Oculus on Sat Jan 13, 2018 11:31 pm

Made edits Haven?
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Re: Haven of Nightmares

Post by Haven on Sun Jan 14, 2018 4:24 pm

Yeah.
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Re: Haven of Nightmares

Post by Oculus on Mon Jan 15, 2018 11:34 am

YOur range of 50 miles is way to large, needs to be cut down

Your weaknesses are all pertaining to your powers, which make sure it really only 1-2 weaknesses, so you need to add another 1-2.
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Re: Haven of Nightmares

Post by Haven on Tue Jan 16, 2018 4:12 pm

kay
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Re: Haven of Nightmares

Post by Oculus on Fri Jan 19, 2018 11:29 am

The range is still too large :/
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Re: Haven of Nightmares

Post by Haven on Sat Feb 03, 2018 9:10 pm

Okay I fixed the range, everything should look good now. Bump
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Re: Haven of Nightmares

Post by Oculus on Sat Feb 03, 2018 10:12 pm

~1/2 Approved~
(so arte can read things)
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Re: Haven of Nightmares

Post by Artemise on Sat Feb 10, 2018 9:53 pm

Approved.

My apologies for taking so long.

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