Gray

Name: Gray
Gender: Female
Type: Wyvern
Species: A Night Wyvern
Age: 134 years old
Date of Birth: 23 of April
Personality: Gray is usually kind, yet very rash and blunt, though her bluntness cannot be seen as hurtful, but rather funny and..yeah.Gray is very sensible and mature like to strangers, but very childish, weird,loud and crazy to her close friends and bff. She is also a very quiet,reserved person but also can be and extrovert to her close friends. Gray can be quite possessive and will naturally want to protect, stand for her bff and family.
Hobbies: Sleep(YES IT IS A HOBBY. ALL OF US LOVE SLEEPING NO LYING ARTE.)
Likes: Sleeping,Dream-creating for others and hanging out with bff

Dislikes: Roaches, boredom and blamers.
Fears: Fire, she got burned when she was 6. Kerosene, it causes fire.





Place of birth: In the area of Verula
Tribe: They are rogue.
Position: Nothing at the moment
Language: Um...Nothing at the moment.
Home: In an iceland.
Parents: Deceased.
Siblings: Nada.
Relatives: Noop nothing.
Mate: This area is available.
Offspring:This area is also available.
History:Gray was born midflight, which is to say, in the sky. She free-fell, screaming twice as loud as a newborn would(you would if you fell 3005 metres in the air), with her mother speeding up to catch her. Fortunately, she landed on a pile of soft gray wool. Thereafter, the pair lived in the area for six years, until a fire broke out. Her mother managed to get out due to her skills, but being a 6 year old wyvern, Gray got out with a burned hand. They then moved to an iceland. After 50 years of training, guidance and whatnot with her mum, her mum died after being poisoned by asian cobras.Her father died before she was born. He got killed in a war.


She would appear huge, with muscles everywhere. A few scars on her body, one on her cheek. Though they are not as noticeable as the one on her right hand. The skin was badly charred, with her muscles and tissues quite visible; most of it was healed.

Height: Gray is tall,with a whopping 91 feet
Length: 365 cm
Wingspan: 130 cm
Scale/Fur/Feathers: Gray has mostly a prussian blue, there are  specks of silver and white flaying across her scaly body.
Eyes: A dark violet.
Accessories: Nothing.
Armor: A handguard covers her ruined hand. It was given to her by her mother. The handguard is made to 'melt' against her scales to seem like her real scales.
Horns/Spikes: Gray's horns are located on either side of her head. It is in the colour of parchment, and looks not small, not large, but a medium ram's horn
Overall Appearance: Gray is a large dragon, whose body is littered with scars big and small. Her hand,hodden under her handguard, is ruined and burned. Gray would appear a menacing, tall tree to strangers.(in this case not a tree but something stronger) Her scales are a deep prussian blue, with flecks and specls of silver and white, which would change colours depending on the moon. If it waxes, her scales would be lighter. If it wanes, it would be darker. The prussian blue would be full moon. Her horns are just...there.


Gray can be able to put othets to sleep, one full of nightmares or dreams, depending on her. Every time she does that, her stamina and energy will be depleted by a fraction and she herself will sleep. She can also disappear and appear whenever she wants,though she can only do it at night.


Abilities: Gray can create dreams and nightmares for others. She would prefer creating dreams, but will create nightmares when necessary.
Strengths: Gray can fight well aerially and fairly well on land.
Weaknesses: Gray can be able to put others to sleep, one full of nightmares or dreams, depending on her. Every time she cause sleep, her stamina and energy will be depleted by a fraction(1/6)and she will sleep herself. Not only that, she can cause these things within 12 metres. And she can  appear and disappear whenever she wants,only during the night. She can forget her handguard and expose her burnt hand, thus opponents can easily defeat her by attacking her hand. Even thoigh she lives in an iceland, she cant go against ice dragons' ice.
Fighting Style:Gray's specialty is not aerial fighting
Magic: Gray can use magic,earth magic,though it is limited to a few months before she has too rest for 2 months before it can be replenished. With earth magic she can create earth statues, which can move. But they are easily shattered with a flick of a tail, so they can just buy a few seconds or minutes when she is attacked. Earth magic can also cause earthquakes. It is not as huge as a sendai magnitude 10.0 but rather just a measly 1.0.

My god, you're putting things in the wrong place xD You have a lot of things to change~

Personality:

'Gray is usually kind, yet very rash and blunt, though her bluntness cannot be seen as hurtful, but rather funny and..yeah. Gray is very sensible and mature like to strangers, but very childish, weird,loud and crazy to her close friends and bff. She is also a very quiet,reserved person but also can be and extrovert to her close friends. Gray can be quite possessive and will naturally want to protect, stand for her bff and family. '

Throw this into your personality section, and remember, you must have 5 sentences.

Origin, Culture and Family:

'She was born in the sky, while her mother was shifting lands. Luckily, she landed on a pile of soft, gray wool, shedded by sheep, so she wasnt harmed. That was how she got her name. Her family consisted of only her mother, who
gave birth to her after her father died.'

Also put in the wrong place, please put this in history!! >3<

Appearance:

'She would appear huge, with muscles everywhere. A few scars on her body, one on her cheek. Though they are not as noticeable as the one on her right hand. The skin was badly charred, with her muscles and tissues quite visible; most of it was healed.'

Again, put into the wrong place... This belongs in overall appearance. Also, as for height, I recommend lowering it, as it's not really fun for the other party to rp with a big dragon. Really. And there are 20 feet dragons on here, so yeah. I recommend lowering it to 60-80 feet, or 90+ if you want her tall, but this is just a suggestion.

Abilities and Strengths:

'Gray can be able to put othets to sleep, one full of nightmares or dreams, depending on her. Every time she does that, her stamina and energy will be depleted by a fraction. She can also disappear and appear whenever she wants,though she can only do it at night.'

;-;

Nightmare/dream creating thingy: This ability is super vague, please elaborate. So she can create nightmares, and dreams, what can be done to stop her? How close must she be to her target? Can she be kicked out of the target's dream? Stuff like that. Refer to Haven's app; he has a similar ability, and reading it will hopefully give you an idea of how to elaborate.

Haven's App

Weaknesses:

'Every time she cause sleep, her stamina and energy will be depleted by a fraction.'\

This is more of a limitation than a weakness, so change it. And a fraction? Define fraction. I also suggest adding more weaknesses. And keep in mind that when you create weaknesses, try to create weaknesses that ALL TYPES OF DRAGONS can use to their advantage.

Fighting Style: please don't tell me you put aerial combat because Arte's good at it as well...

Magic:

ELABORATE ;3; What type of shadow magic???

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Overall...needs more detail... Bump when edited.

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I'll do this in parts, just to make sure you're still here. My first suggestion would be to try to strengthen your personality. Really dig in deep as to what makes her unique. Include all her preferences, all her moods depending on different times, such as, how does she act when she's sleep? What's her favorite food? How's she act in battle? How does she feel about other tribes, or tribe life in general? Don't be afraid to be descriptive!