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Post by Mina the Star Queen on Thu Jun 15, 2017 11:59 am

Personality and the Basics

Name: Mina Lahidra
Gender: Female
Type: Hydra
Species: Comazylan Star Hydra
Age: 2034
Date of Birth: January 2nd
Personality: Mina is a very friendly and caring dragoness, though she's a bit clumsy and ignorant. Due to her history, she doesn't know a whole lot about the cultures of tribal dragons, and so, when confronted with dragons that are in tribes, or who have been in tribes, she is pretty good at making a fool of herself. However, Mina is also painfully unobservant of others around her, so while she may think she is doing a good thing, other dragons might be shaking their heads at her. She is also far too trusting with new dragons, and she often is, unfortunately, very nosy when meeting them, but doesn't realize. Others can find this attitude annoying, and even considered offensive by dragons, especially those from tribes like the Xoya or the Ki'sha, that have a very deep rooted history and culture. She is simply very blissfully unaware of other dragon cultures.

Considering she has three heads, one might wonder if each head has a different personality. Well, not really. It's kind of like the same person, but with three different heads. They can talk independently, or serve as a sort of hive mind, where they all speak at the same time. When they go into hivemind mode, their eyes will glow white. Otherwise, each head will act sort of as the same personality. There is no head that is the primary head, and they are all serve as one person. No head will want to do something the others don't, and none will disagree with each other, just like a hive mind. Often times, Mina will muse to herself out loud, and it will end up looking like a conversation between the multiple heads.

Mina can sometimes say a lot of weird nonsense that doesn't make sense. She'll sometimes end up staring off into space for prolonged periods of time, only to snap back to reality, and act like nothing had happened. She will also sometimes doodle odd symbols in the ground, and mutter what sounds like gibberish, or at least part of some obscure language no one's heard of. She also enjoys running, though, she appears a bit awkward due to her build. She also likes to due other activities that require a lot of exercise and lower body strength.

Hobbies: Generally, she enjoys sculpture in her spare time, but she also likes decorating, and often likes to decorate her pocket dimension.
Likes: She enjoys entertaining others, creating toys and other unique things, spending time with children, and having the freedom to do whatever she wishes. She is very independent and likes to keep it that way, which is one of the reasons she isn't part of a tribe. She has a keen interest in animals, and likes keeping them as companions, and she also likes to visit unique places she's never been before, as she enjoys traveling.
Dislikes: There isn't a whole lot that the young Mina doesn't like. However, she dislikes it when she watches others be abused, or hears about abuse. She finds it criminal, and wishes there was more she could do against it. She also dislikes fighting, and to an extent, arguments, though she only dislikes arguments when its arguing about nonsense, unlike arguments that are made to come to a compromise about something productive. Another thing she dislikes is storms, as she dislikes thunder, and mud.
Fears: She has an irrational fear of beetles and spiders, as well as a fear of combat and fighting.

Origin, Culture, and Family

Place of Origin: She was born somewhere in the Gaiyan forest, likely in a cave.
Tribe: Rogue
Position: N/A
Language: Primarily universal, though she does know a bit of Xoyan and Arretiz, still learning.
Home: She is a wanderer, and lives wherever is convenient. Her current home is one of the forests of Shveki.
Parents: Unkown
Siblings: Unknown
Relatives: Unknown
Mate: N/A
Offspring: N/A
History: Will write this out later.

Physical Appearance and Accessories

Height: She is about 27'3" from foot to shoulder, and 38'1" from foot to head.
Length: Roughly 72'2"
Wingspan: N/A
Scale/Fur/Feathers: She has green and white scales
Eyes: Can glow white, but normally are amber.
Accessories: N/A
Armor: N/A
Horns/Spikes: She has these green antennae on each of her heads.
Overall Appearance: For some odd reason the image rotates and I have no idea why.


Abilities and Strengths

Abilities:

Teleportation(Short Range): If Mina needs to escape from danger, she is able to teleport herself up to 10 meters away. This takes most of her energy, and requires at least a 2 post warm up time. She can only due it twice per topic.

Strengths: She is physically very strong, and often relies on her brute strength a lot to get her out of tough situations.

Weaknesses: She doesn't know how to fight, and other than her claws, she has no natural weapons. She is a scaleless hydra, and her skin is very soft, and easily ripped apart. She can also be overwhelmed by smaller dragons, and she is pretty slow and clumsy, so running from danger often doesn't end in success.

Fighting Style: She doesn't fight, she doesn't know how.

Magic: N/A
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Post by Mina the Star Queen on Fri Jun 16, 2017 5:26 pm

READY FOR GRADING
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Post by Oculus on Fri Jun 16, 2017 9:46 pm

For your long range teleportation, being able to teleport anywhere is overpowered, even if not for combat. You need to set an energy range/distance, and it cannot be instantaneous, even if not in combat.
For her pocket dimension, can others enter it, does the portal disappear, how long does it take her to summon it? Even if not "in combat" it can still be used to pop out of nowhere if only she and no one else can enter and she can create it instantly.
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Post by Scortia on Fri Jun 16, 2017 10:04 pm

Bump

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Post by Oculus on Sun Jun 18, 2017 9:32 am

Why does the farthest distance tsk ever one less warmup than the previous?

And for pocket dimension, I would add like a few seconds after she enters for it to disappear so hen csnt just poof mid combat.
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Post by Scortia on Sun Jun 18, 2017 9:50 am

The pocket dimension can't be opened in combat o3o.

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[21:39:56] Silhouette : (Why the pic?)
[21:40:05] * Blaze isnt over dramatic, he just doesnt like ardent being "one" with Scort.
[21:40:13] Elyn Entezz : Because they're hetalia trash :@

Mixups are Fun:
[21:53:14 19/11/2016]@ Oculus : are you guys mixing up Hetalia with Hentai?
[21:53:26 19/11/2016] Skylar : (*cough blaze/ardent*)
[21:53:31 19/11/2016] Silhouette : (I think that was it Oculus)


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"Man, I wish my art didn't suck." - Scortia, commenting on her own art
"Yep, there's wind." - Connie Maheswaran
"YO, WHO'S BABY IS THIS?" - John Laurens, in a comic I read
"so i am basically right." - SolsticeEquinox, about coding with Acer
"Dun worry about it." - Scortia, on various occasions
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Post by Oculus on Sun Jun 18, 2017 9:55 am

But people's versions of combat are different, one person charging to taste know may not be defined as combat as they have not hits you yet, meaning you could just poof without a warning. A few second time warmup or after she enters means this could be avoided.
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Post by Scortia on Sun Jun 18, 2017 9:57 am

Bump.

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[21:39:56] Silhouette : (Why the pic?)
[21:40:05] * Blaze isnt over dramatic, he just doesnt like ardent being "one" with Scort.
[21:40:13] Elyn Entezz : Because they're hetalia trash :@

Mixups are Fun:
[21:53:14 19/11/2016]@ Oculus : are you guys mixing up Hetalia with Hentai?
[21:53:26 19/11/2016] Skylar : (*cough blaze/ardent*)
[21:53:31 19/11/2016] Silhouette : (I think that was it Oculus)


Famous Quotes:

"Man, I wish my art didn't suck." - Scortia, commenting on her own art
"Yep, there's wind." - Connie Maheswaran
"YO, WHO'S BABY IS THIS?" - John Laurens, in a comic I read
"so i am basically right." - SolsticeEquinox, about coding with Acer
"Dun worry about it." - Scortia, on various occasions
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Re: Mina the Star Queen

Post by Oculus on Sun Jun 18, 2017 10:00 am

*rubs chin in thought*

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Post by Artemise on Sun Jun 18, 2017 6:06 pm

ONE LAST THING I PROMISE

Teleportation - 'she is able to teleport herself at least 20 meters away' How far can she go then?

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Post by Scortia on Sun Jun 18, 2017 6:15 pm

Updated

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[21:39:56] Silhouette : (Why the pic?)
[21:40:05] * Blaze isnt over dramatic, he just doesnt like ardent being "one" with Scort.
[21:40:13] Elyn Entezz : Because they're hetalia trash :@

Mixups are Fun:
[21:53:14 19/11/2016]@ Oculus : are you guys mixing up Hetalia with Hentai?
[21:53:26 19/11/2016] Skylar : (*cough blaze/ardent*)
[21:53:31 19/11/2016] Silhouette : (I think that was it Oculus)


Famous Quotes:

"Man, I wish my art didn't suck." - Scortia, commenting on her own art
"Yep, there's wind." - Connie Maheswaran
"YO, WHO'S BABY IS THIS?" - John Laurens, in a comic I read
"so i am basically right." - SolsticeEquinox, about coding with Acer
"Dun worry about it." - Scortia, on various occasions
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Post by Artemise on Sun Jun 18, 2017 6:27 pm

-- 2/2 Approved

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