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Post by Frostwing on Sun Jul 09, 2017 6:13 pm

Personality and the Basics


Name: Frost Bluewing  ( name was giving on his appearence.)
Gender: Male
Type: Western Feral dragon.
Species: Ice dragon
Age: 24 (Just recently left his parental nest)

Date of Birth: 7 november
Personality: Frost is curious by nature. He likes to stick his nose in evrything, he does not know. Just to discover and learn new things. He is friendly and always willing to talk, yet he has quiet the explosive mood when someone threatens something or someone he likes. He is verry loyal and respects older dragons, trying to learn from their expierence.
Hobbies: Reading, surfing,diving,swimming, strolling around in nature, gaming, traveling, learning and lissening to the sound of breaking waves.
Likes: Exploring, playing with other dragons, hunting , art, wrighting, flying,
Dislikes: Politics, Fire, humans  Wink , lava/magma
Fears: Spiders, Lava/magma


Origin, Culture, and Family


Place of Origin: unkown
Tribe: (Kaamil
Position: Kailin
Language: Kenarun
Home: Lives close to the sea.
Parents:  Lissandra a western purple Poisen dragoness, and Morituri a western black scaled ice dragon ( both unkown on this website.and both deceased)
Siblings: no
Relatives: no
Mate: not yet
Offspring: no
History: He was living happily with his family on unkown ice desert. They where forced to leave those lands when the earth started bleeding. Lava serounded the den. All of his den died including his parents . He was the only one to escape to another land.  


Physical Appearance and Accessories


Height: From my clawls to the top of my head i'm 4.3 meters or 14.1ft tall.
Length: From the tip of my tail to the tip of my snout. I'm 5 meters long or 16.4ft .
Wingspan: From tip to tip his wingspan is 6.1 meters or 20.01ft
Scale/Fur/Feathers: His body is completly black scaled, but his wings and the spikes on his back and tail are ice blue
Eyes: Dark brown, but change when mad or excited in ice blue.
Accessories: no
Armor: No, prefers the protection of his own scales.
Horns/Spikes: He has spikes over his back and on the tip of his tail.

Overall Appearance:



Abilities and Strengths


Abilities: Like a fire dragon can spit fire, he can spit a blue flame that is so cold it burns. The average tempeture of that flame lies at minus 45 Celcius and can reatch 3 meters or9.84 feet far.
Strengths: His physical strenght is average, he uses his speed and agility more then brute muscle. His mental state is strong and proud, His scales protect him from the cold and is highly resistible from colds.
Weaknesses: When he loses focus he panics quickly and start making mistakes. He cant handle heat or to warm weather. 30 Celcius or above. Because he is not an expierienced fighter stamina is one of his biggest weaknesses. He is stubborn and likes to be challanged but that often brings him in difficult situations.
Fighting Style: he can fight aswell on the ground as in the air, but prefers in the air where he can use his speed and agility to attack quickly. Even if he is not the big powerhouse, he prefers to fight close, where his agilitie and speed come in use.
Magic: He is able to use ice magic but has only learned the basics. He can create an ice barrier. The ice barrier is shaped like a dome and only covers one part of his body. he can protect his front but his sides and back would still be open. If he covers his side the rest will be open. If he covers his back the rest will still be open. It can deflect Projectiles but is weak agianst direct hits. ( Think about tank armor created to deflect but a direct hit shatters it imididiatly. ) He can create things of ice with a maximum distance of 1 meter away. what he creates is not strong and can be shatterd easily with a clawl or tail, but can be annoying in a close combat fight, as it can be a good distraction. What he creates depens on what he has in mind.


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Re: Frost

Post by Oculus on Sun Jul 09, 2017 6:40 pm

Abilities:
Hello frost! For your bleu (you mean blue?) fire, how cold can it get? How far can he breath it?

Weaknesses:
You need to add three more weaknesses

Magic:
How strong is the ice barrier? How big is it? Also, how can he defend himself from the other magic?

Bump when edits are made (just reply to this by saying bump, make edits by clicking the edit button at the top of your post)

Also, I fixed your image.
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Post by Frostwing on Mon Jul 10, 2017 4:46 am

bumb " also if you find grammatical erros. and i hope there are non but probably are. please let me know so i can change it.
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Re: Frost

Post by Oculus on Mon Jul 10, 2017 12:52 pm

~1/2 Approved~


Grammar:
There are some capitalization things, but nothing too severe. And it's all very understandable so I wouldn't worry too much about it.

History: Dessert should be desert. First one is like ice cream, the second is like lots of sand and hot.
Strengths: Mussel should be muscle. First one is a sea creature.

You are doing well for not speaking English natively, so don't stress, its all very very understandable. ^^
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