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Post by Athena on Mon Oct 24, 2016 11:14 am

Personality and the Basics


Name: Athena
Gender: Female
Type: Wyvern
Species: Ice Wyvern/Artic Tribe Wyvern
Age: 224
Date of Birth: December 25th
Personality:

Athena's temper is perhaps her most notable trait. She has a glower that would turn men to stone, and a shouting voice that causes the ground to shake. Straightforward and blunt, she comes off as rude and spiteful to many. Athena doesn't enjoy having her time wasted. At all.

If one where to persist and get to know her, they'd find Athena is a sassy, hot-headed female with a lust for adventure. The call of the horizon is something she cannot ignore. Inquisitive and perhaps a bit nosy, she dislikes having secrets kept from her, so if one were to not tell her something, she'd probably smash their head in.

Athena prefers to speak using her fangs and claws rather then her words. She has trouble socializing and isn't one to give speeches. Speaking through actions rather then words to her is important to her, it proves she can trust you. Her social awkwardness can make her seem cold and standoffish, but unfortunately nothing can be done about that.

Athena has a soft spot for younglings, as she has a clutch of her one, or had. She is patient and motherly around hatchlings, adoring a little game of tag or hide and seek. When around them, her softer side emerges and she becomes a different dragoness. Kind, fun-loving and thoughtful towards the younger ones, you wouldn't think she was such a brutal fighter.

In battle, Athena is a skilled but merciless fighter. She is a ruthless and vicious dragon who would make a fine and frightening asset in a war. She has a guilty love of watching her enemies fall, something she won't admit.

Hobbies: Athena spends most of her time sparring and observing the territories from afar. She also enjoys star-gazing and practicing aerial acrobatics.

Likes: Athena loves the thrill of battle and the taste of victory, making her a competitive dragoness. She loves to win, especially in spars. She enjoys a good rough and tumble, but also enjoys a quiet night under the sky, star-gazing.

Being a bit nosy, she does tend to eavesdrop as well, listening in on 'private' conversations to sate her curiosity.

Dislikes:

Athena loathes boredom. If you sit her in a blank room with nothing to do or look at she'll slowly lose her sanity. She prefers to be doing things, be it sparring, battling or flying. When the rush of adrenaline isn't there, she tends to be grumpy.

Athena dislikes boring dragons, dragons who have nothing to say or add to a conversation, if there's one to be had. She hates pompous dragons, especially males.

Fears:

Athena has an irrational fear of eels. Sea-snakes are fine, it's just the eels that frighten her. She hates the way they move and slither.

She also has a fear of fire. Around campfires and the like, she's fine, she's not outright afraid of flames. However, she is more cautious around fire-based Dragons and large flames, having a particular weakness to it.

Origin, Culture, and Family


Place of Origin: Athena was born in the northern tip of Layrian, at Cashra's lake.
Tribe:She's rogue.
Position:  Rogue Language: She only speaks Universal.
Home:  She doesn't really live anywhere, she just finds any random spot and sleeps in it for the night.
Parents: Faera (Mother) Titan (Father)
Siblings:  Hera (Sister, deceased)
Relatives: Daydris (Uncle, hunting her down)
Mate: Nebula (she has lost contact with him) So otherwise Single
Offspring: She once had hatchlings, but she has now lost contact with them
History:

She will keep this secret.

Physical Appearance and Accessories


While in her Glacier form, Athena's eyes become a brilliant white, and her scales a shimmering blue. Her horns, feathers and tail all gain the appearance of being ice, and her tail becomes serrated with icy plates. She gains a blue marking around her eye that swirls below it and stops at the base of her horn.

Height: About sixty foot tall
Length: 80 Foot
Wingspan: 160 Foot
Scale/Fur/Feathers: her scales are white, and the single line of feathers on her back a brilliant blue.
Eyes:  A brilliant blue.
Accessories:
Armor:
Horns/Spikes: Anetha has brilliant blue horns, four of them, one set smaller then the other that rest on the base of her chin, the other sits normally on the back of her head.
Overall Appearance:

Athena's scales are white in colour. They are closely shaped to shark scales. She has feathers starting just behind her four horns, travelling down her neck, spine and a quarter way down her shoulders, ending a few inches from the tip of her tail. She has extremely bright, light blue wing membrances, claws, feathers and horns that glow at night.
She has Bright blue eyes the colour of her feathers.
She has a long tail that has a circular half moon on each end, with a hole in the middle of each 'half moon' which she uses as a deadly weapon that can knock out her enemies with a lucky hit.
She has many scars adorning her features and her body, the most notable one the mark that comes down over her left eye.

Abilities and Strengths


Abilities:
Ice Spikes: On Athena tail are a set of silvery blue spikes that can extend and fire at will. They resemble a Deadly Nadder's spikes (How To Train Your Dragon) and can be shot up to twenty meters away. They are quite sharp and can pierce flesh, but it has trouble with armor. This applies to soft-skinned Dragons, but with harder-skinned Dragons the spikes will merely bounce off the hide. These spikes can reach targets from up to twenty feet away and work much like arrows in the way they move through the air.

Ice Breath: Athena can blast a bright blue flame that freezes instead of burns. It can freeze water solid and can coat a tree or stone in ice. Dragons that are hit by it won't be harmed too bad, just numbed and slightly pained. If it gets into their eyes or nose it can cause blurred vision and uncomfortable breathing, which can cause panic. This ability is more to intimidate foes and cause them to panic then anything else. This ability can affect dragons up to twenty feet away, although the farther you are from it, the less effective it is, forcing her to close in to use it. It can freeze a small lake having about a twenty meter area measure, tops, and can freeze a solid object the size of a boulder, tops. The ice will melt after about five minutes. If she uses it on a lake, she can only freeze the surface of the water, meaning everything else underneath will be unaffected save for being trapped under the lake. The ice ten inches thick and can be easily broken.

Strengths:

Aim: Athena has terrific aim with her spikes, and can pull off hitting very small targets if she concentrates hard enough, with a bit of luck thrown in there.

Intelligence: Athena is very, very intelligent when it comes to battle strategies. Having experience in the field, she has great judging skills when it comes to the movements of the enemy. If you want to plan an attack, she's your gal.

Fighting abilities: She's an incredible fighter, able to take on several opponents at once and fight comfortably. Years of experience have led her to having stamina and strength in battle, learning how to intimidate foes and judge their movements. She has the temper of an angry bull, and can fight like one.

Weaknesses:


Bad Temper: Athena has a very short temper, meaning she is more likely to lash out at others then most, or to snap or make snide comments. She will attack without a second thought, especially if she is taunted or if somebody hits a nerve in her emotional side. This can lead to bad decisions in battle, impulsive moves that can cost her a potential winning attack.

Speed: Anetha has less speed then she has strength. She can go quite fast, but not enough to be considered 'lightning quick.' In the air, she's graceful and born for the skies, but on the ground, she finds it harder to fight. She's quite slow at turning, having to jump and spin to turn quickly, which unbalances her for several seconds.

Water: Athena can't swim. She's never learned. Which means if she falls into the water, pushed by an opponent or a misstep, she'll drown without luck or help.

Weakness To Magic: Anetha succumbs to spells and things like that easier then other dragons. She has a particular weakness to just general magic for some reason, adding to her dislike of using it.

Tail Spikes: Athena spikes aren't unlimited. They eventually run out. They are regrown in the same way a lizard grows back a limb, except with a little magic thrown in to speed up the process. It can take up to a day for all of her spikes to replenish, so Athena must use them wisely. She can fire up to thirty at a time -since they are quite small it's easy to store loads in her tail- but once they're all used, they're all used. (30 per topic)

Fire: While other elements will still hurt, Athena both fears and is exceptionally weak to fire. It will take less time for any fire-related abilities to use their effects on her, and they will do worse damage then normal.


Fighting Style:
Athena  is a ground combatant mainly, but can adjust her style. She can zip about in the air firing ice and spikes at her target, but she prefers to go in and dig her fangs into someone's neck.

Athena is brutal in short ranged combat. She will tear, slash, bite, gnaw, claw, do whatever she can to get her opponent on the ground. Possibly dead. She can duck, swerve, lean sharply, whatever she needs to do to win a fight. However, this leaves her more open to attacks and less reaction time then a long ranged dragon.
Magic: (Is your draconiforme capable of magic? What kind of magic?) Athena can use magic, but she uses it very little. She uses tiny bits to speed up the regrowth of her spikes, but ninety nine percent of it is channeled into her Glacier Form.


While in this form Athena becomes quite powerful.

Glacier Breath: Athena breath changes completely. It still contains the same abilities as her previous breath, except it is a lot sore on contact and looks more like wind then just straight up blue fire. It has a bit more coverage then her normal glacier breath, so she can hit larger spots on bigger targets. This ability can reach up to thirty feet away, and again, the farther you are from Athena, the less it hurts.

Ice Armor: Athena gains icy plates on her shoulders, tail and around her face. These can withstand hits from rocks and spears, but any more powerful and the armor will begin to crack, then break.

Glacier Clasp: Athena, when she clasps her wings together and then opens them, can send a wall of chilly air in all directions, stopping larger dragons in their tracks and causing smaller ones to stumble. This can reach dragons up to thirty feet away.

Glacier Wall: Athena can cause a wall of ice to appear in front of her, deflecting attacks. This, however, can only defend her against small attacks, such as a wall of weak spears. Any stronger and the wall will crack, then shatter. The wall is her height, is about forty inches thick and lasts for about fifteen seconds depending on the power of the attacks.



Weaknesses:

Limited Amount of Time: At the maximum, Athena can last in this form for about 5 minutes (4 posts)

Energy Cost: When she switches back, Athena will pass out due to the massive amount of magic being used.

Loses A Bit Of Her Sanity: When she's in this form, Athena goes a bit.. insane. She will be unable to tell friend from foe, as the magic rushing through her veins will strike her brain and charge it into overdrive. She will lose all sense of time, and she cannot stop moving. If she's held in a locked room or something like that she will throw herself against the walls and shriek her head off. Anetha's only goal is to do what she wanted to do before shifting, and when she's completed that goal she will go on a rampage.

Forced Shifting: Athena, in times of great stress and rage, will be forced to shift, as her Glacier Form is a form of anger and loss of sanity. This can cause damage to her, such as amnesia and physical and mental weakness for several days. She can also be forced to shift by use of magic. By this I mean, if somebody went in and messed around with her mental state or just in general her brain, this can also force her to shift unexpectantly.


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Re: Athena, Ice Wyvern (Application)

Post by Neru on Sun Nov 06, 2016 11:49 am

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Post by Oculus on Sun Nov 06, 2016 2:46 pm

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Re: Athena, Ice Wyvern (Application)

Post by Neru on Thu Nov 10, 2016 8:32 pm

Hello! My name is Neru, and I'll be checking your app today. Please realize that anything and everything I say is not meant as a shot or fault against you, I'm simply trying to get your app in order so that we can all RP together. ^>^ Your first problem is one that encompasses the entire app, so I'm putting it here. All the information on the app that we gave you, AKA, everything in parentheses, isn't supposed to be  there. It'd be lovely if you could remove it!

Anetha wrote:
Personality and the Basics


Name: (Your draconiforme’s name) Anetha
Gender: (Their gender) Female
Type: (What kind of draconiforme are they? Eastern dragon, western dragon, drake, amphiptere, wyvern?) Wyvern
Species: (What kind are they? May be anything from your own imagination to something from media.) IceWing Ahh, you're from DRF. Well, here we don't have  things like "IceWings" or "NightWings". This is a tribe that lives in the arctic region, and therefore until we have a leader that defines a name for hte tribe, it's simpley "The Arctic Tribe".
Age: (Your character’s age.) 25 Just as a note, wyverns can reach about 3000 years of age, if I remember correctly. This isn't in the rules yet, but we're adding it soon. I apologize that it wasn't there before.
Date of Birth: (When were they born? No need to list year, just month and day) December 25TH
Personality: (What does your character act like? Must be at least 5 sentences.)

When you first meet her, Anetha is very, very quiet. Silent. Cold. Dangerous. She will remain silent unless she deems the dragon fit to speak to. Since you can't see her beneath her hooded cloak and mask, it makes her quite intimidating at first glance. She is very secretive and beneath her hood she can be interperated as 'judgemental.'

She is very formidable, and she is quite passive-aggressive, and has more patience then what she once had. She still has the temper of a bull, though.

Anetha has a soft spot for hatchlings, having once been a mother and mate, and when a young one is in trouble she will leap in to defend it.

However, if you somehow manage to fly past the hard, icy outer shell that shields her heart, you find a protective, humorous friend. A lonely beast that just wants company deep down, but is too frightened to let it show.

She will never tell anybody her story. Never. Because she cannot trust and she cannot love another enough to let them hear what really happened to her.

Hobbies: (What does your character do in their free time?) Anetha often practises flying or fighting in her free time, most likely the two mixed together. She enjoys practising aireal combat the most. That's all she really does. Stealing is another of her pastimes, and listening in on conversations.


Likes: (What does your character enjoy? At least 3) Anetha enjoys combat and listening in on conversations. Fighting is the only thing she knows and really loves. All she ever had. All she ever will have. Thieving is a must, and she finds it quite enjoyable. The thrill of doing something you're not supposed to is sickeningly enjoyable to her, as it reminds her of the rush of battle.

Anetha also enjoys.. watching. Observing. Not stalking, exactly, but.. listening in is quite the pastime, as she often creeps into guarded places to hear things, rather then just listening in on patrols or anything.. normal.

Dislikes: (Is there anything your character dislikes? At least 3)

Anetha dislikes looking at the stars, because it reminds her of him. The one she loved. It brings pain and daggers to her heart.

She HATES sitting around and doing nothing. Even for a short period of time. She is a very active dragoness and prefers to be on the move. If she sits around, she starts itching and fidgeting, and ends up grumpy. Even sleeping is a problem for her, no matter how tired she is.

Anetha also hates having.. deep conversations. She doesn't like showing her emotions to others, even if it's the smallest of things that have anything to do with sadness, pity or grief. It hurts her because it brings back painful, yet fond memories of her friends.

Anetha hates magic. She thinks it corrupts and kills -due to what happened with her uncle- and drives creatures crazy. It is too easy to have more and more power, in her opinion. It is too easy to fall into the circle of getting more powerful and more powerful, and more reliant on magic and more reliant on magic.
Fears: (What is your character afraid of? At least 2)

Anetha's BIGGEST fear is somebody seeing her face, recognising her, or finding out who she truly is, because she made a promise to herself that after hurting so many others after basically appearing dead, she wouldn't hurt another with her real personality.

Anetha also has an irrational fear of eels. They send shivers up her spine and make her edgy and paranoid whenever she looks at them. Snakes she has no problem with, its just the eels that frighten her.

Origin, Culture, and Family


Place of Origin: (Where on Layrian were you born?) She was born outside of Layrian. This is a template error, it's supposed to be where were you born, including the other two continents. You do need a location on this planet.
Tribe: (Are they part of a tribe, or rogue?) She's rogue.
Position: (What title/rank does your draconiforme hold?) Rogue, or, as a more personal title, she's known as, "Ice-Shrouded." Language: (What languages does your dragon know?) English, and her family language, which is Deagrat. But she doesn't use her native language anymore.
Home: (Where do they live now? Mountains, grassland, etc.?) She doesn't really live anywhere, she just finds any random spot and sleeps in it for the night.
Parents: (Who were their parents?) Faera (Mother) Titan (Father)
Siblings: (Did they have any siblings?) Hera (Sister, deceased)
Relatives: (Any other family we should know about?) Jarek (Uncle, hunting her down)
Mate: (Do they have a mate?) Nebula (she has lost contact with him) So otherwise Single
Offspring: (Do they have any offspring?) She once had hatchlings, but she has now lost contact with them
History:(What is your character’s history? Optional)

She will keep this a secret.

Physical Appearance and Accessories

Anetha's scales are white in colour. They are closely shaped to shark scales, making her faster in the air. She has feathers starting just behind her four horns, travelling down her neck, spine and a quarter way down her shoulders, ending a few inches from the tip of her tail. She has extremely bright, light blue wing membrances, claws, feathers and horns that glow at night.
She has Bright blue eyes the colour of her feathers.
Anetha's body is covered by a sinister black cloak, and underneath that she has silver plates on her legs and tail. Her snout is covered by a silvery helmet. She has a long tail that has a circular half moon on each end, with a hole in the middle of each 'half moon' which she uses as a deadly weapon that can knock out her enemies with a lucky hit.

While in her Glacier form, Anetha's eyes become a brilliant white, and her scales a shimmering blue. Her horns, feathers and tail all gain the appearance of being ice, and her tail becomes serrated with icy plates. She gains a marking around her eye that travels below it and stops at the other end of it.

Height: (How tall is your draconiforme?) About sixty foot tall
Length: (How long are they from head to tail?) 80 Foot
Wingspan: (What is their total wingspan?) 160 Foot
Scale/Fur/Feathers: (What color are they? How do they look?) Her colour is unknown, but for OOC's sake, she is a pearly white.  Her feathers are a brilliant, brilliant blue that appears to glow in the sunlight.
Eyes: (What color are their eyes?) A brilliant blue.
Accessories: (Do they wear anything? Scarfs, satchels, whatnot.) a cloak that covers her entire body, and underneath are silver plates that cover her legs and tail, as well as a helmet hidden beneath her hood.
Armor: (Does your character wear any kind of armor?) She wears a coat of plated silver armour that cannot be seen unless the cloak is lifted. It is very light, and can withstand arrows and a few good shoves, but that's about it before it starts to get dented. It is fireproof.
Horns/Spikes: (Does your draconiforme have any spikes or horns? What do they look like? What color are they? Where are they located?) Anetha has brilliant blue horns, four of them, one set smaller then the other that rest on the base of her chin, the other sits normally on the back of her head.
Overall Appearance: (What is your draconiforme’s appearance? Anything not mentioned above. Pictures acceptable.)

Nothing else to say really xD

Abilities and Strengths


Abilities: (What kinds of powers and abilities does your draconiforme posssess?)

Ice Spikes: On Anetha's tail are a set of silvery blue spikes that can extend and fire at will. They resemble a Deadly Nadder's spikes (How To Train Your Dragon) and can be shot up to twenty metres away. They are quite sharp and can pierce flesh, but it has trouble with armor.

Ice Breath: Anetha can blast a bright blue flame that freezes instead of burns. It can freeze water solid and can coat a tree or stone in ice. Dragons that are hit by it won't be harmed too bad, just numbed and slightly pained. If it gets into their eyes or nose it can cause blurred vision and uncomfortable breathing, which can cause panic. This ability is more to intimidate foes and cause them to panic then anything else.


Strengths: (What strengths does your draconiforme hold? Mental and physical)

Aim: Anetha has terrific aim with her spikes, and can pull off hitting very small targets if she concentrates hard enough, with a bit of luck thrown in there.

Intelligence: Anetha is very, very intelligent.


Weaknesses: (Are there any weaknesses your draconiforme has? Must have at least +1 more weaknesses than there are strengths)

Talking: Anetha can not stand up in front of a crowd, be it of five dragons or five hundred, and deliver a speech or anything like that. She becomes unnerved and stammers uncontrollably.

Socialising: Anetha has a hard time at parties or just in general socialising with others. She tries to stay as quiet and as far back as possible. She hates talking too much, so things can turn.. unpleasant in a conversation when she gets nervous and snappy.

Bad Temper: Anetha has a very short temper, meaning she is more likely to lash out at others then most, or to snap or make snide comments. She will attack without a second thought, especially if she is taunted or if somebody hits a nerve in her emotional side.

Speed: Anetha has less speed then she has strength. She can go quite fast, but not too fast. The best she can achieve is fifty miles an hour straight ahead.

Water: Anetha can't swim. She's never learned.

Weakness To Magic: Anetha succumbs to spells and things like that easier then other dragons. She has a particular weakness to just general magic for some reason, adding to her dislike of using it.

Tail Spikes: Anetha's spikes aren't unlimited. They eventually run out. They are regrown in the same way a lizard grows back a limb, except with a little magic thrown in to speed up the process. It can take up to a day for all of her spikes to replenish, so Anetha must use them wisely. She can fire up to thirty at a time -since they are quite small it's easy to store loads in her tail- but once they're all used, they're all used.


Fighting Style: (How do they fight? Are they aerial combatants? Long ranged, short ranged, magic wielders, barbaric fighters?)

Anetha is an aerial combatant mainly, but can adjust her style. She can zip about in the air firing ice and spikes at her target, and can fire from a distance. But her favorite style is short ranged.

Anetha is brutal in short ranged combat. She will tear, slash, bite, gnaw, claw, do whatever she can to get her opponent on the ground. Possibly dead. She can duck, swerve, lean sharply, whatever she needs to do to win a fight. However, this leaves her more open to attacks and less reaction time then a long ranged dragon.
Magic: (Is your draconiforme capable of magic? What kind of magic?) Anetha can use magic, but she uses it very little. She uses tiny bits to speed up the regrowth of her spikes, but ninety nine percent of it is channeled into her Glacier Form.



All photos need to either be credit to their original source, AKA, the artist, or removed.

While in this form Anetha becomes quite powerful. And very dangerous.

Glacier Breath: Anetha's breath changes completely. (Look at the picture for reference) It still contains the same abilities as her previous breath, except it is a bit more sore on contact and looks more like wind then just straight up blue fire. It has a bit more coverage then her normal glacier breath, so she can hit larger spots on bigger targets.

Ice Armor: Anetha gains icy plates on her shoulders, tail and around her face.

Glacier Clasp: Anetha, when she clasps her wings together and then opens them, can send a wall of chilly air in all directions, stopping larger dragons in their tracks and causing smaller ones to stumble.

Glacier Wall: Anetha can cause a wall of ice to appear in front of her, deflecting attacks.



Weaknesses:

Limited Amount of Time: At the maximum, Anetha can last in this form for about twenty minutes. This can easily be abused. This either needs to be lowered in time or you need to make it a post count.

Energy Cost: When she switches back, Anetha will pass out due to the massive amount of magic being used.


Loses A Bit Of Her Sanity: When she's in this form, Anetha goes a bit.. insane. She will be unable to tell friend from foe, as the magic rushing through her veins will strike her brain and charge it into overdrive. She will lose all sense of time, and she cannot stop moving. If she's held in a locked room or something like that she will throw herself against the walls and shriek her head off. Anetha's only goal is to do what she wanted to do before shifting, and when she's completed that goal she will go on a rampage.

Forced Shifting: Anetha, in times of great stress and rage, will be forced to shift, as her Glacier Form is a form of anger and loss of sanity. This can cause damage to her, such as amnesia and physical and mental weakness for several days. She can also be forced to shift by use of magic. By this I mean, if somebody went in and messed around with her mental state or just in general her brain, this can also force her to shift unexpectantly.

All in all, good app. You need to get more specific on your powers, and considering you have 6, if we include magic, you should probably tone it down slightly. All of that could make you unfairly powerful in combat with other members. If you don't want to tone it down, I'd suggest more combat related weaknesses. You certainly have a lot right now, but a lot of them also have very little to do with combat.
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Post by Athena on Sat Nov 19, 2016 12:28 pm

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I think I checked everything xD
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Re: Athena, Ice Wyvern (Application)

Post by Neru on Sat Nov 19, 2016 8:42 pm

Please remove everything in parentheses. Otherwise, the rest is fine.
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Re: Athena, Ice Wyvern (Application)

Post by Scortia on Wed Nov 30, 2016 5:11 pm

I will be taking over app, due to the removal of Neru as moderator. (Also Neru's pretty busy and I dun wanna pressure her.) I will be doing this in sections to keep myself from going insane, so first I'll cover your overall app, then your magic.

Anetha wrote:
Personality and the Basics


Name: Anetha
Gender: Female
Type: Wyvern
Species: Ice Wyvern/Artic Tribe Wyvern
Age: 224
Date of Birth: December 25th
Personality:

When you first meet her, Anetha is very, very quiet. Silent. Cold. Dangerous. She will remain silent unless she deems the dragon fit to speak to. Since you can't see her beneath her hooded cloak and mask, it makes her quite intimidating at first glance. She is very secretive and beneath her hood she can be interperated as 'judgemental.'

She is very formidable, and she is quite passive-aggressive, and has more patience then what she once had. She still has the temper of a bull, though.

Anetha has a soft spot for hatchlings, having once been a mother and mate, and when a young one is in trouble she will leap in to defend it.

However, if you somehow manage to fly past the hard, icy outer shell that shields her heart, you find a protective, humorous friend. A lonely beast that just wants company deep down, but is too frightened to let it show.

She will never tell anybody her story. Never. Because she cannot trust and she cannot love another enough to let them hear what really happened to her.

Hobbies: Anetha often practises flying or fighting in her free time, most likely the two mixed together. She enjoys practising aireal combat the most. That's all she really does. Stealing is another of her pastimes, and listening in on conversations.


Likes: Anetha enjoys combat and listening in on conversations. Fighting is the only thing she knows and really loves. All she ever had. All she ever will have. Thieving is a must, and she finds it quite enjoyable. The thrill of doing something you're not supposed to is sickeningly enjoyable to her, as it reminds her of the rush of battle.

Anetha also enjoys.. watching. Observing. Not stalking, exactly, but.. listening in is quite the pastime, as she often creeps into guarded places to hear things, rather then just listening in on patrols or anything.. normal.

Dislikes:
Anetha dislikes looking at the stars, because it reminds her of him. The one she loved. It brings pain and daggers to her heart.

She HATES sitting around and doing nothing. Even for a short period of time. She is a very active dragoness and prefers to be on the move. If she sits around, she starts itching and fidgeting, and ends up grumpy. Even sleeping is a problem for her, no matter how tired she is.

Anetha also hates having.. deep conversations. She doesn't like showing her emotions to others, even if it's the smallest of things that have anything to do with sadness, pity or grief. It hurts her because it brings back painful, yet fond memories of her friends.

Anetha hates magic. She thinks it corrupts and kills -due to what happened with her uncle- and drives creatures crazy. It is too easy to have more and more power, in her opinion. It is too easy to fall into the circle of getting more powerful and more powerful, and more reliant on magic and more reliant on magic.
Fears:

Anetha's BIGGEST fear is somebody seeing her face, recognising her, or finding out who she truly is, because she made a promise to herself that after hurting so many others after basically appearing dead, she wouldn't hurt another with her real personality.

Anetha is afraid of fire. Fire Based Dragons won't bother her too much as long as they keep their distance and don't look at her the wrong way, but if fire is blasted her way, Anetha will jump away as fast as she can due to her weakness to fire. She will then become more defensive then offensive.

Anetha also has an irrational fear of eels. They send shivers up her spine and make her edgy and paranoid whenever she looks at them. Snakes she has no problem with, its just the eels that frighten her.

Origin, Culture, and Family


Place of Origin: Anetha was born in the northern tip of Layrian, at Cashra's lake.
Tribe:She's rogue.
Position:  Rogue, or, as a more personal title, she's known as, "Ice-Shrouded." Language: English, and her family language, which is Deagrat. But she doesn't use her native language anymore.
Home:  She doesn't really live anywhere, she just finds any random spot and sleeps in it for the night.
Parents: Faera (Mother) Titan (Father)
Siblings:  Hera (Sister, deceased)
Relatives: Jarek (Uncle, hunting her down)
Mate: Nebula (she has lost contact with him) So otherwise Single
Offspring: She once had hatchlings, but she has now lost contact with them
History:

She will keep this a secret.

Physical Appearance and Accessories

Anetha's scales are white in colour. They are closely shaped to shark scales, making her faster in the air. She has feathers starting just behind her four horns, travelling down her neck, spine and a quarter way down her shoulders, ending a few inches from the tip of her tail. She has extremely bright, light blue wing membrances, claws, feathers and horns that glow at night.
She has Bright blue eyes the colour of her feathers.
Anetha's body is covered by a sinister black cloak, and underneath that she has silver plates on her legs and tail. Her snout is covered by a silvery helmet. She has a long tail that has a circular half moon on each end, with a hole in the middle of each 'half moon' which she uses as a deadly weapon that can knock out her enemies with a lucky hit.

While in her Glacier form, Anetha's eyes become a brilliant white, and her scales a shimmering blue. Her horns, feathers and tail all gain the appearance of being ice, and her tail becomes serrated with icy plates. She gains a marking around her eye that travels below it and stops at the other end of it. I would say put this in her over all appearance, as that is what it is XD

Height: About sixty foot tall
Length: 80 Foot
Wingspan: 160 Foot
Scale/Fur/Feathers: Her colour is unknown, but for OOC's sake, she is a pearly white.  Her feathers are a brilliant, brilliant blue that appears to glow in the sunlight.
Eyes:  A brilliant blue.
Accessories: a cloak that covers her entire body, and underneath are silver plates that cover her legs and tail, as well as a helmet hidden beneath her hood.
Armor: She wears a coat of plated silver armour that cannot be seen unless the cloak is lifted. It is very light, and can withstand arrows and a few good shoves, but that's about it before it starts to get dented. It is fireproof.
Horns/Spikes: Anetha has brilliant blue horns, four of them, one set smaller then the other that rest on the base of her chin, the other sits normally on the back of her head.
Overall Appearance: Nothing else to say really xD

Abilities and Strengths


Abilities:
Ice Spikes: On Anetha's tail are a set of silvery blue spikes that can extend and fire at will. They resemble a Deadly Nadder's spikes (How To Train Your Dragon) and can be shot up to twenty metres away. They are quite sharp and can pierce flesh, but it has trouble with armor. Does this apply to dragons who have tough skin/scales, as well? I would just specify this a bit more.

Ice Breath: Anetha can blast a bright blue flame that freezes instead of burns. It can freeze water solid and can coat a tree or stone in ice. Dragons that are hit by it won't be harmed too bad, just numbed and slightly pained. If it gets into their eyes or nose it can cause blurred vision and uncomfortable breathing, which can cause panic. This ability is more to intimidate foes and cause them to panic then anything else.

Strengths:

Aim: Anetha has terrific aim with her spikes, and can pull off hitting very small targets if she concentrates hard enough, with a bit of luck thrown in there.

Intelligence: Anetha is very, very intelligent. Could you elaborate on this? Intelligence can mean many different things. After all, does she have street smarts? Is she a logician, a strategist, or just have an overall well education in things like math and science. Just specify, and we're all good.


Weaknesses:

Talking: Anetha can not stand up in front of a crowd, be it of five dragons or five hundred, and deliver a speech or anything like that. She becomes unnerved and stammers uncontrollably. This isn't really a weakness that can be applied to combat. As such, I would advise moving this to fears or dislikes.

Socialising: Anetha has a hard time at parties or just in general socialising with others. She tries to stay as quiet and as far back as possible. She hates talking too much, so things can turn.. unpleasant in a conversation when she gets nervous and snappy. Again, not really a physical weakness. I would move this to dislikes, or simply add it to her personality.

Bad Temper: Anetha has a very short temper, meaning she is more likely to lash out at others then most, or to snap or make snide comments. She will attack without a second thought, especially if she is taunted or if somebody hits a nerve in her emotional side. Same problem as the first two.

Speed: Anetha has less speed then she has strength. She can go quite fast, but not too fast. The best she can achieve is forty miles an hour straight ahead. I might try to compare her strength and speed, first. After all, it isn't directly stated that her physical strength is one of her strengths. I would also try to specify how exactly this is a weakness.

Water: Anetha can't swim. She's never learned.

Weakness To Magic: Anetha succumbs to spells and things like that easier then other dragons. She has a particular weakness to just general magic for some reason, adding to her dislike of using it.

Tail Spikes: Anetha's spikes aren't unlimited. They eventually run out. They are regrown in the same way a lizard grows back a limb, except with a little magic thrown in to speed up the process. It can take up to a day for all of her spikes to replenish, so Anetha must use them wisely. She can fire up to thirty at a time -since they are quite small it's easy to store loads in her tail- but once they're all used, they're all used. I'm not sure this is a weakness, as all abilities are going to wear down as you use them. I would simply list this as a note under your ability to fir tail spikes.

Fire: While other elements will still hurt, Anetha both fears and is exceptionally weak to fire. It will take less time for any fire-related abilities to use their effects on her, and they will do worse damage then normal.

Overall, I would advise adding a few more weaknesses that could be exploited by any dragon, and something that isn't personality related, and simply specifying the weaknesses that are there, and elaborating on why they are weaknesses.
Fighting Style:
Anetha is an aerial combatant mainly, but can adjust her style. She can zip about in the air firing ice and spikes at her target. But her favorite style is short ranged.

Anetha is brutal in short ranged combat. She will tear, slash, bite, gnaw, claw, do whatever she can to get her opponent on the ground. Possibly dead. She can duck, swerve, lean sharply, whatever she needs to do to win a fight. However, this leaves her more open to attacks and less reaction time then a long ranged dragon.
Magic: (Is your draconiforme capable of magic? What kind of magic?) Anetha can use magic, but she uses it very little. She uses tiny bits to speed up the regrowth of her spikes, but ninety nine percent of it is channeled into her Glacier Form. Remove the parenthasis. How much does this speed regrow? How long in total does it take to regrow your spikes for reuse, how many posts? (ex. 1 post(This would include both yours and your opponent's post)).


While in this form Anetha becomes quite powerful. And very dangerous.

Glacier Breath: Anetha's breath changes completely. (Look at the picture for reference) It still contains the same abilities as her previous breath, except it is a bit more sore on contact and looks more like wind then just straight up blue fire. It has a bit more coverage then her normal glacier breath, so she can hit larger spots on bigger targets.

Ice Armor: Anetha gains icy plates on her shoulders, tail and around her face.

Glacier Clasp: Anetha, when she clasps her wings together and then opens them, can send a wall of chilly air in all directions, stopping larger dragons in their tracks and causing smaller ones to stumble.

Glacier Wall: Anetha can cause a wall of ice to appear in front of her, deflecting attacks.



Weaknesses:

Limited Amount of Time: At the maximum, Anetha can last in this form for about 5 minutes (2 posts)

Energy Cost: When she switches back, Anetha will pass out due to the massive amount of magic being used.

Loses A Bit Of Her Sanity: When she's in this form, Anetha goes a bit.. insane. She will be unable to tell friend from foe, as the magic rushing through her veins will strike her brain and charge it into overdrive. She will lose all sense of time, and she cannot stop moving. If she's held in a locked room or something like that she will throw herself against the walls and shriek her head off. Anetha's only goal is to do what she wanted to do before shifting, and when she's completed that goal she will go on a rampage.

Forced Shifting: Anetha, in times of great stress and rage, will be forced to shift, as her Glacier Form is a form of anger and loss of sanity. This can cause damage to her, such as amnesia and physical and mental weakness for several days. She can also be forced to shift by use of magic. By this I mean, if somebody went in and messed around with her mental state or just in general her brain, this can also force her to shift unexpectantly.

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Re: Athena, Ice Wyvern (Application)

Post by Oculus on Wed Feb 01, 2017 1:51 pm

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Re: Athena, Ice Wyvern (Application)

Post by Artemise on Thu Jun 08, 2017 12:41 am

-- Moved out from old apps. Glad to see you're back. ;3

Anyway,

Everything seems okay...except for the lack of details / limitations. You need to mention things like how far her breath can go, how much it can freeze, etc.

Ice Breath - like mentioned above: how big of an object can she freeze with this, and how far can her flames reach?

Glacier Breath - 'It has a bit more coverage then her normal glacier breath,' but how much more?

Glacier Clasp - again, you need to give a limit. How far can the wind reach?? >~<

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Re: Athena, Ice Wyvern (Application)

Post by Athena on Thu Jun 08, 2017 4:41 am

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Re: Athena, Ice Wyvern (Application)

Post by Artemise on Thu Jun 08, 2017 5:03 am

-- 1/2 Approved! ^^

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Re: Athena, Ice Wyvern (Application)

Post by Scortia on Thu Jun 08, 2017 5:10 am

2/2 Approved!

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[21:39:56] Silhouette : (Why the pic?)
[21:40:05] * Blaze isnt over dramatic, he just doesnt like ardent being "one" with Scort.
[21:40:13] Elyn Entezz : Because they're hetalia trash :@

Mixups are Fun:
[21:53:14 19/11/2016]@ Oculus : are you guys mixing up Hetalia with Hentai?
[21:53:26 19/11/2016] Skylar : (*cough blaze/ardent*)
[21:53:31 19/11/2016] Silhouette : (I think that was it Oculus)


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"Man, I wish my art didn't suck." - Scortia, commenting on her own art
"Yep, there's wind." - Connie Maheswaran
"YO, WHO'S BABY IS THIS?" - John Laurens, in a comic I read
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