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Post by Athena on Mon Oct 24, 2016 11:14 am

Personality and the Basics


Name: Athena
Gender: Female
Type: Wyvern
Species: Ice Wyvern
Age: 224
Date of Birth: December 25th
Personality:


Athena puts up a front of; you either get to the point or get out of her face. She is very direct and speaks very little, preferring to observe than broadcast her opinion. She has no patience for fancy words and exquisite parties. If you want to talk to her, charming her isn’t going to A; work, and B; make her like you anymore than she wants to. She’s cold and distrusting, coming off as rude and dismissive of other dragons. She’s got a hard, titanium shell around her heart, only a couple of dragons have seen the softer side of her. She’ll be professional and respectful to most dragons, but she’ll treat you how you treat her. Sharp tongued and short tempered, she is more than happy to hit you in the face for insulting her. She’s not arrogant, but she has a pride to maintain, meaning she won’t do embarrassing or stupid things unless someone like Storm begged her to. She’s as hard as a glacier and as a dry as a desert.


Inside the battle hardened, mean walls of her outer shell, Athena is a protective, gentle and caring friend. Loyal and courageous, she would do anything to keep her friends safe. She is often the giver of ‘tough love,’ but anything she does is usually to protect or look after those she cares about. She’ll listen to you, stay to guard you from nightmares by your bedside, anything you need; she’ll provide it. She’s a bit of a jokester and is very playful and sarcastic with her pals. Although socially incapable and sporting a bad attitude, she’s the best friend you could ever hope to have.

Hobbies: Athena spends most of her time sparring and reading about animals. She also enjoys star-gazing and practicing aerial acrobatics.

Likes: Athena is highly competitive. She loves to win, especially in spars. She enjoys a good rough and tumble, but also enjoys a quiet night under the sky, star-gazing. She has a secret love for animals. She enjoys her own company.

Dislikes:

Athena loathes boredom. If you sit her in a blank room with nothing to do or look at she'll slowly lose her sanity. She prefers to be doing things, be it sparring, battling or flying. When the rush of adrenaline isn't there, she tends to be grumpy.

Athena dislikes boring dragons, dragons who have nothing to say or add to a conversation, if there's one to be had. She hates pompous dragons.

Athena hates loud, repetitive noises. They irritate her and will probably cause her to maul someone.

Fears:

Athena has an irrational fear of eels. Sea-snakes are fine, it's just the eels that frighten her. She hates the way they move and slither.

She also has a fear of fire. Around campfires and the like, she's fine, she's not outright afraid of flames. However, she is more cautious around fire-based Dragons and large flames, having a particular weakness to it.

She fears becoming the monster she's trying to kill...

Origin, Culture, and Family


Place of Origin: Athena was born in the northern tip of Layrian, at Cashra's lake.
Tribe:She's of the Ki'Sha.
Position:  Ku'za
Language: She speaks Ku'za and Universal.
Home: The Ki'sha
Parents: Faera (Mother) Titan (Father)
Siblings:  Aphrodite (Sister, deceased)
Relatives: Daydris (Uncle, hunting her down)
Mate: Grrr. Ayato
Offspring: N/A
History:

She will keep this secret.

Physical Appearance and Accessories



Height: 196 feet (that's 60 metres)
Length: 262 feet (80 metres)
Wingspan: 526 feet (160 metres)
Scale/Fur/Feathers: She has a white hide and blue feathers on her back.
Eyes: Royal blue.
Accessories: She wears a bracelet Storm gave her on her left 'wing arm.'
Armor:
Horns/Spikes: Athena has blue horns, four of them, one set smaller then the other that rest on the back of her chin, the other sits normally on the back of her head, moving in a lightning bolt shape as they move upwards. The right horn is broken in half.
Overall Appearance:

She is a white wyvern with an almost masculine body. She is very muscular and sturdily built. Many scars mark her body. She has a pair of horns, one of which is broken, branching out from the back of her head. The undersides of her wings are pale blue, whereas the top sides are white. She has royal blue eyes and cerulean plates line her forehead. Another set of blue plates protect her throat and stomach. A line of electric blue feathers run down her spine, ending where her tailspikes begin. Her tail has two blades protruding from the end, a few inches thick and pointing behind her, forming the shape of a trident.

Some of her prominent scars are the serious burn marks that have left black patches on her legs. Another is the two clawed mark scarring her left eye. Some of the uglier ones are the marks running down her back. Large, ugly, dark grey gashes running down either side of her feathers, given to her when a dragon slammed into her from above and tore the flesh from her back. The right side of her neck is also marred, with a smaller burn  and some bite marks. Her wings are torn up as well, the edges ragged and discoloured.

Abilities and Strengths


Abilities:

Ice Spikes;

 Around a quarter of the way down her tail, one will notice a set of gleaming, spear-like spikes protruding from Athena’s hide. They are a dull blue when not in use, but when she’s getting ready to fire them, they glow almost white, and intricate markings glow on their bodies. These are projectiles that can pierce flesh, sever ropes and knock out teeth. While attached to her body, these spikes are only a metre or so in length until Athena fires them, at which point they will extend to their full length.

This ability has a range of 160 feet. The spikes have a temperature of -10 degrees. They are each around four metres long when they are fully extended.

When fired, the Ice Spikes move at 50mph and can be dodged by dragons with quick reflexes. When they hit a dragon, it’s like being pierced by a titanium spear. Hard, fast, and painful. Each spike is four metres long when extended and very sharp at the tips. They will lodge in your body and stay there until you pull them out.
That’s not all. These spikes make the affected area of your body feel numb as well as sore. They make legs feel stiff and wings feel heavy. It’s not lethal, it’s just the cold temperature from the spikes chilling your veins and muscle tissue, so it won’t knock you out of the sky or anything, but it causes a lot of discomfort.


Weaknesses;
-The spikes are limited, regrown over a period of one full topic page. Athena can fire up to thirty before the magic runs out and they stop instantly regenerating.
-They can be deflected by wind, magic and even melted in the air by fire. Once released from her tail, they work like arrows until they hit their target.
-The numbing side effect decreases in strength the farther the spike has to travel, until only a light chill will come from that area. The pain from the spike itself will still be the same though.




Ice Beam;

Athena can fire a beam of white light that can freeze objects into statues of ice. Trees, rocks, water, anything it touches will turn to ice.

This ability has a range of 200 feet. It has a temperature of -100 celcius.
The effects of her Ice Beam weaken the further it goes from Athena’s mouth. So objects within fifty feet of her, such as small animals, trees, etc will be frozen solid. At 100-150 feet, the objects stated previously will be covered in heavy frost and will have their movements restricted. At 200 feet, a light frost will settle over all objects touched.

As for dragons and other large creatures, at 200 feet, they will feel a serious chill rush down their spines, this will really let them know not to be hit directly by this attack. If you're around 100-150 feet away, it will feel like a harsh, stinging frost is settling over your body and causes a lot of discomfort, but not damage. If you’re directly in front of Athena, within 70 feet of her, limbs will be numbed and frozen if a direct hit is managed. The limb will be useless for a total of two posts unless the dragon has a high body temperature or smashes the limb against a hard object to shatter the ice. If it gets in your eyes, temporary blindness will be an issue, lasting for one post in total.  If it goes down your throat, it can stop any breath attacks from coming through, by this lasts only for a few seconds (one post) before the ice melts into harmless droplets of water. Still, it is INCREDIBLY sore.


Weaknesses;

-The effects of the Ice Beam get weaker the farther goes from Athena’s mouth
-The effects get weaker the longer she uses it. Using it in short blasts will keep it at full strength for longer, but if she fires the Ice Beam for a long period of time, more than a few seconds, it will start to weaken to the point where it won’t do much damage to objects in front of her face. (its power will reduce over a period of six posts)
-Unlike fire breathing dragons or dragons that shoot lightning, Athena’s Ice Beam is very precise to the point where it’s almost like using a laser gun. It can only hit small spots at a time, so it’s easy to miss moving targets and very hard to hit limbs.
-If it’s frozen the surface of a lake or an environment, the effects will clear away after half an hour. It just freezes trees, bushes etc in a sort of coma state.


Crystal Breath:

When Athena breathes this mist on the ground, blue, green, purple and white crystals, each about the width of her back paw, will grow from the ground. These crystals pulse with light and energy and chill anyone to the touch. Athena can make sculptures, write, anything she wants with these guys. They are quite sharp, but they aren't exactly a means of offence. They're used for healing and bringing light. If she grows the crystals on or inside the wounds of a creature, the crystals will form a protective coat over the wound at her bidding, providing bridges for nerves to reconnect and the like, and help the dragon to heal. It's totally harmless; unless you prick yourself.

Shield;

When she needs to use this purely defensive ability, Athena can raise her wings and slam them down on the ground, and a wall of ice will shoot up from the ground to protect her against attacks. This ‘shield’ resembles a glowing blue, crystal ‘igloo’ that shimmers with strange and intricate patterns similar to her spikes.
This shield can be placed around herself or around other dragons. The shield has an area of 50 metres when she makes it into a full circle, and then it’s seventy metres long when she makes it into a semi circle.
The shields are strong, able to withstand a few strong attacks before they shatter and disappear. Their strength can vary depending on Athena’s energy levels. If she is at full strength and in a healthy, undisturbed mindset, the shields can last up to three posts under frequent battering, but an especially strong attack, or even an average fire attack, will weaken them a lot faster. She has to be concentrating solely on the shields to keep them running, and she can only use them twice before she has to wait two full thread pages to use them again.

Athena can place a shield around a dragon that’s within thirty metres of herself. She can make the shield a full dome around a smaller dragon, but if it’s a dragon that’s longer than fifty metres and taller than sixty, she’ll be forced to make it into a semi circle, which can only protect the side of the dragon she chooses to protect.


Weaknesses;

-She can only have one shield up at a time
-She has to concentrate solely on the shields, or else they will shatter and break
-They are especially weak to fire attacks
-The semi circle shields can only protect one side of the target, be it Athena or the area or dragon she’s defending.


Levitation;

 Athena can levitate objects.

She can levitate objects within twenty metres of her head. Depending on the weight and size of the objects, she can levitate up to ten things. Small things, obviously.

The largest objects she can weigh are things that weigh as much as pine trees. Anything that weighs as much as a pine tree she can only levitate one of.
Athena can hurl these objects are 40mph towards a target.

Weaknesses;

-The faster and higher she makes them go, the more exhausted she becomes.
-She can only throw objects up to twenty metres away.
-Levitating objects, especially large ones, for long will make Athena dizzy, nauseous and eventually make her pass out. If she holds something that weighs as much as a pine tree for more than two posts, she will lose consciousness.
-She can only levitate non animal objects, so this means no floating dragons.


Strengths:

Aim: Athena has terrific aim with her spikes, and can pull off hitting very small targets.

Intelligence: Athena is very, very intelligent when it comes to battle strategies. Having experience in the field, she has great judging skills when it comes to the movements of the enemy. If you want to plan an attack, she's your gal.

Fighting abilities: She's an incredible fighter, able to take on several opponents at once and fight comfortably. Years of experience have led her to having stamina and strength in battle, learning how to intimidate foes and judge their movements. She has the temper of an angry bull, and can fight like one.

Reflexes: Athena has terrific reflexes, practically able to catch a projectile midair. It's very difficult to catch her off guard.

Mental Strength: Athena has a very strong mind. She's exceptional at withstanding mental attacks, having trained her mind since she was sixteen. It's nearly impossible to torture or attack her mind because she can differentiate reality from illusions with far more ease than others. It's her last line of defence and she intends to keep it strong.  

Weaknesses:


Bad Temper: Athena has a very short temper, meaning she is more likely to lash out at others then most, or to snap or make snide comments. She will attack without a second thought, especially if she is taunted or if somebody hits a nerve in her emotional side. This can lead to bad decisions in battle, impulsive moves that can cost her a potential winning attack.

Speed: Athena has less speed then she has strength. She can reach 40mph, tops.

Maneuverability; Athena has large, broad wings built for soaring, not for darting through the air. Much like an Albatross, she needs a running start to fly.

Magic: Magical attacks will have worse effects on her than other dragons. She's weak to any sort of magic bar attacks on her mind.

Her Loved Ones; Athena would die in a heartbeat for her best friend, her mate or anybody else she cares for. It's easy to break her by hurting the ones she cares for. She'll do anything to save them, so if you want to get to her, your best weapons are the dragons she loves.

Fire: While other elements will still hurt, Athena is exceptionally weak to fire. It will take less time for any fire-related abilities to use their effects on her, and they will do worse damage than normal.


Fighting Style:
Athena is a ground combatant mainly, but can adjust her style. She can zip about in the air firing ice and spikes at her target, but she prefers to go in and dig her fangs into someone's neck.

Athena is brutal in short ranged combat. She will tear, slash, bite, gnaw, claw, do whatever she can to get her opponent on the ground. She can duck, swerve, lean sharply, whatever she needs to do to win a fight. However, this leaves her more open to attacks and less reaction time then a long ranged dragon.
Magic: Athena can use magic, but she uses it very little. She uses tiny bits to speed up the regrowth of her spikes, but ninety nine percent of it is channeled into her Deeogon Form.


While in this form Athena becomes quite powerful.

Energy Breath: Athena can grow even bigger crystals out of the ground, reaching up to twenty metres high. These ones glow with magic. They grow faster than her normal crystals, practically shooting up from the ground. They're very sharp, easy to prick yourself on. Getting impaled would be... unpleasant, to say the least. (Think of the Bewilderbeast's Ice Breath from 'How To Train Your Dragon 2')

Weaknesses; it's easy to spot where they're going to grow from next, as the ground will glow bright blue and you will hear the sharp ringing noise.

Crystal Armour: Athena gains shimmering scales made out of crystal. They are hard as rocks and sharp as blades. They are blinding in direct sunlight. They are strong and can withstand physical and cold based attacks better than her normal scales can.

Glacier Clasp: Athena, when she clasps her wings together and then opens them, can send a wall of ice in all directions, stopping larger dragons in their tracks and causing smaller ones to stumble. This can reach dragons up to thirty metres away. The ice will shatter on contact, raining shards down on the dragons it touches, potentially cutting them.


Extra strength: Athena becomes nearly twice as strong in this form. She can hurl dragons against the wall and shatter bones scarily easy. Of course, she has to catch the dragons, first.



Weaknesses:

Limited Amount of Time: At the maximum, Athena can last in this form for about 5 minutes (4 posts)

Energy Cost: When she switches back, Athena will pass out due to the massive amount of magic being used.

Loses Her Sanity: Athena only shifts into this form when she's angry, in agony or in grieving. She loses control and cannot think for herself. She will kill anything that moves. Anything. She cannot distinguish friend from foe. It would take some awe inspiring words from a friend to gently coax her out of this state. Otherwise, it's highly recommended to run in the opposite direction.

Forced Shifting: Athena, in times of great stress and rage, will be forced to shift, as her Deeogon Form is a form of anger and loss of sanity. This can cause damage to her, such as amnesia and physical and mental weakness for several days. She can also be forced to shift by use of magic. By this I mean, if somebody went in and messed around with her mental state or just in general her brain, this can also force her to shift.

One Use: She can only use this once every five in-rp weeks.

Confusion: Athena loses all sense of coordination. When in this form she has no fighting style, only; kill, kill, kill. This can make it easy to outsmart her. She will for go anything that breathes.


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Post by Neru on Thu Nov 10, 2016 8:32 pm

Hello! My name is Neru, and I'll be checking your app today. Please realize that anything and everything I say is not meant as a shot or fault against you, I'm simply trying to get your app in order so that we can all RP together. ^>^ Your first problem is one that encompasses the entire app, so I'm putting it here. All the information on the app that we gave you, AKA, everything in parentheses, isn't supposed to be  there. It'd be lovely if you could remove it!

Anetha wrote:
Personality and the Basics


Name: (Your draconiforme’s name) Anetha
Gender: (Their gender) Female
Type: (What kind of draconiforme are they? Eastern dragon, western dragon, drake, amphiptere, wyvern?) Wyvern
Species: (What kind are they? May be anything from your own imagination to something from media.) IceWing Ahh, you're from DRF. Well, here we don't have  things like "IceWings" or "NightWings". This is a tribe that lives in the arctic region, and therefore until we have a leader that defines a name for hte tribe, it's simpley "The Arctic Tribe".
Age: (Your character’s age.) 25 Just as a note, wyverns can reach about 3000 years of age, if I remember correctly. This isn't in the rules yet, but we're adding it soon. I apologize that it wasn't there before.
Date of Birth: (When were they born? No need to list year, just month and day) December 25TH
Personality: (What does your character act like? Must be at least 5 sentences.)

When you first meet her, Anetha is very, very quiet. Silent. Cold. Dangerous. She will remain silent unless she deems the dragon fit to speak to. Since you can't see her beneath her hooded cloak and mask, it makes her quite intimidating at first glance. She is very secretive and beneath her hood she can be interperated as 'judgemental.'

She is very formidable, and she is quite passive-aggressive, and has more patience then what she once had. She still has the temper of a bull, though.

Anetha has a soft spot for hatchlings, having once been a mother and mate, and when a young one is in trouble she will leap in to defend it.

However, if you somehow manage to fly past the hard, icy outer shell that shields her heart, you find a protective, humorous friend. A lonely beast that just wants company deep down, but is too frightened to let it show.

She will never tell anybody her story. Never. Because she cannot trust and she cannot love another enough to let them hear what really happened to her.

Hobbies: (What does your character do in their free time?) Anetha often practises flying or fighting in her free time, most likely the two mixed together. She enjoys practising aireal combat the most. That's all she really does. Stealing is another of her pastimes, and listening in on conversations.


Likes: (What does your character enjoy? At least 3) Anetha enjoys combat and listening in on conversations. Fighting is the only thing she knows and really loves. All she ever had. All she ever will have. Thieving is a must, and she finds it quite enjoyable. The thrill of doing something you're not supposed to is sickeningly enjoyable to her, as it reminds her of the rush of battle.

Anetha also enjoys.. watching. Observing. Not stalking, exactly, but.. listening in is quite the pastime, as she often creeps into guarded places to hear things, rather then just listening in on patrols or anything.. normal.

Dislikes: (Is there anything your character dislikes? At least 3)

Anetha dislikes looking at the stars, because it reminds her of him. The one she loved. It brings pain and daggers to her heart.

She HATES sitting around and doing nothing. Even for a short period of time. She is a very active dragoness and prefers to be on the move. If she sits around, she starts itching and fidgeting, and ends up grumpy. Even sleeping is a problem for her, no matter how tired she is.

Anetha also hates having.. deep conversations. She doesn't like showing her emotions to others, even if it's the smallest of things that have anything to do with sadness, pity or grief. It hurts her because it brings back painful, yet fond memories of her friends.

Anetha hates magic. She thinks it corrupts and kills -due to what happened with her uncle- and drives creatures crazy. It is too easy to have more and more power, in her opinion. It is too easy to fall into the circle of getting more powerful and more powerful, and more reliant on magic and more reliant on magic.
Fears: (What is your character afraid of? At least 2)

Anetha's BIGGEST fear is somebody seeing her face, recognising her, or finding out who she truly is, because she made a promise to herself that after hurting so many others after basically appearing dead, she wouldn't hurt another with her real personality.

Anetha also has an irrational fear of eels. They send shivers up her spine and make her edgy and paranoid whenever she looks at them. Snakes she has no problem with, its just the eels that frighten her.

Origin, Culture, and Family


Place of Origin: (Where on Layrian were you born?) She was born outside of Layrian. This is a template error, it's supposed to be where were you born, including the other two continents. You do need a location on this planet.
Tribe: (Are they part of a tribe, or rogue?) She's rogue.
Position: (What title/rank does your draconiforme hold?) Rogue, or, as a more personal title, she's known as, "Ice-Shrouded." Language: (What languages does your dragon know?) English, and her family language, which is Deagrat. But she doesn't use her native language anymore.
Home: (Where do they live now? Mountains, grassland, etc.?) She doesn't really live anywhere, she just finds any random spot and sleeps in it for the night.
Parents: (Who were their parents?) Faera (Mother) Titan (Father)
Siblings: (Did they have any siblings?) Hera (Sister, deceased)
Relatives: (Any other family we should know about?) Jarek (Uncle, hunting her down)
Mate: (Do they have a mate?) Nebula (she has lost contact with him) So otherwise Single
Offspring: (Do they have any offspring?) She once had hatchlings, but she has now lost contact with them
History:(What is your character’s history? Optional)

She will keep this a secret.

Physical Appearance and Accessories

Anetha's scales are white in colour. They are closely shaped to shark scales, making her faster in the air. She has feathers starting just behind her four horns, travelling down her neck, spine and a quarter way down her shoulders, ending a few inches from the tip of her tail. She has extremely bright, light blue wing membrances, claws, feathers and horns that glow at night.
She has Bright blue eyes the colour of her feathers.
Anetha's body is covered by a sinister black cloak, and underneath that she has silver plates on her legs and tail. Her snout is covered by a silvery helmet. She has a long tail that has a circular half moon on each end, with a hole in the middle of each 'half moon' which she uses as a deadly weapon that can knock out her enemies with a lucky hit.

While in her Glacier form, Anetha's eyes become a brilliant white, and her scales a shimmering blue. Her horns, feathers and tail all gain the appearance of being ice, and her tail becomes serrated with icy plates. She gains a marking around her eye that travels below it and stops at the other end of it.

Height: (How tall is your draconiforme?) About sixty foot tall
Length: (How long are they from head to tail?) 80 Foot
Wingspan: (What is their total wingspan?) 160 Foot
Scale/Fur/Feathers: (What color are they? How do they look?) Her colour is unknown, but for OOC's sake, she is a pearly white.  Her feathers are a brilliant, brilliant blue that appears to glow in the sunlight.
Eyes: (What color are their eyes?) A brilliant blue.
Accessories: (Do they wear anything? Scarfs, satchels, whatnot.) a cloak that covers her entire body, and underneath are silver plates that cover her legs and tail, as well as a helmet hidden beneath her hood.
Armor: (Does your character wear any kind of armor?) She wears a coat of plated silver armour that cannot be seen unless the cloak is lifted. It is very light, and can withstand arrows and a few good shoves, but that's about it before it starts to get dented. It is fireproof.
Horns/Spikes: (Does your draconiforme have any spikes or horns? What do they look like? What color are they? Where are they located?) Anetha has brilliant blue horns, four of them, one set smaller then the other that rest on the base of her chin, the other sits normally on the back of her head.
Overall Appearance: (What is your draconiforme’s appearance? Anything not mentioned above. Pictures acceptable.)

Nothing else to say really xD

Abilities and Strengths


Abilities: (What kinds of powers and abilities does your draconiforme posssess?)

Ice Spikes: On Anetha's tail are a set of silvery blue spikes that can extend and fire at will. They resemble a Deadly Nadder's spikes (How To Train Your Dragon) and can be shot up to twenty metres away. They are quite sharp and can pierce flesh, but it has trouble with armor.

Ice Breath: Anetha can blast a bright blue flame that freezes instead of burns. It can freeze water solid and can coat a tree or stone in ice. Dragons that are hit by it won't be harmed too bad, just numbed and slightly pained. If it gets into their eyes or nose it can cause blurred vision and uncomfortable breathing, which can cause panic. This ability is more to intimidate foes and cause them to panic then anything else.


Strengths: (What strengths does your draconiforme hold? Mental and physical)

Aim: Anetha has terrific aim with her spikes, and can pull off hitting very small targets if she concentrates hard enough, with a bit of luck thrown in there.

Intelligence: Anetha is very, very intelligent.


Weaknesses: (Are there any weaknesses your draconiforme has? Must have at least +1 more weaknesses than there are strengths)

Talking: Anetha can not stand up in front of a crowd, be it of five dragons or five hundred, and deliver a speech or anything like that. She becomes unnerved and stammers uncontrollably.

Socialising: Anetha has a hard time at parties or just in general socialising with others. She tries to stay as quiet and as far back as possible. She hates talking too much, so things can turn.. unpleasant in a conversation when she gets nervous and snappy.

Bad Temper: Anetha has a very short temper, meaning she is more likely to lash out at others then most, or to snap or make snide comments. She will attack without a second thought, especially if she is taunted or if somebody hits a nerve in her emotional side.

Speed: Anetha has less speed then she has strength. She can go quite fast, but not too fast. The best she can achieve is fifty miles an hour straight ahead.

Water: Anetha can't swim. She's never learned.

Weakness To Magic: Anetha succumbs to spells and things like that easier then other dragons. She has a particular weakness to just general magic for some reason, adding to her dislike of using it.

Tail Spikes: Anetha's spikes aren't unlimited. They eventually run out. They are regrown in the same way a lizard grows back a limb, except with a little magic thrown in to speed up the process. It can take up to a day for all of her spikes to replenish, so Anetha must use them wisely. She can fire up to thirty at a time -since they are quite small it's easy to store loads in her tail- but once they're all used, they're all used.


Fighting Style: (How do they fight? Are they aerial combatants? Long ranged, short ranged, magic wielders, barbaric fighters?)

Anetha is an aerial combatant mainly, but can adjust her style. She can zip about in the air firing ice and spikes at her target, and can fire from a distance. But her favorite style is short ranged.

Anetha is brutal in short ranged combat. She will tear, slash, bite, gnaw, claw, do whatever she can to get her opponent on the ground. Possibly dead. She can duck, swerve, lean sharply, whatever she needs to do to win a fight. However, this leaves her more open to attacks and less reaction time then a long ranged dragon.
Magic: (Is your draconiforme capable of magic? What kind of magic?) Anetha can use magic, but she uses it very little. She uses tiny bits to speed up the regrowth of her spikes, but ninety nine percent of it is channeled into her Glacier Form.



All photos need to either be credit to their original source, AKA, the artist, or removed.

While in this form Anetha becomes quite powerful. And very dangerous.

Glacier Breath: Anetha's breath changes completely. (Look at the picture for reference) It still contains the same abilities as her previous breath, except it is a bit more sore on contact and looks more like wind then just straight up blue fire. It has a bit more coverage then her normal glacier breath, so she can hit larger spots on bigger targets.

Ice Armor: Anetha gains icy plates on her shoulders, tail and around her face.

Glacier Clasp: Anetha, when she clasps her wings together and then opens them, can send a wall of chilly air in all directions, stopping larger dragons in their tracks and causing smaller ones to stumble.

Glacier Wall: Anetha can cause a wall of ice to appear in front of her, deflecting attacks.



Weaknesses:

Limited Amount of Time: At the maximum, Anetha can last in this form for about twenty minutes. This can easily be abused. This either needs to be lowered in time or you need to make it a post count.

Energy Cost: When she switches back, Anetha will pass out due to the massive amount of magic being used.


Loses A Bit Of Her Sanity: When she's in this form, Anetha goes a bit.. insane. She will be unable to tell friend from foe, as the magic rushing through her veins will strike her brain and charge it into overdrive. She will lose all sense of time, and she cannot stop moving. If she's held in a locked room or something like that she will throw herself against the walls and shriek her head off. Anetha's only goal is to do what she wanted to do before shifting, and when she's completed that goal she will go on a rampage.

Forced Shifting: Anetha, in times of great stress and rage, will be forced to shift, as her Glacier Form is a form of anger and loss of sanity. This can cause damage to her, such as amnesia and physical and mental weakness for several days. She can also be forced to shift by use of magic. By this I mean, if somebody went in and messed around with her mental state or just in general her brain, this can also force her to shift unexpectantly.

All in all, good app. You need to get more specific on your powers, and considering you have 6, if we include magic, you should probably tone it down slightly. All of that could make you unfairly powerful in combat with other members. If you don't want to tone it down, I'd suggest more combat related weaknesses. You certainly have a lot right now, but a lot of them also have very little to do with combat.
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Post by Athena on Sat Nov 19, 2016 12:28 pm

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Post by Neru on Sat Nov 19, 2016 8:42 pm

Please remove everything in parentheses. Otherwise, the rest is fine.
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Re: Athena, Ice Wyvern (Application)

Post by Scortia on Wed Nov 30, 2016 5:11 pm

I will be taking over app, due to the removal of Neru as moderator. (Also Neru's pretty busy and I dun wanna pressure her.) I will be doing this in sections to keep myself from going insane, so first I'll cover your overall app, then your magic.

Anetha wrote:
Personality and the Basics


Name: Anetha
Gender: Female
Type: Wyvern
Species: Ice Wyvern/Artic Tribe Wyvern
Age: 224
Date of Birth: December 25th
Personality:

When you first meet her, Anetha is very, very quiet. Silent. Cold. Dangerous. She will remain silent unless she deems the dragon fit to speak to. Since you can't see her beneath her hooded cloak and mask, it makes her quite intimidating at first glance. She is very secretive and beneath her hood she can be interperated as 'judgemental.'

She is very formidable, and she is quite passive-aggressive, and has more patience then what she once had. She still has the temper of a bull, though.

Anetha has a soft spot for hatchlings, having once been a mother and mate, and when a young one is in trouble she will leap in to defend it.

However, if you somehow manage to fly past the hard, icy outer shell that shields her heart, you find a protective, humorous friend. A lonely beast that just wants company deep down, but is too frightened to let it show.

She will never tell anybody her story. Never. Because she cannot trust and she cannot love another enough to let them hear what really happened to her.

Hobbies: Anetha often practises flying or fighting in her free time, most likely the two mixed together. She enjoys practising aireal combat the most. That's all she really does. Stealing is another of her pastimes, and listening in on conversations.


Likes: Anetha enjoys combat and listening in on conversations. Fighting is the only thing she knows and really loves. All she ever had. All she ever will have. Thieving is a must, and she finds it quite enjoyable. The thrill of doing something you're not supposed to is sickeningly enjoyable to her, as it reminds her of the rush of battle.

Anetha also enjoys.. watching. Observing. Not stalking, exactly, but.. listening in is quite the pastime, as she often creeps into guarded places to hear things, rather then just listening in on patrols or anything.. normal.

Dislikes:
Anetha dislikes looking at the stars, because it reminds her of him. The one she loved. It brings pain and daggers to her heart.

She HATES sitting around and doing nothing. Even for a short period of time. She is a very active dragoness and prefers to be on the move. If she sits around, she starts itching and fidgeting, and ends up grumpy. Even sleeping is a problem for her, no matter how tired she is.

Anetha also hates having.. deep conversations. She doesn't like showing her emotions to others, even if it's the smallest of things that have anything to do with sadness, pity or grief. It hurts her because it brings back painful, yet fond memories of her friends.

Anetha hates magic. She thinks it corrupts and kills -due to what happened with her uncle- and drives creatures crazy. It is too easy to have more and more power, in her opinion. It is too easy to fall into the circle of getting more powerful and more powerful, and more reliant on magic and more reliant on magic.
Fears:

Anetha's BIGGEST fear is somebody seeing her face, recognising her, or finding out who she truly is, because she made a promise to herself that after hurting so many others after basically appearing dead, she wouldn't hurt another with her real personality.

Anetha is afraid of fire. Fire Based Dragons won't bother her too much as long as they keep their distance and don't look at her the wrong way, but if fire is blasted her way, Anetha will jump away as fast as she can due to her weakness to fire. She will then become more defensive then offensive.

Anetha also has an irrational fear of eels. They send shivers up her spine and make her edgy and paranoid whenever she looks at them. Snakes she has no problem with, its just the eels that frighten her.

Origin, Culture, and Family


Place of Origin: Anetha was born in the northern tip of Layrian, at Cashra's lake.
Tribe:She's rogue.
Position:  Rogue, or, as a more personal title, she's known as, "Ice-Shrouded." Language: English, and her family language, which is Deagrat. But she doesn't use her native language anymore.
Home:  She doesn't really live anywhere, she just finds any random spot and sleeps in it for the night.
Parents: Faera (Mother) Titan (Father)
Siblings:  Hera (Sister, deceased)
Relatives: Jarek (Uncle, hunting her down)
Mate: Nebula (she has lost contact with him) So otherwise Single
Offspring: She once had hatchlings, but she has now lost contact with them
History:

She will keep this a secret.

Physical Appearance and Accessories

Anetha's scales are white in colour. They are closely shaped to shark scales, making her faster in the air. She has feathers starting just behind her four horns, travelling down her neck, spine and a quarter way down her shoulders, ending a few inches from the tip of her tail. She has extremely bright, light blue wing membrances, claws, feathers and horns that glow at night.
She has Bright blue eyes the colour of her feathers.
Anetha's body is covered by a sinister black cloak, and underneath that she has silver plates on her legs and tail. Her snout is covered by a silvery helmet. She has a long tail that has a circular half moon on each end, with a hole in the middle of each 'half moon' which she uses as a deadly weapon that can knock out her enemies with a lucky hit.

While in her Glacier form, Anetha's eyes become a brilliant white, and her scales a shimmering blue. Her horns, feathers and tail all gain the appearance of being ice, and her tail becomes serrated with icy plates. She gains a marking around her eye that travels below it and stops at the other end of it. I would say put this in her over all appearance, as that is what it is XD

Height: About sixty foot tall
Length: 80 Foot
Wingspan: 160 Foot
Scale/Fur/Feathers: Her colour is unknown, but for OOC's sake, she is a pearly white.  Her feathers are a brilliant, brilliant blue that appears to glow in the sunlight.
Eyes:  A brilliant blue.
Accessories: a cloak that covers her entire body, and underneath are silver plates that cover her legs and tail, as well as a helmet hidden beneath her hood.
Armor: She wears a coat of plated silver armour that cannot be seen unless the cloak is lifted. It is very light, and can withstand arrows and a few good shoves, but that's about it before it starts to get dented. It is fireproof.
Horns/Spikes: Anetha has brilliant blue horns, four of them, one set smaller then the other that rest on the base of her chin, the other sits normally on the back of her head.
Overall Appearance: Nothing else to say really xD

Abilities and Strengths


Abilities:
Ice Spikes: On Anetha's tail are a set of silvery blue spikes that can extend and fire at will. They resemble a Deadly Nadder's spikes (How To Train Your Dragon) and can be shot up to twenty metres away. They are quite sharp and can pierce flesh, but it has trouble with armor. Does this apply to dragons who have tough skin/scales, as well? I would just specify this a bit more.

Ice Breath: Anetha can blast a bright blue flame that freezes instead of burns. It can freeze water solid and can coat a tree or stone in ice. Dragons that are hit by it won't be harmed too bad, just numbed and slightly pained. If it gets into their eyes or nose it can cause blurred vision and uncomfortable breathing, which can cause panic. This ability is more to intimidate foes and cause them to panic then anything else.

Strengths:

Aim: Anetha has terrific aim with her spikes, and can pull off hitting very small targets if she concentrates hard enough, with a bit of luck thrown in there.

Intelligence: Anetha is very, very intelligent. Could you elaborate on this? Intelligence can mean many different things. After all, does she have street smarts? Is she a logician, a strategist, or just have an overall well education in things like math and science. Just specify, and we're all good.


Weaknesses:

Talking: Anetha can not stand up in front of a crowd, be it of five dragons or five hundred, and deliver a speech or anything like that. She becomes unnerved and stammers uncontrollably. This isn't really a weakness that can be applied to combat. As such, I would advise moving this to fears or dislikes.

Socialising: Anetha has a hard time at parties or just in general socialising with others. She tries to stay as quiet and as far back as possible. She hates talking too much, so things can turn.. unpleasant in a conversation when she gets nervous and snappy. Again, not really a physical weakness. I would move this to dislikes, or simply add it to her personality.

Bad Temper: Anetha has a very short temper, meaning she is more likely to lash out at others then most, or to snap or make snide comments. She will attack without a second thought, especially if she is taunted or if somebody hits a nerve in her emotional side. Same problem as the first two.

Speed: Anetha has less speed then she has strength. She can go quite fast, but not too fast. The best she can achieve is forty miles an hour straight ahead. I might try to compare her strength and speed, first. After all, it isn't directly stated that her physical strength is one of her strengths. I would also try to specify how exactly this is a weakness.

Water: Anetha can't swim. She's never learned.

Weakness To Magic: Anetha succumbs to spells and things like that easier then other dragons. She has a particular weakness to just general magic for some reason, adding to her dislike of using it.

Tail Spikes: Anetha's spikes aren't unlimited. They eventually run out. They are regrown in the same way a lizard grows back a limb, except with a little magic thrown in to speed up the process. It can take up to a day for all of her spikes to replenish, so Anetha must use them wisely. She can fire up to thirty at a time -since they are quite small it's easy to store loads in her tail- but once they're all used, they're all used. I'm not sure this is a weakness, as all abilities are going to wear down as you use them. I would simply list this as a note under your ability to fir tail spikes.

Fire: While other elements will still hurt, Anetha both fears and is exceptionally weak to fire. It will take less time for any fire-related abilities to use their effects on her, and they will do worse damage then normal.

Overall, I would advise adding a few more weaknesses that could be exploited by any dragon, and something that isn't personality related, and simply specifying the weaknesses that are there, and elaborating on why they are weaknesses.
Fighting Style:
Anetha is an aerial combatant mainly, but can adjust her style. She can zip about in the air firing ice and spikes at her target. But her favorite style is short ranged.

Anetha is brutal in short ranged combat. She will tear, slash, bite, gnaw, claw, do whatever she can to get her opponent on the ground. Possibly dead. She can duck, swerve, lean sharply, whatever she needs to do to win a fight. However, this leaves her more open to attacks and less reaction time then a long ranged dragon.
Magic: (Is your draconiforme capable of magic? What kind of magic?) Anetha can use magic, but she uses it very little. She uses tiny bits to speed up the regrowth of her spikes, but ninety nine percent of it is channeled into her Glacier Form. Remove the parenthasis. How much does this speed regrow? How long in total does it take to regrow your spikes for reuse, how many posts? (ex. 1 post(This would include both yours and your opponent's post)).


While in this form Anetha becomes quite powerful. And very dangerous.

Glacier Breath: Anetha's breath changes completely. (Look at the picture for reference) It still contains the same abilities as her previous breath, except it is a bit more sore on contact and looks more like wind then just straight up blue fire. It has a bit more coverage then her normal glacier breath, so she can hit larger spots on bigger targets.

Ice Armor: Anetha gains icy plates on her shoulders, tail and around her face.

Glacier Clasp: Anetha, when she clasps her wings together and then opens them, can send a wall of chilly air in all directions, stopping larger dragons in their tracks and causing smaller ones to stumble.

Glacier Wall: Anetha can cause a wall of ice to appear in front of her, deflecting attacks.



Weaknesses:

Limited Amount of Time: At the maximum, Anetha can last in this form for about 5 minutes (2 posts)

Energy Cost: When she switches back, Anetha will pass out due to the massive amount of magic being used.

Loses A Bit Of Her Sanity: When she's in this form, Anetha goes a bit.. insane. She will be unable to tell friend from foe, as the magic rushing through her veins will strike her brain and charge it into overdrive. She will lose all sense of time, and she cannot stop moving. If she's held in a locked room or something like that she will throw herself against the walls and shriek her head off. Anetha's only goal is to do what she wanted to do before shifting, and when she's completed that goal she will go on a rampage.

Forced Shifting: Anetha, in times of great stress and rage, will be forced to shift, as her Glacier Form is a form of anger and loss of sanity. This can cause damage to her, such as amnesia and physical and mental weakness for several days. She can also be forced to shift by use of magic. By this I mean, if somebody went in and messed around with her mental state or just in general her brain, this can also force her to shift unexpectantly.
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Re: Athena, Ice Wyvern (Application)

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Re: Athena, Ice Wyvern (Application)

Post by Artemise on Thu Jun 08, 2017 12:41 am

-- Moved out from old apps. Glad to see you're back. ;3

Anyway,

Everything seems okay...except for the lack of details / limitations. You need to mention things like how far her breath can go, how much it can freeze, etc.

Ice Breath - like mentioned above: how big of an object can she freeze with this, and how far can her flames reach?

Glacier Breath - 'It has a bit more coverage then her normal glacier breath,' but how much more?

Glacier Clasp - again, you need to give a limit. How far can the wind reach?


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Post by Artemise on Thu Jun 08, 2017 5:03 am

-- 1/2 Approved! ^^

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