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Post by Sonus Decessus on Fri Nov 11, 2016 7:06 pm

Personality and the Basics


Name:
Sonus Decessus
Gender:
Female
Type:
Wyvern ~ Type: Nordic
Species:
Legendary Urban Brimstone Inferno
Age:
956 years
Date of Birth:
Sometime in June
Personality:
Hostile side: Sonus can be quite aggressive if aggravated. The things she does not like is a firm belief in her system of thinking. In this stage of her mind, she has little to no mercy shown to the ones that have given her reasons to not like them. Threatening her family is another deal breaker. For this dragon will go blazes on you. She is protective of her family for reasons that cannot explain, never to abandon or leave them. In this stage of thinking, she thinks more physically than strategically, physically to tear into the dragon that crossed her, and to physically burn them to ash. She knows what she can do, she knows where her limits are and where they stop, even though she pushes far from them. She physically tries to hurt or destroy anything in her path, of her younger days. The thing to calm her down is space, from everyone. Time to think and be alone... After she'd killed whatever she'd want to kill.

Normal Thinking: If Sonus is in quite a good mood, she can sit, talk, and chit chat for days or days. Talking about her adventures and things she's found, giving information and receiving. She thinks strategically, open minded and easy to talk to. Sonus is very outgoing, and can make friends on any topic at any time of the day. She can be turned down multiple times, but she can still proceed to talk and press that she isn't so bad. She can be as friendly as a sun dragon.
Hobbies:

  • Hunts Dragons
    While her time as a young dragoness, she took advantage of her power, not exactly known what it could do, how to contain it, and why she possesed such a powerful force within her body. She used to kill dragons that were a threat to the Dragon Kind, quick, easy, and non-suspectful. Even though the murders went up in alarm during her mid 200's, the "Deathbringer" name was on each post, each wall of nearly every city. She was wanted and tried for her murders, even though she thought she was doing it for the good of the Dragons.



  • Learns and adapts to new environments or situations
    As Sonus slowly pulled herself out of the deep hold she dug herself into, putting the murders behind her, she began to explore, to rush all of that energy into studying anything and everything around her. To going to the ends of the earth, to gaze at the constellations, to microorganisms living within plants.



  • Figuring other dragon's out *as in getting to know of their species*
    With traveling abroad and studying creatures, she began the interest of other species of dragons, which was notably hard, given the fact that her scales and face bore terror into other's hearts.



  • Writing upon stone tablets of her adventures
    With her expeditions, she loved to keep track on what she found, how she found it, and what it was like. Every detail, to drawing it out, to listing many many things. It was what she did.



  • Now traveling with other Stormcallers and protect them from any harm that comes their way
    With her fire scales, the Higher Ups assigned Sonus to protect Diplomats or any other dragon, to keep their safety and protect them in dangerous territory, or traveling to another's territory.



  • Teaches her niece about the world, long conversations with her sister
    Her niece was once a child to her, and she has not left Senka's side. Out of all the things she's learned, she teaches and guides Senka with her sister. Silhouette and Sonus loves to fly and talk. Talk about anything and everything. About their adventures or pasts experiences, and are always there for each other.


Likes:

  • Family
    Natural instinct to protect and love



  • Someone to talk to (even though she'd never admit that)
    From her time alone and studying, she found little to few dragons to carry on a conversation. Out of fear, most would, but soon flee



  • Pyromaniac to an extent. She is quite gentle if you are just there to amuse her, or even try to befriend her.
    She loves setting things on fire, to watch life and death before her eyes. It exhilarates her



  • Gliding in the skies with her sister
    As stated above, flying and chatting was her favorite thing to do



  • Speaking to other tribes or species about the Stormcallers and peace
    On her missions with the other Diplomats, she loves to go and teach younger dragons about herself, why she looked funny and her scales burned things to ash, and why Stormcallers can move in and out of territories so easily without other dragons stopping her. She teaches what she usually teaches Senka to other dragonets, loving the looks of awe and amusement.



  • Not speaking of her knowledge
    She doesn't want to brag about what she knows, she does want to teach.. But bragging? That's a no no.

Dislikes:

  • Cold temperatures
    Cold temperatures effect her mood and physical traits. It makes her stiff, rigid almost, and puts her in the most foul mood.



  • Frosty attitudes
    Those dragons that think they're all this and that. She does not get along with them.



  • Dragons who are two faced - fake - try to hard to be someone they are not.
    Self explanatory.



  • Dragons who judge too quickly
    Judging one is one of Sonus' first hand problems. Dragons judge her too quickly before they can even get to know her, it frustrates her, and wishes dragons could be given a chance before you judge.



  • Cactus
    As she was a dragonet, a cactus fell upon her tail, leaving large thorns. Ever since then, she's hated them.



  • Oceanic creatures
    Gills, how they move in the water. What they look like and the deep, dark depths of the ocean...

Fears:

  • Losing time to protect her loved ones
    If wounded, or cannot move and can see her loved ones being hurt, tortured, killed, and she can do nothing... She is the most hard on herself, mentally. Breaking herself down until she could be called a lizard with no dragon qualities. Shutting herself away for years at a time



  • Helplessness
    Connects with losing time. It makes her feel horrible inside, more than human words can describe. Empty, as if you soul has vanished, bones turning to glass, weak; physically and mentally.


Origin, Culture, and Family

Place of Origin:
Near Suji Pun Lake
Tribe:
Stormcaller
Position:
Scholar ~ Diplomat
Protector of the tribe
Language:
Universal, can learn and adapt quickly
Home:
Wanders across the lands. She usually lives in caves and hunts within the areas
Parents:
N/A
Siblings:
Silhouette
Relatives:
Senka - Niece Rihzome - Brother in law
Mate:
Ardent
Offspring:
Eysseth
History:
Sonus was born with too much fire (No nothing like WoF I created Sonus before the books were even published). Scales have a high temperature. Born with too much fire, either the body could burn to ash, or would have to evolve into a more fire capable vessel. Sonus' body pulses the fire through the veins, scales, everything. How come the dragon did not die? This dragon's body did indeed morph into a more fire capable scales and intestines. When Sonus was born, she was alone, seemingly, the parents knew of the fire, hence leaving the dragonet to fend for herself. She grew, and never really involved herself with others, for fear of hurting them. She grew emotionless and started to hunt dragons that came too close to her cave, making it a sudden game. She had always watched the settling dragon communities in the area, and have always been attracted to them. Not necessarily making contact. She connected with four other dragons that wanted to roam the lands. She joined in, wanting to create more friends for the 300 years of time they spent together. She then went on her own, for the dragons verbally attacked her for accidentally burning on of them. After that encounter, Sonus was wandering, as she did mostly all the time. She found a hatchling of which was named Senka. She raised Senka, for a good amount of time staying in the marshy places of the Ouatel Forests. She raised Senka as a mother would, before parting ways and returning to wandering and learning.

Physical Appearance and Accessories

Height:
90 feet
Length:
175 feet
Wingspan:
328 feet
Scale/Fur/Feathers:
Brilliant colors, ranging from reds, oranges, whites, golds, yellows, etc. (think of the colors of a setting sun)
Eyes:
One eye is a brilliant gold, which seems to light up the sky, and the other a stunning blue, which seems to be the opposite, but just as bright. They are orbs, without a pupil. (can't stress how much the eyes should draw the attention of other creatures. EYES MAJOR PART ABOUT SONUS)
Accessories:
N/A
Armor:
Due to her fire scales, she can not wear such items. Scale temperature reaching 1,500 degrees to 2,200 within her body and chest/neck area.
Horns/Spikes:
Her teeth don't just sit inside her gum lines. They can be found external and internal. Rows of teeth, of like a shark. Spikes line her back, down a straight line, about three rows. Her talons are naturally long, curled like an eagles. Her tail is long and spiky. Spikes somewhat mesh into her scales, leaving limited attacking spaces from above. Her scales are crossed in certain ways to prove attacking would be almost difficult. If veins, at all visible, are bright with fire, as fire kinda... Replaced her blood. She takes a lot after Smaug, from the "Hobbit".
Overall Appearance:
Sonus has a long, slender body. She is built slightly sturdy, and strong muscles. Since she is a Nordic Wyvern, she walks upon her wings and back legs. Upon her wings she has three long claws, rigid and sharp to walk across tough terrain. Even though she loves to walk around, flying is the way to go. Nordic Wyverns have enormous wings, catching updrafts and avoiding sudden pockets of air. Her long tail is used to move sharply around corners. Her long neck can bend and twist to hear like an owl. Her neck and back hold larger scales of armor, more thick than any other scale upon her body. Her eyes do not have pupils, just glowing orbs.
Much to Smaug's movements, Sonus' facial muscles move as she talks.
She can walk upon her wings as show, hence her being a Nordic type Wyvern.


As to Smaug's chest and neck fill with a brighter substance and fire, so does Sonus' chest
and neck, expanding with combustive air, hydrogen peroxide, and hypergolic chemicals.


Abilities and Strengths

Abilities:
From within her body, fire has replaced her soul and blood. A powerful Ancient magic taking place. Once in a hundred of thousand Urban Brimstone Infernos is effected by this magic. Everything about this dragon is effected by the "Holy Fire" That has resided inside her. Body being just a vessel, it was passed down through the ancients and their offspring.
Sonus has found out she can subdue her fire scales for an hour, but to a cost. After the hour is up, her fire scales and fire burst through her scales and into the area. She has to make sure she is away from everyone about 10 meters.

Strengths:

  • Independent thinking. She can think about outcomes and possibilities. She doesn't waste her time on fools, and calculates how to do things.



  • Fire scales. Scales that produce an extreme amount of heat for offensive and defensive purposes.



  • Isolation, not having to deal with other dragons pestering her, she is usually always happy. Most dragons live their lives in isolation, some don't. In her years of being by herself, Sonus has learned that thinking situations through is the most productive way to go. Seemingly, she used to act upon her feelings, and that lead her to several dead ends. Sonus can see both sides of the story, usually at all times. She doesn't quite want to be 'evil' but she doesn't want to be the 'savior' either.



  • To learn quickly, having a high I.Q and a passion to learn

 
Weaknesses:

  • Water is a big weakness. Plain water, or one of a hot spring, does not effect her as much as cold, ice water, or the ocean. *The temperatures and water itself can douse her physical scales. Once her physical appearance is no longer blazing hot, her internal fire can be doused. Note that this would take about two days to happen, in below freezing water.*



  • Colder temperatures, due to her love of hot weather, cold temperatures irritate her fire. Makes her more vulnerable to attacks.



  • Trust issues lead to backstabbers which leads to fake faces. She dislikes those things, but can put her trust into a dragon more than that specific dragon as put into her.



  • Breaking of loyalty can lead to years of wrath towards all of the lands, she can lose her cool pretty quickly.



  • Sudden fit of rage. Sonus can sometimes become enveloped into rages that turn the world upside down. Her wrath can spread far and wide, and even effect the ones she loves.


Fighting Style:
Completely "street" like. Even though she could be taught differently, close combat is her favorite, just latch onto the other dragon and within a few seconds burn them to a crisp. She does train physically nearly every day to keep her physical form up. Even though you think, "well she can kill anything she'd like", she has weaknesses. A strong dragon never let's her guard down.

Magic:
No magic, just withholding enormous amounts of fire and producing a whooping 4 minuet long blasts, long or close. Long range shots take time to charge, reaching up to the exceeding lengths of 150 feet. (The blast is wide because the major amount of fire held within her.)
Small magic tricks of fire, controlling and almost manipulating it to her own doing (Hence the more dominant Holy Fire)
A little magic was obtained when she joined the Stormcallers, enough to hold small thing, like a stick, a pencil, small rocks, a book, things like that. (So she doesn't burn things)

About the Urban Brimstone Inferno Species

This species is rare. Once a thriving species, they filled the world and has gone down incredibly low. The Brimstone's were a great tribe, strong powerful Wyverns that almost, and nearly ruled the world, a savage species. Before, the ones called the Ancients, created a spell, so vast and powerful, one out of 100,000 Brimstones would host an ancient fire, the Holy Fire, but with a cost. Born with a twin, the dragon with the Holy Fire, would steal the other's fire, killing whatever twin they had, unless the twin had a reason to stay alive. A young male was born into the tribe, thousands of years ago. He grew up learning and being instructed by the tribe to control and harness it. Soon as he reached his thousandth hatching day, he became mad. As he was treated as royalty, he could never exactly touch things. Never to have a mate of his own and not even interact with his parents and other Brimstones. He went into a rampage. Crossing the worlds and lands, killing any Brimstone he could find, his name going down in all dragon species' history. The biggest tribe of all, slowly but surly being destroyed by their own creation. Harnessing the Holy Fire was a triumph, but soon lead to their destruction. Dragon clands feared the Brimstone that raged through the lands. He lived long, destroying nearly everything within or blocking his path. The ancients were distraught, finally coming up with a plan. Since their species was going extinct, they were limited on  males and females, and never met to create offspring. They created another large mass spell, to place upon their linages to protect the Brimstones that were to come. Now, Brimstones come once in a hundred years, picking a random pair of dragons, of any species and creating a dragon of Legends. Sonus, unfortunately was born into this small but growing tribe, and with the spell... Of the Holy Fire.
With the second spell, this is where Sonus' surrogate parents left the egg. For it was not the egg that looked of their species.

About the Holy Fire
The Holy Fire does not move or have the consistency of normal, Earth fire. As the fire comes from Heaven, even though other dragons can 'withstand' fire, the Holy Fire can still burn and turn living and non living things to ash. One should have to know the Holy spell, from the Ancients, to spell upon themselves or others, working for only a couple of hours, or if the user of magic is powerful enough to keep it up. No dragon can just "touch" Sonus without burning, unless the twin, of which the Holy Fire Vessel has taken their fire. The fire does not hurt the one that it was in contact with in and during the egg and/or pregnancy.

More about her species will be posted in another topic. This covers the just of things.
Special Side Note
Since there has been a lot of confusion about this character, being... "OP". She won't follow what her abilities are from the book I'm writing. I will have her touchable, but when she wants to, you cannot touch her. As like a power switch, there is an on and off button, energy on, energy off. All depends on her mood now.


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Post by Neru on Mon Nov 14, 2016 1:39 pm

@Sonus Decessus wrote:
Personality and the Basics


Name:
Sonus Decessus (Commonly known as DeathBringer)
Gender:
Female
Type:
Wyvern ~ Type: Nordic
Species:
Urban Brimstone Inferno
Age:
2935 years
Date of Birth:
June, upon a blazing Saturday
Personality:
Sonus acts how a normal, blazing ball of scales would act. Sometimes she can be harsh, rude, and venomous. She is protective over the things she holds dear to her heart, as family or close friends. She normally doesn't just go out into the worlds and try to make alliances. She's very independent and sometimes extremely stubborn. Loyalty means the world to her, even if it is for a contracted amount of time. Cross her, Sonus would most likely burn you to the ground. She had been with a small band of dragons before, leading, instructing, but soon, she turned from them. Criticizing her until she could no longer stand it. Her instincts have always been to lead, lead something, yet she has not felt that she has had her time to do so... Yet. She cares for others, though, IF you get upon her good side.
Hobbies:
Sonus usually hunts in her free time, or spars other dragons... Well. Hunts them. She likes to learn about different creatures, examine things she probably could not. Having a smart dragon is always the safe way to go.
Likes:
Family, someone to talk to (even though she'd never admit that), and is a complete pyromaniac to an extent. She is quite gentle if you are just there to amuse her, or even try to befriend her.
Dislikes:
Cold temperatures, frosty attitudes (lol), and dragons who are two faced - fake - try to hard to be someone they are not.
Fears:
The edges of space, not space itself, just the edges. Losing the one she holds dear.


Origin, Culture, and Family


Place of Origin:
Near Suji Pun Lake
Tribe:
Rogue, for now
Position:
N/A
Language:
Doesn't have a specific language but can learn and adapt quickly. As before, she loves to learn. Are you saying that, as of now, she is unable to speak any language at all? If you want her to be able to vocally communicate with others in topics, I'd suggest placing "Universal Language" here, or the language of a specific tribe, if you so choose.
Home:
Wanders across the lands. She usually lives in caves and hunts within the areas.
Parents:
N/A
Siblings:
Born a twin, has not seen the other blood kin. (Silouette)
Relatives:
N/A
Mate:
N/A
Offspring:
N/A
History:
Sonus was born with too much fire (No nothing like WoF I created Sonus before the books were even published). Scales have a high temperature. Born with too much fire, either the body could burn to ash, or would have to evolve into a more fire capable vessel. Sonus' body pulses the fire through the veins, scales, everything. How come the dragon did not die? This dragon's body did indeed morph into a more fire capable scales and intestines. When Sonus was born, she was alone, seemingly, the parents knew of the fire, hence leaving the dragonet to fend for herself. She grew, and never really involved herself with others, for fear of hurting them. She grew emotionless and started to hunt dragons that came too close to her cave, making it a sudden game. She had always watched the settling dragon communities in the area, and have always been attracted to them. Not necessarily making contact. She connected with four other dragons that wanted to roam the lands. She joined in, wanting to create more friends for the 300 years of time they spent together. She then went on her own, for the dragons verbally attacked her for accidentally burning on of them.


Physical Appearance and Accessories


Height:
129 feet Wyverns may not be taller than 90ft.
Length:
126 feet
Wingspan:
453 feet (whoop whoop)
Scale/Fur/Feathers:
Brilliant colors, ranging from reds, oranges, whites, golds, yellows, etc.
Eyes:
One eye is a brilliant gold, which seems to light up the sky, and the other a stunning blue, which seems to be the opposite, but just as bright. (can't stress how much the eyes should draw the attention of other creatures. EYES MAJOR PART ABOUT SONUS)
Accessories:
N/A
Armor:
Due to her fire scales, she can not wear such items. Scale temperature reaching 10,000 degrees to 15,000 within her body. No draconiforme can have flames or heated abilities of any kind that exceed 2200 degrees Fahrenheit.
Horns/Spikes:
Her teeth don't just sit inside her gum lines. They can be found external and internal. Rows of teeth, of like a shark. Spikes line her back, down a straight line, about three rows. Her talons are naturally long, curled like an eagles. Her tail is long and spiky. Spikes somewhat mesh into her scales, leaving limited attacking spaces from above. Her scales are crossed in certain ways to prove attacking would be almost difficult. If veins, at all visible, are bright with fire, as fire kinda... Replaced her blood. She takes a lot after Smaug, from the "Hobbit". Long neck, enormous wings.
Overall Appearance:


Much to Smaug's movements, Sonus' facial muscles move as she talks. She can walk upon her wings as show, hence her being a Nordic type Wyvern.



As to Smaug's chest and neck fill with a brighter substance and fire, so does Sonus' chest and neck, expanding with combustive air, hydrogen peroxide, and hypergolic chemicals.
Abilities and Strengths


Abilities:
Generating fire 24/7. With most dragons, if they use too much at a given amount of time, they run out. As always, Sonus is to stay warm, her body generates more than enough fire throughout the days and years.
Strengths:
~Independent thinking. She can think about outcomes and possibilities. She doesn't waste her time on fools, and calculates how to do things.

~Fire scales. Scales that produce an extreme amount of heat for offensive and defensive purposes.

~Isolation, not having to deal with other dragons pestering her, she is usually always happy. Most dragons live their lives in isolation, some don't. In her years of being by herself, Sonus has learned that thinking situations through is the most productive way to go. Seemingly, she used to act upon her feelings, and that lead her to several dead ends. Sonus can see both sides of the story, usually at all times. She doesn't quite want to be 'evil' but she doesn't want to be the 'savior' either.  
Weaknesses:
~Water is a big weakness. Plain water, or one of a hot spring, does not effect her as much as cold, ice water, or the ocean. *The temperatures and water itself can douse her physical scales. Once her physical appearance is no longer blazing hot, her internal fire can be doused. Note that this would take about two days to happen, in below freezing water.*

~Colder temperatures, due to her love of hot weather, cold temperatures irritate her fire. Makes her more vulnerable to attacks.

~Trust issues lead to backstabbers which leads to fake faces. She dislikes those things, but can put her trust into a dragon more than that specific dragon as put into her.

~Breaking of loyalty can lead to years of wrath towards all of the lands, she can lose her cool pretty quickly.
Fighting Style:
Completely "street" like. Even though she could be taught differently, close combat is her favorite, just latch onto the other dragon and within a few seconds burn them to a crisp. She does train physically nearly every day to keep her physical form up. Even though you think, "well she can kill anything she'd like", she has weaknesses. A strong dragon never let's her guard down.
Magic:
No magic, just withholding enormous amounts of fire and producing a whooping 4 minuet long blasts, long or close. Long range shots take time to charge, reaching up to the exceeding lengths of 455 feet. (The blast is wide because the major amount of fire held within her.) That range is far too high. Please lower it to something more managable to other players. A range that's quadruple the tallest Wyvern's height is unfair, to say the least. 
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Post by Sonus Decessus on Mon Nov 14, 2016 4:05 pm

Bump.

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Post by Neru on Mon Nov 14, 2016 4:09 pm

It seems okay to me. Keep in mind, once more, for the range on that last bit, we haven't solidified ranges yet, if we are going to solidify them. The top range may change. Otherwise,

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Post by Oculus on Mon Nov 14, 2016 4:22 pm

Need to add that they can learn languages easily as a strength as you stated that in languages area.
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Post by Sonus Decessus on Mon Nov 14, 2016 4:26 pm

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Post by Oculus on Mon Nov 14, 2016 4:42 pm

~2/2 Approved~
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Post by Oculus on Thu Nov 17, 2016 3:36 pm

Out for edits
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Post by Sonus Decessus on Thu Nov 24, 2016 8:09 pm

/.I'm almost done with this. I still have to add more to the species and about the Holy Fire./

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Post by Oculus on Thu Nov 24, 2016 10:04 pm

bump when completed then ^^
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Still out for edits?
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Post by Sonus Decessus on Tue Dec 06, 2016 7:38 pm

Mhm

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Post by Sonus Decessus on Tue Dec 06, 2016 7:38 pm

Wait no, hoop

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Post by Oculus on Tue Dec 06, 2016 9:33 pm

what changes were made, hooper? Razz
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Post by Sonus Decessus on Mon Dec 12, 2016 4:21 pm

UHHhhh lets see. Added things about the Brimstone and Holy fire (which I really should go into more detail with but I'm lazy. Organized things and added, subtracted some things.
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Re: Sonus Decessus

Post by Oculus on Mon Dec 12, 2016 4:52 pm

Weakness:
~Breaking of loyalty can lead to years of wrath towards all of the lands, she can lose her cool pretty quickly.

~Sudden fit of rage. Sonus can sometimes become enveloped into rages that turn the world upside down. Her wrath can spread far and wide, and even effect the ones she loves.

How are those two different? Or how is the first one a weakness?

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Move all that to Abilities, as its not magic. Also add how hot the fire can get.
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Post by Sonus Decessus on Tue Dec 13, 2016 2:25 pm

Loyalty and fits of rage are different.

A fit of rage is just a fit of rage. Sudden emotions can flood her.

Loyalty is of another who Sonus trusts, and stabs her in the back.

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Re: Sonus Decessus

Post by Oculus on Fri Dec 23, 2016 2:30 pm

~Approved~
Sorry for delay, I'm il atm
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Post by Oculus on Sun Jan 01, 2017 1:28 pm

~out for edits~
Bump when done and list changes please ^^
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Re: Sonus Decessus

Post by Sonus Decessus on Sun Jan 01, 2017 2:20 pm

Okay bumppp
What I changed:
her length.

I added and subtracted stuff

... Idk if I want to add more soon or not? ;-; It just kinda comes to me at random times and I need to edit shiz

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Post by Sonus Decessus on Sun Jan 01, 2017 9:02 pm

THERE YA'LL COMPLAINING HOW SHE 2 LONGGGG NOW SHE'S PERFECTTTT

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Post by Artemise on Sun Jan 01, 2017 9:03 pm

Oh, and nice drawing, by the way. You might want to resize it tho xD

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Post by Sonus Decessus on Sun Jan 01, 2017 9:04 pm

*shrugs*
I'm too lazy thooo

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Post by Artemise on Sun Jan 01, 2017 9:04 pm

lazy bum. >:c

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Post by Sonus Decessus on Sun Jan 01, 2017 9:04 pm

>:C

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