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Post by Storm on Sat Nov 19, 2016 8:16 am

Personality and the Basics


Name: Storm
Gender: Male
Type: Western
Species: NightWing
Age: 120
Date of Birth: March 4th
Personality: Storm is a friendly and normally happy dragon who likes hanging out with his friends. He does not care what tribe people are from, he is friendly to all tribes, and tries to make friends with other dragons. He is also very helpful. If he sees a dragon in need or one that is struggling with something, he will be the one to volunteer to help out. He cares for other dragons and wishes no bloodshed. Storm is also a good fighter too. Even though he likes making friends from other tribes, he is a good soldier, and will do anything to defend his tribe and/or friends. He is a small dragon, which allows him to dart in and out of bad situations. While Storm is on fire when he gets going, he can get flustered pretty easily if something throws him off.
Hobbies: Explore, read, and tries to stay fit and in shape. He also is fascinated with the sky. He loves to watch the sunrise and sunset as well as stargaze.
Likes: Storm likes to explore, hang out with his friends, read scrolls (adventure novels are his favorites), and relax with his friends and tribe.
Dislikes:  Storm dislikes bloodshed, dragons that want to hurt his friends/tribe, and being bored for an extended period of time.
Fears: Storm fears losing his friends. He values them more than anything. He also fears not being able to protect his friends in times of need.


Origin, Culture, and Family


Place of Origin: On a mountain surrounded by desolate landscape in Shveki.
Tribe: Rogue
Position: No rank, since he is a rogue; at least for right now.
Language: Universal
Home: In the mountains.
Parents: Shadowfang(Dad) and Nya(mom)
Relatives: Taco(Adoptive father)


Physical Appearance and Accessories


Height: 25 feet
Length: 40 feet
Wingspan: 60 feet
Scale/Fur/Feathers: His scales are a purplish blue.
Eyes: Green
Accessories: Storm wears a pendant around his neck with an obsidian outside with a circular red ruby embedded in the center.
Armor: No, but he likes to fight with obsidian battle claws over his talons sharpened to razor sharp points and never dull due to enchantments on it.
Horns/Spikes: Storm has two pale blue, almost white horns on either side of his head. He also has ice blue spikes that go down his body from head to tail.
Overall Appearance: Storm is purple with a small tint of blue with a light purple underside. The scales under his wings shimmer like stars on a dark night, which can make him very hard to see when you are under him at night.


Abilities and Strengths


Abilities: Storm can shoot purple orbs of sleeping dust from out of his mouth, and if an opponent breathes it in, he or she will immediately fall into a deep sleep for about an hour. It can be blocked, but it will make the part of the body that it hits to go numb for a short while. It dissipates when it hits something. The orbs are about a foot in diameter and can go quite a long distance. They can go on for nearly half of a mile before completely dissipating, making it a great long-range weapon. He can also send it out in a mist too, so that it covers more area.
Strengths: Storm's size can be seen as a strength. It allows him to quickly dart in at attacking opponents before quickly retreating so he won't get hit.
Weaknesses: His size can be seen as a weakness, since he is a relatively small dragon, it can cost him dearly to get hit in battle by someone a lot larger than him.
Fighting Style: Storm fights in a couple different ways, depending on the situation. He likes to fight up close and personal, doing quick blows wherever he can. But since he was trained by a group of dragons that excelled at air fighting, he is very fast in the sky and is very good fighting there as well.


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Re: Storm (Moving him from DRF)

Post by Oculus on Sat Nov 19, 2016 9:20 am

If you do direct copy of DRF to DH, just editing format for our app, you are auto Approved except for god abilities ^^
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Post by Storm on Sat Nov 19, 2016 9:21 am

Okay, cool! I am basically doing that, except for a couple minor changes. :)
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Post by Oculus on Sat Nov 19, 2016 10:14 am

List all the things that he can enchant an item with for magic.
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Post by Storm on Sat Nov 19, 2016 10:19 am

Is it too overpowered if he was allowed to enchant any item? I forgot to add the weakness to his magic, so you can look back at that part and see if it is fair.
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Post by Oculus on Sat Nov 19, 2016 10:38 am

Well, what can he do in enchanting? Like what effects.
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Post by Storm on Sat Nov 19, 2016 10:49 am

Obviously not anything too overpowered. But like making weapons that never dull or maybe be even to make something like claws that are on fire but he is not effected. Or other things like a pendant that alerts him when danger is near. But not anything like crazy powerful.
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Post by Oculus on Sat Nov 19, 2016 11:37 am

Put that down on the app Razz
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Post by Storm on Sat Nov 19, 2016 11:57 am

Okay lol. Razz How is that?
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Post by Oculus on Sat Nov 19, 2016 12:20 pm

~1/2 Approved~
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Post by Storm on Sat Nov 19, 2016 12:20 pm

Sad What does that mean?
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Post by Artemise on Sat Nov 19, 2016 3:38 pm

It means you need to get another approval. Apps need 2 approvals before they're considered accepted.

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Post by Storm on Sat Nov 19, 2016 3:42 pm

Yeah, he explained it to me through Skype. Thank you though, Artemise! :)
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Re: Storm (Moving him from DRF)

Post by Neru on Sun Nov 20, 2016 12:24 am

@Storm wrote:
Personality and the Basics


Name: Storm
Gender: Male
Type: Western
Species: NightWing This isn't DRF. There isn't a NightWing tribe.
Age: 15 Western dragons can live up to 3500, as a note.
Date of Birth: March 4th
Personality: Storm is a friendly and normally happy dragon who likes hanging out with his friends. He does not care what tribe people are from, he is friendly to all tribes, and tries to make friends with other dragons. He is also very helpful. If he sees a dragon in need or one that is struggling with something, he will be the one to volunteer to help out. Storm is also a good fighter too. Even though he likes making friends from other tribes, he is a good soldier, and will do anything to defend his tribe and/or friends. He is a small dragon, which allows him to dart in and out of bad situations.
Hobbies: Explore, read, and tries to stay fit and in shape.
Likes: Storm likes to explore, hang out with his friends, read scrolls (adventure novels are his favorites), and relax with his friends and tribe.
Dislikes:  Storm dislikes bloodshed, dragons that want to hurt his friends/tribe, and being bored for an extended period of time.
Fears: Storm fears losing his friends. He values them more than anything. He also fears not being able to protect his friends in times of need.


Origin, Culture, and Family


Place of Origin: On a mountain near the NightWing tribe. Again, no such thing as a NightWing tribe. Please pick an actual tribe, and an actual location. This is DH, not DRF 2.0
Tribe: Rogue
Position: No rank, since he is a rogue; at least for right now.
Language: Universal
Home: In the mountains.
Parents: Shadowfang(Dad) and Nya(mom)
Relatives: Taco(Adoptive father)
History: All of his history is on DRF. Nobody is going to track that down, hun. History is optional, but if you want people to know it, you'd have to type it out.


Physical Appearance and Accessories


Height: 25 feet
Length: 40 feet
Wingspan: 60 feet
Scale/Fur/Feathers: His scales are a purplish blue (as you can see in my picture of him) and he just has normal NightWing scale structure. No such thing as NightWings.
Eyes: Green
Accessories: Storm wears a pendant around his neck with an obsidian outside with a circular red ruby embedded in the center.
Armor: No, but he likes to fight with obsidian battle claws over his talons sharpened to razor sharp points and never dull due to enchantments on it.
Horns/Spikes: Storm has two pale blue, almost white horns on either side of his head. He also has ice blue spikes that go down his body from head to tail.
Overall Appearance: Storm is purple with a small tint of blue with a light purple underside. Being a NightWing, the scales under his wings shimmer like stars on a dark night, which can make him very hard to see when you are under him at night. No such thing as a NightWing here.


Abilities and Strengths


Abilities: Storm can shoot purple orbs of sleeping dust from out of his mouth, and if an opponent breathes it in, he or she will fall into a deep sleep for about an hour. He can also send it out in a mist too, so that it covers more area. How large are these orbs? Can they be blocked? Do they ever disappate, or do they just stay floating around until breathed in? This needs weaknesses. Just casually putting another character to sleep is unfair.
Strengths: Storm's size can be seen as a strength. It allows him to quickly dart in at attacking opponents before quickly retreating so he won't get hit.
Weaknesses: Storm can start to get flustered really easily if something happens. His size can also be seen as a weakness, since he is a relatively small dragon, it can cost him dearly to get hit in battle by someone a lot larger than him.
Fighting Style: Storm fights in a couple different ways, depending on the situation. He likes to fight up close and personal, doing quick blows wherever he can. But since he was trained by the SkyWings, he is very fast in the air and is very good fighting there as well. No such thing as SkyWings. Again, this isn't DRF.
Magic: Storm is capable of using magic. He can enchant items to have certain properties, such as his obsidian claws never dulling, or an item that alerts mentally alerts him whenever danger is near. But all of this is at a cost. Depending on how big the enchantment is, it drains some of his energy. He has to be careful, since if he tries to attempt an enchantment too large, he may lose consciousness or even, if it is extremely large, die. He also has other limitations on his enchantments. He can't enchant something super overpowered. He doesn't know why, but he assumes it's because it shifts the balance in nature. For example, he can't enchant something that causes an earthquake or something(or someone) to blow up into a million pieces. Though he can do less extreme enchantments such as having battle claws that can be on fire that only burns his enemies and he doesn't feel it You need to list exactly what he can chant. Saying that he can enchant items to have "certain properties" gives you a lot of freedom to possibly make things unfair for other people. As for sizes, give us relations. Is too big the size of a basketball? Or a boulder? Everything needs to be perfectly clear. .

All in all, it seems like you didn't read the tribes page. We aren't DRF. This site is much more complex, and very different in nearly every way besides the fact that there are dragons.
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Post by Storm on Tue Nov 22, 2016 1:18 pm

EDITED

Now I have a couple things to say.

1. Species: It says that I can have anything from my imagination or from something that already exists. Just pretend I am making up the NightWing if you have to.

2. Magic: When I said an enchantment too large, I meant that the actual enchantment can't be too large. He can enchant large things, but they can't take up too much energy with something so powerful, like I said in my app.
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