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Post by Storm Sat Nov 19, 2016 8:16 am

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Personality and the Basics


Name: Storm
Gender: Male
Type: Western
Species: NightWing
Age: 120
Date of Birth: March 4th
Personality: Storm is a friendly and normally happy dragon who likes hanging out with his friends. He does not care what tribe people are from, he is friendly to all tribes, and tries to make friends with other dragons. He is also very helpful. If he sees a dragon in need or one that is struggling with something, he will be the one to volunteer to help out. He cares for other dragons and wishes no bloodshed. Storm is also a good fighter too. Even though he likes making friends from other tribes, he is a good soldier, and will do anything to defend his tribe and/or friends. He is a small dragon, which allows him to dart in and out of bad situations. While Storm is on fire when he gets going, he can get flustered pretty easily if something throws him off.
Hobbies: Explore, read, and tries to stay fit and in shape. He also is fascinated with the sky. He loves to watch the sunrise and sunset as well as stargaze.
Likes: Storm likes to explore, hang out with his friends, read scrolls (adventure novels are his favorites), and relax with his friends and tribe.
Dislikes:  Storm dislikes bloodshed, dragons that want to hurt his friends/tribe, and being bored for an extended period of time.
Fears: Storm fears losing his friends. He values them more than anything. He also fears not being able to protect his friends in times of need.


Origin, Culture, and Family


Place of Origin: On a mountain surrounded by desolate landscape in Shveki.
Tribe: Rogue
Position: No rank, since he is a rogue; at least for right now.
Language: Universal
Home: In the mountains.
Parents: Shadowfang(Dad) and Nya(mom)
Relatives: Taco(Adoptive father)


Physical Appearance and Accessories


Height: 25 feet
Length: 40 feet
Wingspan: 60 feet
Scale/Fur/Feathers: His scales are a purplish blue.
Eyes: Green
Accessories: Storm wears a pendant around his neck with an obsidian outside with a circular red ruby embedded in the center.
Armor: No, but he likes to fight with obsidian battle claws over his talons sharpened to razor sharp points and never dull due to enchantments on it.
Horns/Spikes: Storm has two pale blue, almost white horns on either side of his head. He also has ice blue spikes that go down his body from head to tail.
Overall Appearance: Storm is purple with a small tint of blue with a light purple underside. The scales under his wings shimmer like stars on a dark night, which can make him very hard to see when you are under him at night.


Abilities and Strengths


Abilities: Storm can shoot purple orbs of sleeping dust from out of his mouth, and if an opponent breathes it in, he or she will immediately fall into a deep sleep for about an hour. It can be blocked, but it will make the part of the body that it hits to go numb for a short while. It dissipates when it hits something. The orbs are about a foot in diameter and can go quite a long distance. They can go on for nearly half of a mile before completely dissipating, making it a great long-range weapon. He can also send it out in a mist too, so that it covers more area.
Strengths: Storm's size can be seen as a strength. It allows him to quickly dart in at attacking opponents before quickly retreating so he won't get hit.
Weaknesses: His size can be seen as a weakness, since he is a relatively small dragon, it can cost him dearly to get hit in battle by someone a lot larger than him.
Fighting Style: Storm fights in a couple different ways, depending on the situation. He likes to fight up close and personal, doing quick blows wherever he can. But since he was trained by a group of dragons that excelled at air fighting, he is very fast in the sky and is very good fighting there as well.


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Post by Storm Thu Nov 24, 2016 9:39 am

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Post by Neru Thu Nov 24, 2016 10:01 pm

Please keep in mind that I'm a college student; I have a life. I'm also an american, and today was a holiday, so I wasn't on all day. Patience is a virtue. You weren't forgotten.
Storm wrote:
Origin, Culture, and Family


Place of Origin: On a mountain near the NightWing tribe. Again, there's no NightWing tribe.
Tribe: Rogue
Position: No rank, since he is a rogue; at least for right now.
Language: Universal
Home: In the mountains.
Parents: Shadowfang(Dad) and Nya(mom)
Relatives: Taco(Adoptive father)

Abilities and Strengths


Abilities: Storm can shoot purple orbs of sleeping dust from out of his mouth, and if an opponent breathes it in, he or she will fall into a deep sleep for about an hour. It can be blocked, but it will make the part of the body that it hits to go numb for a short while. It dissipates when it hits something. The orbs are about a foot in diameter. He can also send it out in a mist too, so that it covers more area. How much area can the mist cover?
Strengths: Storm's size can be seen as a strength. It allows him to quickly dart in at attacking opponents before quickly retreating so he won't get hit.
Weaknesses: Storm can start to get flustered really easily if something happens. His size can also be seen as a weakness, since he is a relatively small dragon, it can cost him dearly to get hit in battle by someone a lot larger than him.
Fighting Style: Storm fights in a couple different ways, depending on the situation. He likes to fight up close and personal, doing quick blows wherever he can. But since he was trained by a group of dragons that excelled at air fighting, he is very fast in the sky and is very good fighting there as well.
Magic: Storm is capable of using magic. He can enchant items to have certain properties, such as his obsidian claws never dulling, or an item that alerts mentally alerts him whenever danger is near. But all of this is at a cost. Depending on how big the enchantment is, it drains some of his energy. He has to be careful, since if he tries to attempt an enchantment too large, he may lose consciousness or even, if it is extremely large, die. He also has other limitations on his enchantments. He can't enchant something super overpowered. He doesn't know why, but he assumes it's because it shifts the balance in nature. For example, he can't enchant something that causes an earthquake or something(or someone) to blow up into a million pieces. Though he can do less extreme enchantments such as having battle claws that can be on fire that only burns his enemies and he doesn't feel it Whats the difference between being able to enchant something with too large of an enchantment and enchanting something to be overpowered? Examples are your friend. But for now, that makes little sense..
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Post by Storm Tue Nov 29, 2016 3:05 pm

EDITED

Yes, and I am sorry for bugging you... Hopefully now my app is good lol.
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Post by Scortia Wed Nov 30, 2016 5:17 pm

Gonna be helping out Neru here, Storm~
Storm wrote:
Personality and the Basics


Name: Storm
Gender: Male
Type: Western
Species: NightWing
Age: 120
Date of Birth: March 4th
Personality: Storm is a friendly and normally happy dragon who likes hanging out with his friends. He does not care what tribe people are from, he is friendly to all tribes, and tries to make friends with other dragons. He is also very helpful. If he sees a dragon in need or one that is struggling with something, he will be the one to volunteer to help out. Storm is also a good fighter too. Even though he likes making friends from other tribes, he is a good soldier, and will do anything to defend his tribe and/or friends. He is a small dragon, which allows him to dart in and out of bad situations. I would like to make a suggestion. While yes, your app meets the requirement of sentences for your personality, it is always helpful to add a bit more. Just think about your character as an overall person, and try to think of everything that makes them unique. <3 This isn't required, just useful.
Hobbies: Explore, read, and tries to stay fit and in shape. He also is fascinated with the sky. He loves to watch the sunrise and sunset as well as stargaze.
Likes: Storm likes to explore, hang out with his friends, read scrolls (adventure novels are his favorites), and relax with his friends and tribe.
Dislikes:  Storm dislikes bloodshed, dragons that want to hurt his friends/tribe, and being bored for an extended period of time.
Fears: Storm fears losing his friends. He values them more than anything. He also fears not being able to protect his friends in times of need.


Origin, Culture, and Family


Place of Origin: On a mountain surrounded by desolate landscape. Could you specify which continent? (Verula, Shveki, or Layrian?)
Tribe: Rogue
Position: No rank, since he is a rogue; at least for right now.
Language: Universal
Home: In the mountains.
Parents: Shadowfang(Dad) and Nya(mom)
Relatives: Taco(Adoptive father)


Physical Appearance and Accessories


Height: 25 feet
Length: 40 feet
Wingspan: 60 feet
Scale/Fur/Feathers: His scales are a purplish blue.
Eyes: Green
Accessories: Storm wears a pendant around his neck with an obsidian outside with a circular red ruby embedded in the center.
Armor: No, but he likes to fight with obsidian battle claws over his talons sharpened to razor sharp points and never dull due to enchantments on it.
Horns/Spikes: Storm has two pale blue, almost white horns on either side of his head. He also has ice blue spikes that go down his body from head to tail.
Overall Appearance: Storm is purple with a small tint of blue with a light purple underside. The scales under his wings shimmer like stars on a dark night, which can make him very hard to see when you are under him at night.


Abilities and Strengths


Abilities: Storm can shoot purple orbs of sleeping dust from out of his mouth, and if an opponent breathes it in, he or she will fall into a deep sleep for about an hour. It can be blocked, but it will make the part of the body that it hits to go numb for a short while. It dissipates when it hits something. The orbs are about a foot in diameter and can go quite a long distance. They can go on for nearly half of a mile before completely dissipating, making it a great long-range weapon. He can also send it out in a mist too, so that it covers more area. How long does it take to knock someone out once it hits them?
Strengths: Storm's size can be seen as a strength. It allows him to quickly dart in at attacking opponents before quickly retreating so he won't get hit.
Weaknesses: Storm can start to get flustered really easily if something happens. This isn't really a physical weakness. I would move this to his personality.His size can also be seen as a weakness, since he is a relatively small dragon, it can cost him dearly to get hit in battle by someone a lot larger than him.
Fighting Style: Storm fights in a couple different ways, depending on the situation. He likes to fight up close and personal, doing quick blows wherever he can. But since he was trained by a group of dragons that excelled at air fighting, he is very fast in the sky and is very good fighting there as well.
Magic: Storm is capable of using magic. He can enchant items to have certain properties, such as his obsidian claws never dulling, or an item that alerts mentally alerts him whenever danger is near. But all of this is at a cost. Depending on how big the enchantment is, it drains some of his energy. He has to be careful, since if he tries to attempt an enchantment too large, he may lose consciousness or even, if it is extremely large, die. He also has other limitations on his enchantments. He can't enchant something super overpowered. He doesn't know why, but he assumes it's because it shifts the balance in nature. For example, he can't enchant something that causes an earthquake or something(or someone) to blow up into a million pieces. He also can only enchant things that aren't too large, the size of a boulder being the largest. Though he can do less extreme enchantments such as having battle claws that can be on fire that only burns his enemies and he doesn't feel it.I would try to specify this more. Such as what is the largest item he can enchant, and what is the most powerful enchantment he can cast, and what are the negatives of said enchantment?
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Post by Storm Mon Dec 05, 2016 11:19 am

EDITED

I removed the magic part since I am so sick of having to explain every small detail and keep revising it.
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Post by Scortia Sat Dec 10, 2016 3:01 pm

Storm wrote:
Personality and the Basics


Name: Storm
Gender: Male
Type: Western
Species: NightWing
Age: 120
Date of Birth: March 4th
Personality: Storm is a friendly and normally happy dragon who likes hanging out with his friends. He does not care what tribe people are from, he is friendly to all tribes, and tries to make friends with other dragons. He is also very helpful. If he sees a dragon in need or one that is struggling with something, he will be the one to volunteer to help out. He cares for other dragons and wishes no bloodshed.  Storm is also a good fighter too. Even though he likes making friends from other tribes, he is a good soldier, and will do anything to defend his tribe and/or friends. He is a small dragon, which allows him to dart in and out of bad situations. While Storm is on fire when he gets going, he can get flustered pretty easily if something throws him off.
Hobbies: Explore, read, and tries to stay fit and in shape. He also is fascinated with the sky. He loves to watch the sunrise and sunset as well as stargaze.
Likes: Storm likes to explore, hang out with his friends, read scrolls (adventure novels are his favorites), and relax with his friends and tribe.
Dislikes:  Storm dislikes bloodshed, dragons that want to hurt his friends/tribe, and being bored for an extended period of time.
Fears: Storm fears losing his friends. He values them more than anything. He also fears not being able to protect his friends in times of need.


Origin, Culture, and Family


Place of Origin: On a mountain surrounded by desolate landscape in Shveki.
Tribe: Rogue
Position: No rank, since he is a rogue; at least for right now.
Language: Universal
Home: In the mountains.
Parents: Shadowfang(Dad) and Nya(mom)
Relatives: Taco(Adoptive father)


Physical Appearance and Accessories


Height: 25 feet
Length: 40 feet
Wingspan: 60 feet
Scale/Fur/Feathers: His scales are a purplish blue.
Eyes: Green
Accessories: Storm wears a pendant around his neck with an obsidian outside with a circular red ruby embedded in the center.
Armor: No, but he likes to fight with obsidian battle claws over his talons sharpened to razor sharp points and never dull due to enchantments on it.
Horns/Spikes: Storm has two pale blue, almost white horns on either side of his head. He also has ice blue spikes that go down his body from head to tail.
Overall Appearance: Storm is purple with a small tint of blue with a light purple underside. The scales under his wings shimmer like stars on a dark night, which can make him very hard to see when you are under him at night.


Abilities and Strengths


Abilities: Storm can shoot purple orbs of sleeping dust from out of his mouth, and if an opponent breathes it in, he or she will immediately fall into a deep sleep for about an hour. It can be blocked, but it will make the part of the body that it hits to go numb for a short while. It dissipates when it hits something. The orbs are about a foot in diameter and can go quite a long distance. They can go on for nearly half of a mile before completely dissipating, making it a great long-range weapon. He can also send it out in a mist too, so that it covers more area. This is way too overpowered. I would say to have the sleeping orb take time before it makes the opponent fall asleep, such as up to three posts, since an opponent can become very vulnerable when asleep.
Strengths: Storm's size can be seen as a strength. It allows him to quickly dart in at attacking opponents before quickly retreating so he won't get hit.
Weaknesses: His size can be seen as a weakness, since he is a relatively small dragon, it can cost him dearly to get hit in battle by someone a lot larger than him. Please add more weaknesses.
Fighting Style: Storm fights in a couple different ways, depending on the situation. He likes to fight up close and personal, doing quick blows wherever he can. But since he was trained by a group of dragons that excelled at air fighting, he is very fast in the sky and is very good fighting there as well.
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Post by Storm Mon Dec 12, 2016 8:03 am

You know what? I am sick of this. Goodbye.
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Post by Storm Thu Dec 15, 2016 7:17 am

I'm sorry, but I am just tired of editing this so I am done. Have a nice day.
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If you do not wish to finish this then I will move it into the Old/Inactive characters spot. If you'd like to work on it later, contact a staff member to move it out.

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