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Arkhor - Guardian of the Seas

Post by Arkhor on Mon Nov 21, 2016 3:35 am



Personality and the Basics


Name: Arkhor
Gender: Male
Type: Western Dragon
Species: Sea Dragon
Age: 22
Date of Birth: July 26th
Personality: Ark is a protective, but kind Dragon. Who looks after his own kind to provide safety for the lands. Ark believes in peace and wishes no harm to any Dragon no matter the allegiance. But will defend himself and others if the need arises. He is sociable, open to make friends and will help those who are in need. A truly loyal Dragon. He believes all life is special, where life is for life and he must protect it from those who wish to destroy or hinder it. Upon all of ages hatchlings are the most special, as they are creation it self and killing or harming such is the worst crime.
Hobbies: Mostly Ark spends time doing what interests him, whether its helping the tribe, exploring or using his powers to try something new.
Likes:
Exploration: Ark loves exploring the unknown, whether it be a new cave or mountains.
Stargazing: He also like looking up into the night sky, which he also uses to help him plot areas.
Swimming: Ark loves swimming and exploring the depths.  
Dislikes:
Being Threatened: Ark doesn't like being threatened, or others being threatened.
Aggressiveness: Pretty much simple, he dislikes aggressive behaviour  
Bullies: Ark hates bullies who pick on weak Dragons or his friends.
Fears: Being captured and trapped is one of his largest fears, yet the worst one would be having to see his loved ones perish or he failed to protect them.


Origin, Culture, and Family


Place of Origin: Near where his parents lived out in the ocean.
Tribe: Lakara
Position: Seal
Language: Aquatic + Universal
Home: A sea cliff cave, dry yet easy access to the water.
Parents: Father: Tharus , Mother: Karu
Siblings: Unknown
Relatives: None that he knows about.
Mate: Not yet
Offspring: N/A
History:
Alone....

His story began on a far away island deep into the sea, where his parents where part of an isolated group of Lakara. In total there where seven including his parents, still being part of the Lakara they had an important task patrolling the south border. Outpost Aqua it was named, based off shore a large island. His parents where happy, and had only became mates 2 years before Arkhor was born.

His father, Tharus was the respected leader among the group, while his mother, Karu was a seahorse who loved all living beings. In total they where parents to three hatchlings(fry), 1 male and 2 females. They lived happily with the rest of the group, which mostly was made of Seals but having a Salmon for scouting and hunting. They where certainly well equipped, prepared for almost anything. But... Sadly it wasn't to last leaving Arkhor alone in the distant Ocean.

On the last day everything was normal at the outpost, routine patrols revealed nothing. It was calm, a almost peaceful night. With The newly born Arkhor with two of his sisters where now at the age of 1. As they quietly slept together, A loud booming roar awoke the family, coming from the Ocean a large group of Sea serpents attacked the outpost almost randomly, Arkhor never really knew why the outpost was attacked but in wake of the disaster he would lose his whole family. The fighting didn't last very long most of the dragons stationed there where in their dens, where most where missing in the aftermath. Ark didnt know how he survived, maybe his parents saved him, or maybe it was just luck. Being found on beach close to the now ruined structure by a routine convoy checking on the outpost he was taken back to the palace where he was raised up with a group of other Lakara which later he aimed to follow his father's footsteps.


Physical Appearance and Accessories


Height: 44ft
Length: 50ft
Wingspan: In total: 75ft
Scale/Fur/Feathers: Sapphire light blue, with markings of orange
Eyes: Orange
Accessories: Nope
Armor: He only wears armour out on patrol, which is mostly a sliver covering his chest along with his more vulnerable parts.
Horns/Spikes: 2 horns on his head like the pic above, with fins along his back and tail.
Overall Appearance: Mostly like the picture above, with being covered in blue scales along with orange patterns. Fairly muscular due to his role for the tribe. His tail being a generic shape yet with fins extending all the way down his back and tail. Webbed paws to help him swim along with fins on his legs. The fins close up when out of water but thanks to his species his scales have a constant shine which only goes away when hes out of water for a number of days.


Abilities and Strengths


Abilities:
Water control, Being able to control water along with creating shields and attacks surrounding others. Yet this requires for him to have energy, generally he can only hold water up for an 2 posts, while constant use of streams his energy would only last 4 posts. Yet that's constant use, attacks against him disrupt his control as he needs to concentrate. Shapes include orbs, flow of water (stream), shield like domes. Weaknesses would include fire as the water would evaporate along with wind and solid objects to block the water. Without constant use his energy time is doubled leading to 8 posts max.

Water Creation, His more stronger yet taxing ability. With being able to generate water from the air due to water vapour he can also control water into forming shapes. Yet these are completely temporary though he can create animals along with changing features of others. Again this requires his concentration therefore it can be disrupted, If Ark runs out of energy he would collapse from exhaustion leaving him vulnerable. There are limits to what he can create, with being only able to create small animals and fish. When using this ability depending on the size it can last from 10 posts to 3. After his he ends the control the said creation turns back into water. Same weaknesses as his controlling water along with being unable to control the creation.

What he can create:
Medium to small sized fish: Salmon, Tuna,... etc
Small animals for example: Mice, rabbits.
Fins on other dragons
Gills
(Only temporary)

Hes only able to create 2 objects at one time inless its a medium sized animal which hes only able to create one.

Unable to create sentient life

Energy Recovery, Ark is able to recover energy slowly while being in contact with water, generally it takes an 20 posts to fully recover. Though using his other abilities the recharge rate can't keep up.

Strengths: Physical Strength mostly as he is a protector for the tribe, with a muscular build he focuses his strength towards bashing foes and making use of his tail.
Weaknesses: Being trapped and away from water, loosing focus from disrupting abilities. Fast foes due to his form hes not the fastest dragon.  
Fighting Style: Using his strength he engages in close combat, while using his water abilities to strike foes wearing them down.
Magic: Only his Abilities.


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Post by Scortia on Mon Nov 21, 2016 7:25 pm

Ark, did you make that reference picture? o3o

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Post by Arkhor on Mon Nov 21, 2016 8:12 pm

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Post by Scortia on Tue Nov 22, 2016 1:11 pm

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[21:39:56] Silhouette : (Why the pic?)
[21:40:05] * Blaze isnt over dramatic, he just doesnt like ardent being "one" with Scort.
[21:40:13] Elyn Entezz : Because they're hetalia trash :@

Mixups are Fun:
[21:53:14 19/11/2016]@ Oculus : are you guys mixing up Hetalia with Hentai?
[21:53:26 19/11/2016] Skylar : (*cough blaze/ardent*)
[21:53:31 19/11/2016] Silhouette : (I think that was it Oculus)


Famous Quotes:

"Man, I wish my art didn't suck." - Scortia, commenting on her own art
"Yep, there's wind." - Connie Maheswaran
"YO, WHO'S BABY IS THIS?" - John Laurens, in a comic I read
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Re: Arkhor - Guardian of the Seas

Post by Neru on Wed Nov 23, 2016 3:12 pm

This is being held out for one more check, as it was found that some parts of this app were incomplete. All things that need to be fixed will be written in red.

@Arkhor wrote:
Abilities and Strengths


Abilities:
Water control, Being able to control water along with creating shields and attacks surrounding others. Yet this requires for him to have energy, generally he can only hold water up for an hour. Yet that's constant use, attacks against him disrupt his control as he needs to concentrate. An hour is far too long. Try lowering it a lot, or maybe even putting a post count rather than a duration of time. As for the ability itself, it's far too OP. You need to define very clearly what this ability does. What *exactly* can he make from water? Do the sizes of the objects affect how long he can hold them up? Put it this way. If it has a loophole in which you could attack/defend/support in an unfair way, we can't accept it. This also needs some weaknesses.

Water Creation, His more stronger yet taxing ability. With being able to generate water from the air due to water vapour he can also control water into forming shapes. Yet these are completely temporary though he can create animals along with changing features of others. Again this requires his concentration therefore it can be disrupted, If Ark runs out of energy he would collapse from exhaustion leaving him vulnerable. There are limits to what he can create, with being only able to create small animals and fish. When using this ability depending on the size it can last from 2 hours to 30 minutes. Again, far too long. Lower that a lot. And, same as above, no vagueness. You need to define exactly what he can create. This also needs a weakness.

Energy Recovery, Ark is able to recover energy slowly while being in contact with water, generally it takes an hour to fully recover. Though using his other abilities the recharge rate can't keep up. Change that to a post count or something similar, that could easily be cheated through a time skip. :/

Strengths: Physical Strength mostly as he is a protector for the tribe, with a muscular build he focuses his strength towards bashing foes and making use of his tail.
Weaknesses: Being trapped and away from water, loosing focus from disrupting abilities. Fast foes due to his form hes not the fastest dragon.  
Fighting Style: Using his strength he engages in close combat, while using his water abilities to strike foes wearing them down.
Magic: Water magic like stated with his abilities. Woah waoh woah, hold up. What type of water magic? Is this saying he can only do what is in his abilities, or just all water magic? If it's the latter, you're going to have to change it. Your abilities and magics need to be clearly defined.

All in all, define things. If it's vague, I'm probably not going to accept it, as that leaves space for you to be OP and unfair in combat.
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Post by Neru on Thu Nov 24, 2016 9:53 pm

@Arkhor wrote:
Abilities and Strengths


Abilities:
Water control, Being able to control water along with creating shields and attacks surrounding others. Yet this requires for him to have energy, generally he can only hold water up for an 2 posts, while constant use of streams his energy would only last 4 posts. Yet that's constant use, attacks against him disrupt his control as he needs to concentrate. Shapes include orbs, flow of water (stream), shield like domes. Weaknesses would include fire as the water would evaporate along with wind and solid objects to block the water. So you're saying if use isn't constant he could hold it up for longer? How much longer?

Water Creation, His more stronger yet taxing ability. With being able to generate water from the air due to water vapour he can also control water into forming shapes. Yet these are completely temporary though he can create animals along with changing features of others. Again this requires his concentration therefore it can be disrupted, If Ark runs out of energy he would collapse from exhaustion leaving him vulnerable. There are limits to what he can create, with being only able to create small animals and fish. When using this ability depending on the size it can last from 10 posts to 3. After his he ends the control the said creation turns back into water. Same weaknesses as his controlling water along with being unable to control the creation.

What he can create:
Medium to small sized fish: Salmon, Tuna,... etc
Small animals for example: Mice, rabbits.
Fins on other dragons
Gills
(Only temporary)

Unable to create sentient life How many can he create at once?

Energy Recovery, Ark is able to recover energy slowly while being in contact with water, generally it takes an 20 posts to fully recover. Though using his other abilities the recharge rate can't keep up.

Strengths: Physical Strength mostly as he is a protector for the tribe, with a muscular build he focuses his strength towards bashing foes and making use of his tail.
Weaknesses: Being trapped and away from water, loosing focus from disrupting abilities. Fast foes due to his form hes not the fastest dragon.  
Fighting Style: Using his strength he engages in close combat, while using his water abilities to strike foes wearing them down.
Magic: Only his Abilities.
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