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Post by Crystal on Tue Nov 22, 2016 9:01 pm

I'll add a picture if i decide to draw one or not.
Personality and the Basics




Name: Crystal Galaxy Lace
Gender: Female
Type: Western Dragon (They live to 3500, but her species only lives to about 96.)
Species: A terrestrial western dragon species, Icy stars (that I just made up.)
The icy star is a dragon that most likely has some kind of space-like thing in their genes, along with ice genes.
Age: 23
Date of Birth: July 13th.
Personality: Crystal is usually very nice to most. She is sort of quick to assume if they’re nice or not. She struggles giving “suspicious” dragons a chance. Crystal has a temper, which can sometimes get her into trouble. She snaps a little when under pressure, and sometimes makes sarcastic remarks when they aren’t needed. When bad things occur, she attempts to make things better with a joke, usually making things worse.

Behind her nice guy shtick, Crystal is a very odd individual. She seems very nice, but she blames herself for lots of bad things, like her brother being killed, or her sister killing herself. She was slowly becoming more insane, but it didn’t really show. She held it all in, only lashing out on occasions. Her holding it in only made it worse, although she never realized this.

Crystal, when it comes to ‘romance,’ struggles. She can handle about 2/3 complements, and if theres any more she gives up completely. She blushes very easily, and finds it easier to flirt with dragonesses than dragons.
Hobbies: Crystal, in her free time, draws and writes. She enjoys writing and drawing to get her feelings, letting out the creative flow in her.
Likes:
-Drawing/Art
-Writing/Reading
-Sculpting/Statues
-Flying
-Night Skies
Dislikes:
-Fire
-Hot things
-Cliché things
-Writer's Block
Fears: She is afraid of death, the thought of it makes her shiver.
She is afraid of losing her loved ones, as she’s lost all her other family.
She is claustrophobic (afraid of tight spaces), and if in one, her breathing gets shaky and she hyperventilates.



Origin, Culture, and Family





Place of Origin:
Icello region
Tribe: Kaamil
Position: Due to her creativity, this dragoness holds 3 ranks; Artist, Artisan, and Author.
Language: She mainly speaks Tundaic, but she can (sort of) speak Universal, and only a tad Arsa.
Home: Icello region.
Parents: Misty (Kaamil) and Jupiter (Xoya)
Siblings: Two, Owl and Melody (both desceased)
Relatives: Misty was half Kaamil, and half Lakara, while Jupiter was pure Xoya.
Mate: no ;n;
Offspring: no.
History:oh boy this’ll be fun.
Crystal was born to Misty and Jupiter, hatching last after Owl and Melody. Due to her father being Xoyan, she and her family would sneak over every once in a while just to visit. One day, her father gave her one of his works, a satchel made from black leather. Unironically, that was the last time they had seen each other. Supposedly he was killed by another tribe member when they found he was with a Kaamil, but that was only what Crystal had heard. Her mother died from a disease soon after, and left Owl to take care of his (not so) younger siblings. This is when, Crystal realized, Melody got sad. She wouldn’t talk as often, and she never really smiled. Owl had gotten in a fight with a Ki’Sha at one point, this ending in; you guessed it, his death. Melody got even sadder at this point, and she went mute. She wouldn’t even talk to Crystal, which ended up in Crystal not even putting forth an effort. Melody ended up walking straight into Ki’Sha territory, ON PURPOSE might I add, and got herself killed. Crystal blamed herself for this. She started to turn cold; keeping what was left of her sanity by drawing and writing her feelings out.


Physical Appearance and Accessories




Height: 16 ft
Length: 32 ft
Wingspan: 19 per for each (so I think that’s 38???)
Scale/Fur/Feathers: Crystal’s scales are diamond shaped, a very light and metallic blue.
Eyes: One is (Bright) Cyan, the other is quite different, changing after Melody died. The white of the eye had turned black, and the iris did too. The pupil, however, was a lavender color.
Accessories: Crystal, due to not being full blood Kaamil, wears a scarf that’s a soft violet. She has a black leather satchel, seeming to hold anything surprisingly. She mainly carries potions of different kinds.
Armor: Not really, she can coat her body with a crystal-looking frost, a very light thing that looks heavier than it actually is. It mainly is meant for agility, not defense, which tbh makes it pointless, but whatever. Barely gives her any more defense, but she doesn’t mind.
Horns/Spikes: Crystal has pastel blue horns, that look similar to goat horns. She didn’t really have spikes running down her back, they were more short, rounded and dull than tall and pointy.
Overall Appearance: Crystal is a very slim dragoness, not very bulky at all. She had a long slender neck and slim legs, and a visible ribcage. It wasn’t that she starved herself; it was just the fact that she had a very thin layer of scales. Her wings are elegant, large, and have pastel blue membrane with tiny white dots. Most think that it’s supposed to represent snow, but they are actually star patterns, and can briefly glow at night. Crystal, unlike most dragons, has opposable thumbs, helping her draw/write/whatever.


Abilities and Strengths




Abilities: Crystal, like most of Kaamil, can use Ice magic. She can shoot snowballs and icicles from her maw, and can cover smaller items with frost. Inheriting from her Father's side, she also has nightvision.
Strengths: Crystal does really good against water. She can freeze water up to 5 ft in front of her, but it melts quickly.
She does well in higher atmospheres, so fighting against dragons who are weak to this gives her an advantage.
Crystal, due to her slender build, is a lot quicker than bulky dragons. She runs to dodge, but this doesn’t always work.
Weaknesses: Crystal does not do well in hot environments. Her energy is completely drained if she’s there for over an hour, and her attacks are weaker.
Although crystal is quicker than bulky dragons, she is still extremely frail and small. If they hit her, depending on their size, she could possibly be kinda knocked back (a few feet). She also could be easily pinned.
Crystal doesn’t do well against certain chemicals, such as acid or poison. It damages her thin layers of scales, and would probably leave a mark for a few days, or a scar depending on the intensity.
Crystal trusts most dragons easily, therefore it's easy to take ahold of her and make her vunerable.
Fighting Style:Crystal prefers fights in the skies, always attempting to get the higher ground. She doesn’t use her claws very often, and sticks to magic/ability-based attacks.
Magic: Due to Crystal’s mother being a half Chinese dragon, Crystal had been taught how to levitate. She cannot fly without using her wings, but she is perfectly capable of hovering two to three feet off the ground.


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Re: Crystal the Creative

Post by Scortia on Thu Nov 24, 2016 8:20 am

The only thing I can really say is to not be able to freeze all water, and not be able to turn all solid things to frost.

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Re: Crystal the Creative

Post by Crystal on Thu Nov 24, 2016 10:36 pm

"Abilities: Crystal, like most of Kaamil, can use Ice magic. She can shoot snowballs and icicles from her maw, and can cover smaller items with frost. Due to being half Xoya, she has night vision too.
Strengths: Crystal does really good against water. She can freeze water up to 5 ft in front of her, but it melts quickly.
She does well in higher atmospheres, so fighting against dragons who are weak to this gives her an advantage.
Crystal, due to her slender build, is a lot quicker than bulky dragons. She runs to dodge, but this doesn’t always work."

Limited the water thing, and switched out the frost thing with night vision.

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Re: Crystal the Creative

Post by Crystal on Tue Nov 29, 2016 1:49 pm

??bump

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Post by Scortia on Wed Nov 30, 2016 4:46 pm

Okay, so I looked over your app again. It seems you contradict yourself a lot in your personality. You start off by saying she's nice when she wants to be, then go on to talk about how she's sarcastic and whatnot.

I would try first explaining in what circumstances is she nice, and what that means as a whole. Just elaborate.

I also think you need at least one weakness that could be exploited by any dragon. I don't exactly like weaknesses such as pressure, as the combat rper may be inexperienced, and just gloss over this entirely when fighting in order to get the upperhand. Not saying you will, just saying its a precaution. Razz

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[21:39:56] Silhouette : (Why the pic?)
[21:40:05] * Blaze isnt over dramatic, he just doesnt like ardent being "one" with Scort.
[21:40:13] Elyn Entezz : Because they're hetalia trash :@

Mixups are Fun:
[21:53:14 19/11/2016]@ Oculus : are you guys mixing up Hetalia with Hentai?
[21:53:26 19/11/2016] Skylar : (*cough blaze/ardent*)
[21:53:31 19/11/2016] Silhouette : (I think that was it Oculus)


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"Man, I wish my art didn't suck." - Scortia, commenting on her own art
"Yep, there's wind." - Connie Maheswaran
"YO, WHO'S BABY IS THIS?" - John Laurens, in a comic I read
"so i am basically right." - SolsticeEquinox, about coding with Acer
"Dun worry about it." - Scortia, on various occasions
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Re: Crystal the Creative

Post by Crystal on Wed Nov 30, 2016 5:57 pm

Edited to where the sarcasm isnt as common and changed the weakness.


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Re: Crystal the Creative

Post by Scortia on Wed Nov 30, 2016 5:59 pm

1/2 approved! Now go bug Zolt of Oculus ;P

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[21:40:05] * Blaze isnt over dramatic, he just doesnt like ardent being "one" with Scort.
[21:40:13] Elyn Entezz : Because they're hetalia trash :@

Mixups are Fun:
[21:53:14 19/11/2016]@ Oculus : are you guys mixing up Hetalia with Hentai?
[21:53:26 19/11/2016] Skylar : (*cough blaze/ardent*)
[21:53:31 19/11/2016] Silhouette : (I think that was it Oculus)


Famous Quotes:

"Man, I wish my art didn't suck." - Scortia, commenting on her own art
"Yep, there's wind." - Connie Maheswaran
"YO, WHO'S BABY IS THIS?" - John Laurens, in a comic I read
"so i am basically right." - SolsticeEquinox, about coding with Acer
"Dun worry about it." - Scortia, on various occasions
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Post by Oculus on Wed Nov 30, 2016 10:10 pm

From what I remember, ALL western dragons live up to 3500, including all the species. I can double check with Zolt, but I don't think having a species max lifespan being different is allowed.

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Night vision: Unlike DRF, DH does not have tribe specific powers, meaning being xoya =/= night vision. While lots of Xoyan's are shadow or dark dragons with those sort of powers, it is not a tribe power. Just clarifying this so others don't assume you HAVE to be xoya to have night time powers

Rest looks good, so just need to discuss with Zolt about species lifespan when all western dragons are 3500 years.
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Post by Crystal on Mon Dec 05, 2016 7:22 pm

I dunno about the age thing, but i did edit the Xoya thing. I never see Zolt on, so ???

I honestly think it'd be fun to have different species that live to different ages.

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Post by Scortia on Sat Dec 10, 2016 2:57 pm

Lol, the age is a maximum age set so that dragons don't live forever. I never set a minimum age requirement, so dragon species can live as long as you want them to live as long as it doesn't exceed the maximum. Razz

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[21:39:56] Silhouette : (Why the pic?)
[21:40:05] * Blaze isnt over dramatic, he just doesnt like ardent being "one" with Scort.
[21:40:13] Elyn Entezz : Because they're hetalia trash :@

Mixups are Fun:
[21:53:14 19/11/2016]@ Oculus : are you guys mixing up Hetalia with Hentai?
[21:53:26 19/11/2016] Skylar : (*cough blaze/ardent*)
[21:53:31 19/11/2016] Silhouette : (I think that was it Oculus)


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"Man, I wish my art didn't suck." - Scortia, commenting on her own art
"Yep, there's wind." - Connie Maheswaran
"YO, WHO'S BABY IS THIS?" - John Laurens, in a comic I read
"so i am basically right." - SolsticeEquinox, about coding with Acer
"Dun worry about it." - Scortia, on various occasions
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Re: Crystal the Creative

Post by Loran on Fri Dec 30, 2016 9:48 pm

Bump??? Scott said the age limit was fine occy, so approve plz

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Post by Artemise on Sat Dec 31, 2016 8:10 pm

2/2 Approved!! :D


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Post by Sonus Decessus on Mon Jan 02, 2017 9:18 am

Art, that would be 2/2 approved.

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