Ngozi the Thick Scaled

Name: Ngozi
Pronunciation: Na-Goz-Ei
Gender: Male
Type: Drake
Species: Swamp Drake
Age: 320
Date of Birth: 11-10
Personality: Ngozi is an honorable type of dragon. Despite his fierce look, the drake is actually quite gentle, though he can often come off as uncaring. This is mostly do to him being quite blunt, and to the point. Despite his honorable nature, Ngozi isn't unwilling to fight dirty, so long as his opponent does the same. He is also know for being too serious at times, and can't take a joke.
Hobbies: Sparring, singing, swimming, wading.
Likes: Order, hunting, fighting
Dislikes: Disorder, unruly dragons, Rogues
Fears: Death, wyverns.




Place of Origin: Shveki
Tribe: Valeterrene
Position: Nragin
Language: Vlow, Arretiz
Home: Swamps
Parents: Jiwe (mother), Kiwango (father)
Siblings: A brother and sister.
Relatives: None
Mate: None
Offspring: Nope.
History: Ngozi’s childhood was fairly normal. He was always quiet a large dragon for his age, and he tended to not have much trouble with others. What did have an issue with, however, was understanding them. He had trouble understanding the various metaphors and saying most dragons used. After he came of age, the drake, who enjoyed both fighting and order, decided to become a Nragin.

During his training, Ngozi encountered a Rogue wyvern who ended up attacking him. Despite his strength, the speedy dragon was able to almost kill the larger drake. Thankfully a full fledged Nragin stopped the Rogue, saving Ngozi’s life, but the attack still left its scars. Ngozi developed a dislike of Rogues, and full fledged fear of wyverns, after the attack. He also became much more brutal when combating none Valeterrenes.

The next three centuries of Ngozi’s life has been spent trying to keep some order and peace within the Valeterrene people, and fighting off any dragons that dare try to attack.




Height: 50 ft (quadrupedal), 80 ft (bipedal)
Length: 100 ft
Wingspan: No wings.
Scale/Fur/Feathers: Thick, plate-like brown scales.
Eyes: Black
Accessories: None
Armor: His own plates.
Horns/Spikes: He has two long and two horns on his head, with both being jagged.
Overall Appearance: Ngozi looks almost like a cross between a sail-less spinosaur and an ankylosaur. His long body and tail is covered in plate-like scales, and his tail is tipped with a bonny club. His forpaws also have a massive set of claws, three on each, and cause him to walk on his knuckles. His jaws are also massive and powerful.




Abilities: Blast Roar: A roar that causes a concussive blast. This attack can be used once every hour, and has a range of 70 ft.
Strengths: Ngozi is very strong and able to lift dragons up to 50% larger than himself. His tail can also be used as a powerful weapon. His plates make him a very durable dragon. He can hold his breath for up to 5 hours.
Weaknesses: He cannot grab objects very easily due to his claws and tail club. He is slow moving, only able to run about half as fast as your average dragon. His stomach scales are weak. Due to his weight, Ngozi has to walk quadrupedally on thin enough mud. He doesn't always pick up on cues, and has to be told exactly what is wanted. He can't handle fire based attacks well.
Fighting Style: Ngozi is a brutal fighter, using his claws, tail-club, and jaws to tear into opponents.
Magic: No.

Just a few little details to clean up :)

"History: Nothing special." - You don't have to change this, but it is always nice to have a history down for your character, as it can help determine many aspects of how they act in the present time.

"Blast Roar: A roar that causes a concussive blast." - Is there a limit to how frequently he can do this? Also, how large is the range/AOE, as well as it's effectiveness at range.


"He is slow moving." - How slow in comparison to others?

Bump. Added history, details to Blast Roar, and details to his slowness.

1/2 approved~

2/2 Approved.