Juneosiren

Personality and the Basics




Name: Juneosiren Kageye Siriso Calitharette
Pronunciation: Jun-ao-siren
Gender: Male
Type: Western
Species: Frightsoul Mirror
Age: 864
Date of Birth: September
Personality: Juneosiren acts very guarded and stern, not really thriving in social situations. He keeps his own thoughts and problems to himself, and if questioned about them, he'll often retreat into himself. He tends not to make friends due to his quiet demeanor, preferring to keep to himself, reading.
He avoids crowds due to their noise, and doesn't really enjoy speaking with other dragons, mainly due to his weak grasp on the universal language.
Hobbies: Study languages, reading.
Likes: The sounds of a small bubbling brook, birds,
Dislikes: Extremely annoying or loud noises, war, swimming, bright lights.
Fears: Complete silence, being alone, Thunder, cold deep bodies of water




Origin, Culture, and Family




Place of Origin: Icello Region, in the Tomb
Tribe: Kaamil
Position: Researcher, (Secretly a Kyion)
Language: Katysesin, very little Universal.
Home: The outer city of the Kaamil.
Parents: Talresen, Malishare.
Siblings: Tinuviel, Shigane, Barune, Hareen.
Relatives:
Mate: 
Offspring: 
History: Juneosiren, alike his sister, remembers almost nothing of his past. Sometimes he gets glimpses of memory, but nothing concrete. 







Physical Appearance and Accessories




Height: 21 ft
Length: 50ft
Wingspan: 84ft
Scale/Fur/Feathers: light Icy blue scales with white patches on his underbelly, he has dark tiger-like stripes on his wings and upper body, fading halfway down his length.
Across his head and halfway down his right side, is a massive lightning scar.
Eyes: Very pale, with sickly white blind pupils.
Accessories: 
Armor: Black leather armor.
Horns/Spikes: Medium sized black horns that curve slightly down from behind his ears and head fans, and three sets off short back spikes on his neck and tail.
Overall Appearance:  (Temp ref from Flight Rising)





Abilities and Strengths




Abilities: 


Energy Syphon
June can absorb magic from spells casted around him. The more powerful the spell, the less is taken in. For example, the energy taken from a small bolt of magic would be way greater than the energy syphoned by a powerful fireball.


Lightning Syphon
Juneosiren is unaffected by electricity magic and spells, instead, he absorbs the electricity and can use it.


Electric Manipulation
June can turn lightning energy into small objects, or if he has enough energy, two long swords.


Extreme Hearing
Juneosiren’s hearing is very good, (especially for a Mirror, who don't have the best hearing compared to other species). He can hear the heartbeats and breathing of nearly every creature within 60 ft of him normally, and when focusing deeply, he can hear sounds, slightly muffled, 100ft out from himself (which he rarely does, since the input can be overwhelming), and can sense vibrations in the ground of the footsteps of other drakes or creatures for around 40ft out.


Breath
June can hold his breath for up to 20 minutes.





Strengths: 


Agile
June is extremely agile, being able to evade, get out of tough spots, and navigate storms with ease.


Tinkerer
June is an experienced Artificer, and can recreate Mirror technology and enchantment runes over a period of time and with schematics from the tomb's books.
 


Weaknesses: 

Blindness
If he is in a completely new environment, or is affected by a deafening or spell that magically silenced the area, June will have trouble navigating due to being completely reliant on hearing. Also, if a extremely loud sound (such as an explosion or etc) occurs really close to him, June can be temporarily stunned and disorientated.

Healing Magic Immunity
An unfortunate side affect of his crystal heart, healing magic is completely void when casted on him, not affected by it at all.

Crystal Heart
Juneosiren/s heart doesn't work right, and he is kept going by a strange magic crystal contraption-slightly larger than a drakes heart, implanted in his chest, if this crystal is damaged, he struggles to cast spells, and will slowly begin to decline as he can’t create/absorb enough energy to keep his heart going. If it is completely destroyed/removed, he will not have the strength to fly, run, or do anything extraneous. If left without his heart crystal for too long, a week at most, he'll die.
The crystal can be repaired or replaced easily, within the Kaamil, as the crystal used for the contraption grows inside the tombs, and June knows how to repair the contraption piece if it is damaged with minimal materials.


A full charge in the crystal lasts a few hours (10ish posts to a topic, depends on the situation), but with casting spells, may only last for a hour or less (5 or less posts)


Fighting Style: Juneosiren’s fighting style is sneaky and cunning.


Magic: 


Lightning Lure
June creates a lash of lightning energy that strikes at one creature within the range of the spell (50ft). The target is pulled up to 10 feet in a straight line toward him and is shocked by the lightning lash if it is within 5 feet of him. A strong dragon can escape the lash. (Can be casted three times a topic)


Thunder Wave
This spell causes wave of thunderous force sweeps out from June. Each creature in a 55-foot cube originating from him is pushed 50 feet away from him. If a creature is strong enough, it can resist the effect and isn't pushed.
(Can be casted once every three posts)


Lightning Bolt
June creates a stroke of lightning forming a line 100 feet long and 5 feet wide blasts out from him in a direction he chooses. Each creature in the line will get hit by this bolt, but can dodge out of the way. Any creature hit is hurt as if struck by an actual lightning bolt.
The lightning ignites flammable objects in the area that aren't being worn or carried.
(Can be casted twice every six posts)


Sending
June sends a short message of twenty-five words or less to a creature with which he is familiar. The creature hears the message in its mind, recognizes him  as the sender if it knows him, and can answer in a like manner immediately.
(Can be casted twice every six posts)


Ice Wall
June creates a wall of ice on a solid surface within range (50ft). He can make the wall up to 60 feet long, 20 feet high, and 1 foot thick, or a ringed wall up to 20 feet in diameter, 20 feet high, and 1 foot thick. The wall is opaque and lasts for an hour before melting in warmer climates, while lasting two to three hours in a colder one.


When the wall appears, each creature within its area is pushed out if the way of the wall, as long as it is smaller than 50ft tall, else the wall will just form around the creature. Creatures pushed out of the way or that are touching the way when it forms suffer severe frost burns, and may even have shards of  unless they dodge out of the way as it appears.
One side of the wall, selected by June when he casts this spell, has massive, twisting and incredibly sharp spikes of ice, preventing any drake or creature from getting within 10 ft of the wall without getting pierced. 
The other side of the wall is see-through, devoid of any sharp spikes.

(Can be casted twice every topic)

Looks good so far, however I do have some questions and/or comments.

First off, since it is mentioned in his bio, another added weakness can be his blindness, since he can't accurately navigate his environment as one with sight would, leaving him vulnerable in unknown locations. Unless he's learned over time to accommodate to the loss of one of his senses?

CRYSTAL HEART - While I understand some magic can't be cast unless it's fully charged, an indicator (not visual, just way to tell us as the Roleplayer) of how long his heart can stay at full charge to sustain the magic would give some way to allow us to know how long he can sustain certain magics, ala the Ghoul.
TL;DR, How long can a full charge be roughly --not spell for spell-- sustained before it weakens?

MAGIC DISCREPANCIES - And I see you used some magic from DnD, which is fine, but it seems you didn't delete the damage rolls via dice?


BTW your character picture isn't showing up correctly.

K I fixed the magic error (Ah my secret has been revealed DX) and I’ll try and fix the image thing, but I believe it shows up for me?

think i fixed the image

bump?

Did I... alright you needed to be graded months ago QoQ

1/2 Approved! You may punish me for my ignorance.

2/2 Approved. Sorry for the wait.

Hi Uh... so basically my dragon is a plasma dragon that shoots well plasma it is a smaller dragon when compared to others and it’s lack in size it makes up for in power, more details will be made but for now that’s it besides the fact that it’s glowing white due to plasma.

Plasma_The_Dragon wrote:Hi Uh... so basically my dragon is a plasma dragon that shoots well plasma it is a smaller dragon when compared to others and it’s lack in size it makes up for in power, more details will be made but for now that’s it besides the fact that it’s glowing white due to plasma.

Hi Plasma! I see you have posted here. Please redirect your post to https://dragonshaven.forumotion.com/f58-character-creation for your dragon.

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