Es'Lanya

Name: Es'Lanya Vol Kalabran
Pronunciation: Es-Lan-Ya Vol Cala-bran
Gender: Female
Type: Western Dragon
Species: Magic Inclined Western Dragon
Age: 50
Date of Birth: February 21st
Personality: She is very studious and likes to talk, yet not an enormous amount. She is also quite sassy if needed. She HATES overly jockey types a lot, and will just act rude and snarky around them if they aren't important. She will act flustered if someone she likes hits on her. She also really hates it when people take her books without asking first, A, LOT.
Hobbies: She reads and studies magic, as well as walks around and talks to her friends.
Likes: Books, magic, food, animals(besides spiders), and smart people
Dislikes: Musclebrains, idiots, and Spiders
Fears: Spiders, and being forgotten
Quote: "Knowledge is the key to all that is, and will ever be, not muscles you dumb Cretin!"!



Place of Origin: Icello
Tribe: Kaamil
Position: Inira | I got permission before even typing it in
Language: Kenarun, Urisa, and Universal
Home: Flat Icelands
Parents: Dead
Siblings: None
Relatives: None
Mate: None
Offspring: None
History: May reveal in Rp




Height: 40ft
Length: 70ft
Wingspan: 200ft
Scale/Fur/Feathers: She is a beautiful mixture of fur and scale, with silver fur covering her head, neck, legs, back, and tail, with white scales covering her underbelly and claws.
Eyes: Violet
Accessories: Always has a sash on with pockets for books, as well as 2 chakrams on either fore-leg connected by leather straps, 4 in total.
Horns/Spikes: He has curving white horns on her head with a smaller silver pair behind
Overall Appearance: She is lithe and surprisingly muscular for someone who studies magic and reads almost all the time.




Abilities: (Ranges for magic). She has the ability to control ice and metal, and over the course of her life has come close to mastering these two abilities of hers. She can control about 250 pounds of metal at a time up to around 300 feet away from herself. She can control around 350 pounds of ice around 300 feet away from herself as well. She can use both at once at full capability.
Items She Can Craft(Abilities): Temperature Bracelet: Using both fire and ice runes it in enchanted to keep the wearer at the perfect temperature for them at all times.
Strengths: She has surprising physical capabilities, but this is more inclined to her wings and legs, for running away so she can use her magic at medium-long range without the danger of close range combat. But that is nothing compared to her mental fortitude and wit, which over the course of many years of reading and learning magic has she strengthened her mind to a very high degree. She also has very high resistance to the cold.
Weaknesses: Although she isn't weak, she doesn't have the greatest constitution, allowing her to get sick to disease's she hasn't already had easier. She is weak to fire because she is furred. Although she is muscled, her muscles focus more on running away and not fighting back at close range and she is also more magically inclined, making it easier to overpower her is close ranged combat. She does not do well in the water, her fur drags her down and makes her heavier, causing her to swim slower and sink if exhausted.
Fighting Style: She is a mid-ranged magic wielder, using her powers to attack as she backs away as her foes approach.
Magic: She uses both Ice and Metal magic. (Ranges in abilities).
Metal Magic Uses: Controlling and bending metal to allow either passage or destroy weapons opponents have, as well as using any metal jewelry they have against them. Launching metal weapons at opponents to take them out from afar. And also the ability to use hand held weapons to attack enemies and fight them close range whilst she stays far away from danger.
Ice Magic Uses: Cooling and freezing water to be able to cross it. Summoning large amounts of snow and ice to form a Gail to either escape from enemies with or disorient them so she can attack them without them being able to get to her. As well as summoning large and small icicles to launch at opponents. As well as summoning large amounts of icy wind to propel her faster through the air so she can escape from unwinnable or bad situations faster.

Rank: Do you have permission from the Kaamil tribe leader for a high rank?

Abilities: Range of control? How much at one time? Just need some more specific details

Strengths: You need to explain physical capabilities.

Weaknesses: Saying you are strong but can be overpowered isn't a weakness, they are opposites of one another. Can you explain a bit more?

Magic: Please list ice/metal magic uses. If it is the same as abilities, then abilities need to change. Ability is like being able to do something without using magic, like color-changing scales vs a magical spell to make invisible. It is confusing for even staff to differentiate, so if you want it to be MAGIC, only put Ice and Metal magic in magic section, If it is an ability, magic would be N/A. Feel free to ask staff for help if this is confusing (it confuses me too haha)

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Edited what you asked for and changed around the strengths and weaknesses to make more sense.

Your ranges are way too far, and the amount is way too much.  For being able to do those things you need to have significant restrictions or to nerf the overall ability of ice and metal in order to be fair and competitive.  Feel free to ask questions if you have any.
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lowered the range and amount controllable by a very large amount

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Abilities: Would she be able to control up to 250lbs of metal and 350lbs of ice at the same time? Or is it more of an either/or situation? AKA, how much total material can she control at once?

Magic: Does her magic have the same limits and ranges as her abilities? Or is it completely different? Just looking for some more specifics

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Out for edits.

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Gave her the ability to create temperature bracelets.

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