Log in
Dragon’s Haven
Latest topics
» Rateevko- Lord of Sleepby Oculus Tue Nov 22, 2022 12:03 pm
» Simple fish gathering (Open)
by Bellabear.INK Tue Nov 01, 2022 5:10 pm
» Deuce
by Oculus Thu Oct 06, 2022 3:56 pm
» Deuce
by Meteor Ace Mon Aug 29, 2022 2:46 pm
» Tharasis
by Tharasis Sun Aug 21, 2022 12:52 pm
» A Dinner for All (Open)
by Veokia Sun Aug 21, 2022 12:48 pm
» I guess this is an introduction
by Oculus Mon Aug 08, 2022 8:13 pm
» Isadore Frost
by Solarlight and Darksky Mon Aug 08, 2022 2:33 pm
» Asherna Ky'aelri
by Solarlight and Darksky Mon Aug 08, 2022 2:30 pm
» Pearl
by Solarlight and Darksky Mon Aug 08, 2022 2:27 pm
» The Faceless Librarian
by Solarlight and Darksky Mon Aug 08, 2022 2:24 pm
» Ilinui
by ChicoryWielder Fri Aug 05, 2022 6:40 pm
» Pearl Starweaver
by EmriTheUnstoppable Tue May 17, 2022 10:28 pm
» Veraasí Sâleesh
by EmriTheUnstoppable Tue May 17, 2022 10:27 pm
» Viddera, NightStalker NEEDS APPROVAL
by EmriTheUnstoppable Tue May 17, 2022 10:25 pm
Top posting users this month
No user |
Sokatsu
3 posters
Page 1 of 1
Sokatsu
Dragons haven
Name:sokatsu
Pronunciation: (so-kat-su)
Gender: female
Type:hydra
Species:hydra
Age:5
Date of Birth:3/10
Personality:(each sentence is a different head) curious, always telling the others to be more curious. playful loves to play games and solve puzzles. cautious always telling the others ,sokatsu specifically, to be careful. shy doesn't really get in the middle of things. She is efficient and doesn't like to waste space.
Hobbies: arguing, exploring, puzzles
Likes: puzzles, exploring, being fast
Dislikes: egg snatchers, the cold, water
Fears: the dark, spiders
Origin, Culture, and Family
Place of Origin:etkan mountains
Tribe:vuari
Position:naru
Language:broken universal, vurai
Home:ektan mountains
Parents:lost
Siblings:none
Relatives:none
Mate:
Offspring:
History:when she was an egg she got stolen from her home by an egg snatcher. A small creature that is rapterlike in appearance who loves to make mischief. and so it hides things that it steals throughout the forest or mountains or wherever it happens to dwell. When she hatched she did not know who she was or where but still she survived. When she was old enough to make word like sounds she used animal noises to name her self "ssssssss-oooo-ka-tu". Later on she spyed on other dragons to learn speach.
Physical Appearance and Accessories
Height:5ft
Length:8ft
Wingspan:5ft
Scale/Fur/Feathers:blue
Eyes: orange and red
Accessories:none
Horns/Spikes:on the heads and down the necks
Overall Appearance:
This With wings and + 1 head
Abilities and Strengths
Abilities: flight - can only Cary her own weight, can only fly for 15 minutes
Strengths: agility
Weaknesses: head in-fighting (happens more often than not), weak with attacks
Fighting Style: variable - has not yet developed her own fighting style
Magic: has not yet discovered her own magic
Name:sokatsu
Pronunciation: (so-kat-su)
Gender: female
Type:hydra
Species:hydra
Age:5
Date of Birth:3/10
Personality:(each sentence is a different head) curious, always telling the others to be more curious. playful loves to play games and solve puzzles. cautious always telling the others ,sokatsu specifically, to be careful. shy doesn't really get in the middle of things. She is efficient and doesn't like to waste space.
Hobbies: arguing, exploring, puzzles
Likes: puzzles, exploring, being fast
Dislikes: egg snatchers, the cold, water
Fears: the dark, spiders
Origin, Culture, and Family
Place of Origin:etkan mountains
Tribe:vuari
Position:naru
Language:broken universal, vurai
Home:ektan mountains
Parents:lost
Siblings:none
Relatives:none
Mate:
Offspring:
History:when she was an egg she got stolen from her home by an egg snatcher. A small creature that is rapterlike in appearance who loves to make mischief. and so it hides things that it steals throughout the forest or mountains or wherever it happens to dwell. When she hatched she did not know who she was or where but still she survived. When she was old enough to make word like sounds she used animal noises to name her self "ssssssss-oooo-ka-tu". Later on she spyed on other dragons to learn speach.
Physical Appearance and Accessories
Height:5ft
Length:8ft
Wingspan:5ft
Scale/Fur/Feathers:blue
Eyes: orange and red
Accessories:none
Horns/Spikes:on the heads and down the necks
Overall Appearance:
This With wings and + 1 head
Abilities and Strengths
Abilities: flight - can only Cary her own weight, can only fly for 15 minutes
Strengths: agility
Weaknesses: head in-fighting (happens more often than not), weak with attacks
Fighting Style: variable - has not yet developed her own fighting style
Magic: has not yet discovered her own magic
Last edited by Hado 33 sokatsui on Thu Jun 04, 2020 6:46 pm; edited 6 times in total
Hado 33 sokatsui- Status :
Online Offline
Posts : 2
Join date : 2020-05-30
Re: Sokatsu
Personality: Is this personality for each head? Complete sentences please! And Minimum sentence count is 5, by my count you have 4 so far (if we count the parts separated by the semicolons as separate sentences)
Dislikes: You need 2 more dislikes here
Fears: And one more fear here as well
Quote: Somethings should be here! Especially if she's "always telling others to be more curious"
Position: Something should be here as well, check with Tharasis on current ranks
Language: (Optional Change) She'd probably know Vuarish (the Vuari language), but that part's up to you
Abilities: Usually flight is a normal thing; but since Sokatsu is so young, are there limits to how she can fly? How long she can fly, how far she can fly, is it just gliding, how long can she keep herself in the air, etc...
Strengths: Seems like quick and nimble could be condensed into one strength, if it is you can ignore the Weaknesses change
Weaknesses: if quick and nimble count as two strengths, you'll need another weakness (always 1+ more Weaknesses than Strengths)
Fighting Style: Can you go into more detail on this? How does it variate? Does she use different tactics when fighting different opponents?
Magic: Does this mean she can learn magic from others? Or does she have magic that she just hasn't tapped into yet?
And finally, the picture should be put under Overall Appearance to keep things organized
~Bump when edited!
Dislikes: You need 2 more dislikes here
Fears: And one more fear here as well
Quote: Somethings should be here! Especially if she's "always telling others to be more curious"
Position: Something should be here as well, check with Tharasis on current ranks
Language: (Optional Change) She'd probably know Vuarish (the Vuari language), but that part's up to you
Abilities: Usually flight is a normal thing; but since Sokatsu is so young, are there limits to how she can fly? How long she can fly, how far she can fly, is it just gliding, how long can she keep herself in the air, etc...
Strengths: Seems like quick and nimble could be condensed into one strength, if it is you can ignore the Weaknesses change
Weaknesses: if quick and nimble count as two strengths, you'll need another weakness (always 1+ more Weaknesses than Strengths)
Fighting Style: Can you go into more detail on this? How does it variate? Does she use different tactics when fighting different opponents?
Magic: Does this mean she can learn magic from others? Or does she have magic that she just hasn't tapped into yet?
And finally, the picture should be put under Overall Appearance to keep things organized
~Bump when edited!
EmriTheUnstoppable- Status :
Online Offline
Posts : 236
Join date : 2019-12-06
Age : 21
Location : Stuck in the Feywild
Rank : Grand Poobah de Doink of all of This and That
Tribe : Ki'sha, Kaamil, Vuari & Xoya
Re: Sokatsu
Looks like you still need another sentence in personality; remember to do complete sentences rather than bullet point type segments please!
Quote segment's still blank; I see now that it's listed as optional, but if you aren't going to have one then I recommend removing the "Quote:" from your sheet so that it's clear.
After those are fixed:
Quote segment's still blank; I see now that it's listed as optional, but if you aren't going to have one then I recommend removing the "Quote:" from your sheet so that it's clear.
After those are fixed:
~1/2 Approved~
EmriTheUnstoppable- Status :
Online Offline
Posts : 236
Join date : 2019-12-06
Age : 21
Location : Stuck in the Feywild
Rank : Grand Poobah de Doink of all of This and That
Tribe : Ki'sha, Kaamil, Vuari & Xoya
Re: Sokatsu
Ok. Everything looks good.
Approved 2/2
Approved 2/2
Solarlight and Darksky- Leader
- Status :
Online Offline
Posts : 376
Join date : 2018-01-26
Age : 27
Rank : Rulers
Tribe : Stormcaller
Page 1 of 1
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
|
|