Arrazilla

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   Name: Arrazilla
   Pronunciation: Arazila, Arra
   Gender: Female
   Type: Western dragon
   Species: SkyWing
   Age: 35
   Date of Birth: 16 October
   Personality: During the war she get a little bit bossy, but she can be also kind and open towards dragons she know. In       free time she is even kinder, telling jokes and makes pranks from time to time. When in mood, she's flirty and very affectionate, giving her brother, and of course someone she will fall in love with, a lot of attention. In battle she's harsh and rarely responsible, losing herself in the sound of battle, but still paying attention to the surroundings, giving orders and push her way forward. As general she cared about her soldiers like no one else was, making sure they're all in good mood and high morale. In overall she's bossy if situation need it, otherwise she's kind, open, affectionate, talkative and trying to be cheerful.
   Hobbies: Her most favourite hobby is training. Training, training and training. From close combat, to flying, running and obstacle jumping. If she can't do that, she enjoy reading books, talking with others, flying and spar. In worst situation she just enjoy moments of silence, rolling around and resting.
   Likes: Bravery, kindness, truth, secrets, conversations, flying, fighting, resting, reading, good food, water, blood
   Dislikes: Cowards, laziness, liars, raw food, mud, thunderstorms, wasting time
   Fears: Powerful magic, death, being forgotten
   Quote: "Blood for the blood, that's the true dragon warrior way."


   


   Place of Origin: Not from this world Not allowed, needs to be from this world
   Tribe: Rogue
   Position: ex-general
   Language: [color:817a=#ff0000]Dragon (native), common, universal Universal is considered the native dragon tongue
   Home: Log cabin in grasslands
   Parents: Rogue (Mother, dead) Zufizar (Father, dead). Both was high ranking military advisors From what tribe?
   Siblings: Ash (Brother, alive, same age) Amber (brother, died at the age of 5)
   Relatives: None
   Mate: None
   Offspring: None
   History: She was mostly raised in the time of war of SandWing Succession, that's why she is hard, cold and very hard to impressed. She was hatched on the beginning of the war and when she was old enough her combat training begins. In the age of 10, her wing get an important mission, during her friends and one of her brothers dies. Only she and her second brother survived. That was time when she sworn to protect him, whatever the cost. Quickly climbs the ranks and in the age of 12, she becomes a general, making her the youngest one ever get that rank. Leading the armies with a deadly tactics, quick strikes and caring about dragons under her, gain her victory over victory without any casualties. Because of that, she always fighting in the first line, spreading terror and fear among the lines of her enemies. Someday she disobeyed and order, saying that even with her skill, everyone under her command will be slaughtered without too many chance to fight back. She took it as a betrayal from her own kind. Talked to her soldiers, but they was blinded by hatred and lies, that the nobles was talking about her. Warned them, that this will be a slaughter, she takes dragons that knows what's going on and her brother then take her leave and goes into exile. Later, she get the message she get banished forever. After this, she live with her brother in the grasslands, laying low. Few years passed, harsh and filled with survival day after day, she get a vision that leads her here. From time to time, she's going back to her brother, to check if he's all right and slowly convincing him to come with her.
I love the history!  However, and I hate doing this, it isn't in lore with Dragon's Haven and will have to be altered.  I suggest changing SandWing Succession War to some generic Kisha war, or Xoya war as those two are the most militaristic tribes.  Kisha is more barbaric, Xoya is more fascist.  Then I'd talk to either Emri for Kisha or Azreyus for Xoya to discuss rank before desertion/banishment, depending on what Emri/Az say/agree with.  Hope they can help to keep most of the history of her intact with only minor changes! ^^;



   


   Height: 26ft
   Length: 44ft
   Wingspan: 63ft
   Scale/Fur/Feathers: Bright red scales on top, black underbelly divided with yellow line along her sides.
   Eyes: Blue
   Accessories: Small, enchanted traveling bag
   Horns/Spikes: Two horns on top of her head, between her ears, poking behind her. A fin starting from the top of her head and ending with the end of her neck.
   Overall Appearance: https://servimg.com/view/20324235/1
   


   Abilities:
Agility (Passive) – Her training and harsh times on the exile teach her how to dodge almost every hit towards her. With more dodges, her dodge chance rise even further, at the end making her untouchable for weapons and single target spells. She's also incredible fast and can move from one spot to another in the blink of the eye.

Magic immunity (Passive) – Her scales was touched by the moon magic, making them immune for every spell (Except the most powerfull ones ex. Meteor shower).

Deadly slashes (Passive) – After years spending on the front lines, her claws becomes the most powerful weapon she is using. Quick slashes shred through enemy armor, scales, skin, whatever it got, makes targed bleed. Strong ones crippling enemies limbs, but are harder to hit, because they're slower.

Fire breath – Because she's a SkyWIng, she is able to breath fire that melt any metal at her enemies, ingniting them, dealing enormus amount of damage. Can't be used underwater or in heavy rain.

   Strengths: Clear thinking even under heavy pleasure, speed, sharp claws How fast is she?
   Weaknesses: Water spells (Like water bolt because even when she's immune, it prevent her from using fire), easily getting angry, most powerfull spells, hit first-talk later Describe how more powerful spells is a weakness?
   Fighting Style: She's trying to quickly close the distance using her speed and dodging all the range attacks along the way. When get close, she use her flexible body to dodge claws, swords and other melee weapons. Using her claws with deadly accuracy, she tries first goes for the legs to lower the enemy so she can slash it throat. When she can't do that, instead slashing it chest and underbelly, eventually side to force movement. Using her tail to distract enemy or bash it.
   Magic: None

It's still mostly character under construction, gonna fit some more of history from my writings into her, as well make longer descriptions for abilities. Any word of comment is warmly welcome. Feel free to ask mods/Admins on discord for assistance with any ideas you wish to incorporate!

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So you will need heavy balancing for this. Saying you are untouchable and can move in the blink of an eye, that is teleporting, a controversial ability on DH. To be able to teleport, you have to be heavily nerfed in other area's, but you are saying she is immune to spells, untouchable and can teleport? This is way over powered and will need to be heavily revised before being approved. Please think of ways to balance her then bump when ready!

Sorry, waiting for a response to a text, that just had few minor changes, for over a week just killed my interest. I can understand that life is more important, problems and everything, but waiting for a reply about something I didn't touch before and was there from the beginning (what can be said at first reply), just feels like a wasting somebody time. Sorry once again, close that topic or delete it and have a nice day.