Ash

Personality and the Basics

Name: Ash
Pronunciation: Pretty easy to pronounce
Gender: Male
Type: Western Dragon
Species: Shadow Dragon
Age: 20 years old
Date of Birth: October 22
Personality: Ah is very mistrustful, due to his abandonment as a hatchling, he is also mistrustful because of his life as a rogue. He is very loyal to those he trusts, and is more on the quiet side. He is also very wary of other dragons, also due to his life as a rogue, and tends to very cynical and skeptical of other dragons intentions. When meeting someone new, he is very aloof and sarcastic to appear more capable than he is. He is also pretty snarky, never missing a chance to comment on someone who'd treated them badly in the past. He is very affectionate and protective of those he trusts as well, he's only ever had Stella, so once he makes friends, he'll trust and protect them with his life. He is also very determined, always willing to do whatever it takes to go through with something he's started, or make good on a promise, something else he's learned from life as a Rogue.
Hobbies: Hanging out with Stella, Flying, Hunting.
Likes: Talking with his sister, learning new things, keeping Stella safe, bravery, proving people wrong. 
Dislikes: Anyone that threatens the people he cares about, liars, dangerous situations, being around a lot of dragons, hypocrites.
Fears: Losing Stella, or anyone he cares about.
Quote: 'Being genetically related doesn't make you family. Love, support, trust honesty, sacrifice, acceptance, protection, security, compromise, gratitude, respect, and loyalty are what make you family.'

Origin, Culture, and Family

Place of Origin: Unknown
Tribe: Rogue
Position: None
Language: Dragon
Home: None
Parents: Father - Unknown, Mother - Unknown
Siblings: Stella (Twin sister)
Relatives: None that they know of
Mate: None yet.
Offspring: None
History: Ash and Stella were hatched out of the same egg, making them twins. Due too the rarity of twins, or maybe because of it, they were born with abnormal markings. Instead of being pure black, like all Shadow Dragons, Ash was covered with ash-grey streaks, hence his name. His twin sister Stella, has equally bizarre markings. Because of this abnormality, Ash and his sister were abandoned as hatchlings and left to fend for themselves. Ash became very protective of Stella, as she was all he had left, and became very mistrustful and suspicious towards others due to his life as a rogue. It takes a lot to make Ash mad, as he is usually very level-headed, and laughs/shrugs insults directed towards him off. However, once someone he cares about is insulted or threatened, he won't hesitate to fight. Large groups of dragons make him uncomfortable, and he prefers life as a rogue. He and Stella are inseparable.

Physical Appearance and Accessories

Height: 60 ft.
Length: 120 ft.
Wingspan: 200 ft.
Scale/Fur/Feathers: Black scales with ash grey streaks
Eyes: Deep blue
Accessories: None
Horns/Spikes: Razor sharp, extremely venomous spines that can raise or lower, and rattle (Making a noise like a rattlesnake) as a warning. They run from the top of his head to the tip of his tail.
Overall Appearance: Long, curved neck, big eyes with cat-like pupils, huge catlike wings, long flexible tail, Smooth, gleaming scales, claw scar over right eye, the spine on top of his head is missing.

Abilities and Strengths

Abilities: Camouflage: She is able to change the color of her scales, like a chameleon, to either match her surroundings, or look like other dragons, which helps her stay unnoticed when in large groups of dragons. Can only color change.
Night vision; Can see in the dark.
Very fast and agile: Faster and more agile than most dragons, as a shadow dragons skeleton is very flexible, but not overly agile. Relatively fast, can run about 70 mph, and can fly about 100 mph, 120 when diving.
Venemous spines.
Strengths: very fast and agile, quick thinking, intelligent.
Weaknesses:
-Overprotectiveness
-Rash
-Sometimes relies to much on brute strength.
-His wings are just as sensitive as Stella's, multiple arteries run through the inner wings, and a slash to the wing could allow him to bleed out easily.
-Not immune to his own venom.
Fighting Style: Circles opponent and darts towards it, biting and slashing before dodging the incoming attack and darting out of reach. Repeats that until opponent is weak with blood loss and finishes him off. Uses brute force if necessary.
Magic: None

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Your physical appearance says you have venomous spikes, but I don't see that listed anywhere in abilities?

Strengths/Weaknesses:
You have three strengths and basically one weakness; being rash when mad. It is again a lot of personality stuff in the weakness section that isn't really a defining weakness. With three strengths, you need four defined weaknesses.

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Weaknesses:
Weaknesses:
-Overprotectiveness
-Rash
-Sometimes relies to much on brute strength. How is this a weakness?
-His wings are just as sensitive as Stella's, multiple arteries run through the inner wings, and a slash to the wing could allow him to bleed out easily.
-Not immune to his own venom. How is this a weakness? It is more of an ability description

You need to describe the venom. Being blunt, saying you are super fast and having a super deadly venom is not going to be approved. It isn't balanced, and until you balance your characters, I cannot approve these apps. You need to have some hard-hitting weaknesses and/or turn down your venom and/or speed