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Post by Noctis Umbra Mon Aug 30, 2021 8:44 am

Personality and the Basics


Name: Ignis
Pronunciation: Ig-nees
Gender: male
Type: western
Species: Fireburst Dragon
Age: 5
Date of Birth: August 7th
Personality: Ignis is a compulsive hoarder, he will collect anything regardless of what value it is to anyone else. He can be selfish about his hoard except with those he feels he can trust. Just don't ask him to get rid of anything, he will argue to no end with you. He will pick fights when angered. Ignis asserts his dominance by wrestling other hatchlings. He can be mischievous and will try to pull pranks on other dragons.
Hobbies: Hunting, guarding his hoard, starting fires
Likes: hot climates, fire, meat
Dislikes: water, flora, cold climates
Fears: water, ice
Quote: "Me bes de bestest hunter!"


Origin, Culture, and Family


Place of Origin: Rogue lands
Tribe: Rogue
Position: none
Language: universal
Home: tropical forest where it is warm year round
Parents: Hiita (mother), Heatwave (father)
Siblings:none
Relatives: aunts, uncles, cousins
Mate: none
Offspring: none
History: Born to his parents, he has had little to no issues gathering his own food once strong enough.


Physical Appearance and Accessories


Height: 7.5ft
Length: 11ft
Wingspan: 9ft
Scale/Fur/Feathers: Ignis has scales and some fur, see below image for reference, image credit goes to Flight Rising
Eyes: see below image for eye color
Accessories: none
Horns/Spikes: see below image
Overall Appearance: https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/482670229206466590/700873902762622977/Screen_Shot_2020-04-17_at_2.05.11_PM.png


Abilities and Strengths


Abilities: Caloric Paw; sets his forepaw on fire then he scratches the target, Caloric Paw is quick to prepare, but also has a short lifespan. Flamescales; (when he reaches adulthood) his scales glow red hot when in use, its causes severe burns upon contact, he can maintain the flamescales up to 3 minutes.
Strengths: he has good physical strength for a hatchling, he also has strong magic for a hatchling, both of which are just shy of a teen dragon
Weaknesses: He is weak to water, water also temporarily nullifies his flamescales, he is weak to cold and ice, his scales are far from developed which he can be harmed easily
Fighting Style: Ignis' combat style mixes both physical and magic based attacks, his fighting style is hard to get a read on
Magic: Cinder Burst, launches a cluster of small flames at the target, can inflict burns easily to those vulnerable to fire, Cinder Burst is slow to conjure taking 40 seconds to prepare but has a long lifespan and a max range of 200m.


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Post by Noctis Umbra Sun Jan 23, 2022 2:44 pm

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Post by Oculus Mon Apr 11, 2022 4:09 pm

Please make sure to credit the artist!

Abilities: How long do his scales remain burning?

Strengths: What do you mean good physical strength and magic?

Magic: How far does it go? How long does it take to set up? Overall, you should add more details to the character
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Post by Noctis Umbra Mon Apr 11, 2022 5:38 pm

The following edits are added

Credit posted

Flamescales duration added

Ignis has strength and magic power just shy of a teen dragon

Caloric Paw is quick acting short range ability

Cinder Burst is a slow acting long range spell
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Post by Oculus Tue Apr 12, 2022 12:07 pm

Please put all that in the application. You need to add details to the cinder burst still as well. How long-range? what do you mean by slow-acting?
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Post by Noctis Umbra Sat Apr 16, 2022 5:01 am

more edits made

prep time for the cinder burst spell is 40 seconds and has a max range of 200m
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Post by Oculus Mon Apr 18, 2022 5:23 pm

200m is really far for something fire-related. You are basically saying that the fire can go 60 times the length of their body, especially when young. I think you need to visualize your character and their abilities, putting stuff into perspective instead of just throwing down random numbers. Like, imagine the size of Ignis, and picture how far an ability would go, and compare that to say, a football field, a building height, etc. And then give it range numbers and whatnot
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