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My Form for my OC
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My Form for my OC
Name: Equine Ranoma
Pronunciation: (Ee-Quin Ran-No-Mah)
Gender: Male
Type: Lakara
Species: Tundra Leaper
Age: 5
Date of Birth: May 12
Personality: shy because his parents yelled at him because he was trying to help other dragons, he is kind to other dragons, unlike his parents, he is clingy because he doesn't want to be left alone again or loose another one of his friends or family.
Hobbies: Helping other tribes if they need it
Likes: Playing with his older brother: Irema Ranoma (Eye-ree-mah Ran-No-Mah), playing in the sand (even though he's supposed to like water)
Dislikes: being woken up, or woken up "early"
Fears: some otherdragons, fish, etc.
Quote: "Let me sleep in peace dragon!"
Place of Origin: None
Tribe: Larkara
Position: Dragonet/hatchling?
Language: Aquatic
Home: None
Parents: (his older brother takes care of him since his parents died)
Siblings: His older brother
Relatives: His older brother
Mate: None...yet?
Offspring: None
History: His mother took care of both him, and his older brother. His father died in war with the other dragons, his mother died of old age. Now his older brother takes care of him
Height: (I don't know: Small?)
Length: (I don't know)
Wingspan: 7 inches.. for now
Scale/Fur/Feathers: Fur:Bailey, peach, white, (see refrence for more details)
Eyes: Dark Brown
Accessories: None
Horns/Spikes: Horns
Overall Appearance:
Abilities and Strengths
Abilities: None yet
Strengths: None yet
Weaknesses: Fire
Fighting Style: scratch, bite
Magic: None yet
Pronunciation: (Ee-Quin Ran-No-Mah)
Gender: Male
Type: Lakara
Species: Tundra Leaper
Age: 5
Date of Birth: May 12
Personality: shy because his parents yelled at him because he was trying to help other dragons, he is kind to other dragons, unlike his parents, he is clingy because he doesn't want to be left alone again or loose another one of his friends or family.
Hobbies: Helping other tribes if they need it
Likes: Playing with his older brother: Irema Ranoma (Eye-ree-mah Ran-No-Mah), playing in the sand (even though he's supposed to like water)
Dislikes: being woken up, or woken up "early"
Fears: some otherdragons, fish, etc.
Quote: "Let me sleep in peace dragon!"
Place of Origin: None
Tribe: Larkara
Position: Dragonet/hatchling?
Language: Aquatic
Home: None
Parents: (his older brother takes care of him since his parents died)
Siblings: His older brother
Relatives: His older brother
Mate: None...yet?
Offspring: None
History: His mother took care of both him, and his older brother. His father died in war with the other dragons, his mother died of old age. Now his older brother takes care of him
Height: (I don't know: Small?)
Length: (I don't know)
Wingspan: 7 inches.. for now
Scale/Fur/Feathers: Fur:Bailey, peach, white, (see refrence for more details)
Eyes: Dark Brown
Accessories: None
Horns/Spikes: Horns
Overall Appearance:
Abilities and Strengths
Abilities: None yet
Strengths: None yet
Weaknesses: Fire
Fighting Style: scratch, bite
Magic: None yet
Equine Ranoma- Status :
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Posts : 1
Join date : 2021-11-07
Re: My Form for my OC
Alrighty, the main thing I'm going to ask you for is just more details in general! Mainly, there are a few minimum requirements that I think you might have missed when initially reading it. So lemme link you back to the new and updated character creation guide too! :)
Personality and the Basics
Type: This refers to your dragon's type! The listed types are here, but I would classify a Tundra (at least the Flight Rising versions) as western dragons.
Personality: You need at least 5 sentences here! Keep in mind that they do need to be full sentences, not a bullet-pointed list of traits or something like that
Hobbies: If he's a hatchling, how can he help other tribes? Babies don't exactly do a whole lot, so please I think you'll have to swap that out for something else that babies CAN actually do. You also need at least 2 hobbies here total!
Likes: You need at least 3 likes here!
Dislikes: You need at least 3 likes here!
Fears: You need at least 2 fears here! What about other dragons is he scared of? Why is he afraid of fish? What about them scares him?
Origin, Culture, and Family
Place of Origin: Everybody has a place of origin! This is basically asking where they were born, your answer can really be as simple as "a ditch on the side of the road"
Physical Appearance and Accessories
All Size Things: Alright, so the main things here are A. I'm going to need specific measurements for his size, and B. Having a wingspan of 7 inches is w a y too small- I'll have to check with the other staff to see what the minimum sizes would be, but the maximum sizes are listed here as well!
Overall Appearance: I think you may have forgotten to link your image here? Remember to credit the artist who made it if you put any images in!
Abilities and Strengths
This looks alright to me! Just keep in mind, if you want to add magics/abilities later, you'll need to submit him for reapproval (but luckily reapproval only needs one staff member give their stamp of approval rather than the two for normal approval.)
Bump when edited, and feel free to ping/DM me on Discord if you've got any questions!
Personality and the Basics
Type: This refers to your dragon's type! The listed types are here, but I would classify a Tundra (at least the Flight Rising versions) as western dragons.
Personality: You need at least 5 sentences here! Keep in mind that they do need to be full sentences, not a bullet-pointed list of traits or something like that
Hobbies: If he's a hatchling, how can he help other tribes? Babies don't exactly do a whole lot, so please I think you'll have to swap that out for something else that babies CAN actually do. You also need at least 2 hobbies here total!
Likes: You need at least 3 likes here!
Dislikes: You need at least 3 likes here!
Fears: You need at least 2 fears here! What about other dragons is he scared of? Why is he afraid of fish? What about them scares him?
Origin, Culture, and Family
Place of Origin: Everybody has a place of origin! This is basically asking where they were born, your answer can really be as simple as "a ditch on the side of the road"
Physical Appearance and Accessories
All Size Things: Alright, so the main things here are A. I'm going to need specific measurements for his size, and B. Having a wingspan of 7 inches is w a y too small- I'll have to check with the other staff to see what the minimum sizes would be, but the maximum sizes are listed here as well!
Overall Appearance: I think you may have forgotten to link your image here? Remember to credit the artist who made it if you put any images in!
Abilities and Strengths
This looks alright to me! Just keep in mind, if you want to add magics/abilities later, you'll need to submit him for reapproval (but luckily reapproval only needs one staff member give their stamp of approval rather than the two for normal approval.)
Bump when edited, and feel free to ping/DM me on Discord if you've got any questions!
EmriTheUnstoppable- Status :
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Posts : 236
Join date : 2019-12-06
Age : 21
Location : Stuck in the Feywild
Rank : Grand Poobah de Doink of all of This and That
Tribe : Ki'sha, Kaamil, Vuari & Xoya
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