Darkflame- The Black Dragon/W.I.P

Name: Darkflame
Gender:Female
Type: Western
Species:Dark Fire Cavern Dragon
Age: 21 Years
Date of Birth: May 8th
Personality: Darkflame is a dragoness known for her loyalty to her tribe. She is the kind of dragon to have a straight to the point attitude, and is often quite direct with those she talks to, which can end up with her sometimes appearing aggressive or rude. This attitude can be especially prevalent when she is upset or angry. Corresponding with this, Darkflame also enjoys it when others are scared of her, as she likes having that power over them. Keeping other dragons afraid of her prevents them from messing with her or her tribe.

However, most of the time, others don't need to worry about this snappy temper, because she generally has a joyful attitude on the inside, thus she never has a reason to get fierce with other dragons. Though, there are chances where she will become serious and somber, especially in times of dire need. Most of the time, Darkflame can be a bit sarcastic and stubborn, likely due to her spunky attitude mentioned before, as her excitement and fierce individuality can lead her to having conflicts of interest with other dragons. But, when it comes to Darkflame, the thing that always takes first priority is her tribe, as the Xoya are like her heart and soul. She doesn't know what she'd do without them.

Hobbies:Hunt, fly throught the night, drawing.
Likes:
1.Run.
2.Fly
3.Talk
4.Paint
Dislikes:
1.Arrogant Dragons
2.Killers
3.Helpless Dragons
4.Embarrasment situations.
Fears:
1.Be a killer
2. See all her Tibe destroyed
3. Thunderstorms(The thunderstorms because when her father confronted the Rogues)




Place of Origin: Shveki
Tribe:Xoya
Position:Schützen
Language: Universal, Xoya.
Home: Xoya's city
Parents:
Father:Claw
Mother:Lark
Siblings: Ace and Smokey
Relatives:N/A
Mate:N/A
Offspring: N/A
History:She born in a place out of the Kingdom Shevki, but close to Xoya
her parents leaved Shveki because they won't be bothered about their eggs, so they moved to another place, they lived in a cavern, that was fully of gas, ashes
and fire, her parents lived happy, the day they where born Darkflame and her brother where only htachlings that they had, the others died when they where still
on the egg, her parents were sad but happy that they could have at least 2 hatchling
the time passed and her parents taught her and her brother of  All the three contients and the Tribes and how to use their magic.

One day a band of rogues arrived to the cave
and claimed Darkflame as one of the rogues, but his father, furious,  because how
a rogue could claim his own daughter? he instanly attacked the leader of the band and the others attacked him back, her mother joined his mate in the battle, but the rogues outnumbered them, his parents died in the battleand the rogues take Darkflame as one of them, the leader ordered to kill his brother, he looked useless to him, so it was.

Darkflame trained with them, by years, at the age of 16, she decided to kill the rogues to revenge her family, at the night she entered on
the cave where the rogues lived, Darkflame finished them one by one althought
she had gained scars in her scales. She hide the bodys of them and went to
the Shveki to find the Xoyan's City, and to find shelter on them.




Height: 129 Ft
Length: 160
Wingspan: 2.5
Scale/Fur/Feathers:Darkflame is a black dragon with some holes in the bottom of her wings, she have large
claws, a large scar in her right eye and left eye.
Eyes: Red eyes
Accessories: A black collar with teeth of the rogues she beaten
Armor:She has a iron claws and a armor covering her shoulders
Horns/Spikes: She has long horns by her head to her tail(they are located in her head to the end of her tail.) It's color are grey                              
Overall Appearance: N/A



Abilities: Dark fire ball: This is a combination of fire and darkness, that could burn her oppenent, and make it bleed much, this
could knock Darkflame's opponent aback, the color of her fire ball is black-reddish fire.
Dark Ivy:Thanks to her power she can control the shadows as she wants, but she also can control this to trap her enmy in dark plants(Mostly ivy's) and make them throw it , the shadow helps her to confuse her enemy using any shadow close, Darkflame can use the shadows to hunt prey. The dark ivys color are black-purple with hints of red on it.
Dark Shadows: This magic is to trick her enemy, but Darkflame also uses this to protect her territory, den or friends, sometimes, she uses this a trap to hunt animals.
Strengths:
1.Dark magic or fire
2.Think about her Tribe and her death family
3.Her strong scales in her body
4.The night

Weaknesses:
1.The lighting power.
2. Light power
3. Water, because having the fire in her skills water, this could make her weak, if she doesn't do anything to stop the water magic to touch her or else. Also, all what is related with water (enviroments, power, dragons of water) But she can drinks water, but it can weaks her
4.Her magic, sometimes drain her energy, if she uses it bad.

Fighting Style:magic is for burn her enemy or she just uses this for fun.
Combat Style: She first, makes her opponent get confused and then uses
her dark fire to hit it and knock him/her out, she then bites it scruff fiercely, shakes it and throws it towards a wall or a rock, when the opponent is going to attack she
uses the shadows to dissappear and reappear in another place to attack her opponent, Darkflame uses her claws too scratch fiercely and make her rival bleed and run off, scared or to make her oppnonent give up the fight..
Magic:
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By the way, there's no such thing as Phyrria - or NightWings - on here xD Also, if you're a Xoyan, your dragon should be born somewhere in Shveki, so put that as your place of origin, unless your dragon came from another place...?

Also, how is rejection a weakness?

(theres just a lot you need to fix so please fix it. And with your personality you need five complete sentences)

Just change the commas in your personality section to periods, that should do.

sonus, we've faced this problem before have we

Yes. Yes we have.

One grader at a time....

I have a question, what ranks are open in the Xoyan Tribe?

All but the Generals and Skygger are open

So, can i Skygger...?...if not i pick General

He said, 'All but the Skygger and General are open'

Aka, you can pick anything except for Skygger and General.

Ok thx

Can someone link me a list of the opne ranks pls?

Schützen Or civilian less Haven adds more ranks. https://dragonshaven.forumotion.com/t10-dragon-tribes-wip

Thanks Oculus