Rasha

Name: Rasha Amura
Pronunciation: Ra-SH-a
Gender: Female
Type: Western
Species: Magenta Fury (night fury subspecies)
Age: 174
Date of Birth: September 29th
Personality: this dragoness might be small, but what she lacks in stature she more than makes up for in personality.  Confident, courageous and a bit cocky, Rasha is willing to take on any challenge...if it seems worth her time.  Deep down she's a rather tangled mess of fear and confusion from a traumatizing hatchling hood.  Hunted for her rare markings, Rasha quickly learned to be disgusting of unfamiliar snouts.  The swirled black almost 'flame like' patterns resemble those depicted in an old world prophecy stamping her as the 'flame marked one; an omen of an end to the world.  Though, the prophecy was all but forgotten except for those knowledgeable in history and perhaps a few ancient draconiformes that still remain.  Rasha of course prefers to keep it that way.
Hobbies:
-flame shaping- an art for those that are skilled with fire.  It involves using varying degrees of temperature to manipulate the flames color and shape to depict beautiful momentary works of art.
-hunting
-exploring new places
Likes: Flame shaping, going for a fly, meeting others (who don't want her dead) swimming to an extent
Dislikes: -draconiformes that are just plain mean or evil
Draconiformes that are just plain mean or evil
Cold weather (it gives away how unusually warm she is)
Monkeys (who likes something that flings poo?)
Fears:
Others hearing about the prophecy and hunting her again
Giant flowers (bigger than her, resembles a giant carnivorous plant from the tropics where she grew up.)




Place of Origin: Makinaw Rain Forest
Tribe: Rouge
Position: wanderer
Language: Universal
Home: A den in Jungle of the Lost
Parents: unknown, abandoned as an egg
Siblings: Unkown
Relatives: unkown
Mate: not at the moment
Offspring: not at the moment
History: Abandoned as an egg, Rasha found refuge as a young hatchling in a small village of rogues in the Makinaw Rainforest.  However, this didn't last as one of the elders of the village quickly assumed the markings on Rasha were those of the 'flame marked' from an ancient legend.  Perceived as an omen of the end times, Rasha was quickly driven to flee for her life from the superstitious dragons since they believed killing her would prevent the old prophecy from coming true.  Rescued by a strange creature resembling a dragon covered in obsidian armour, Rasha was raised and taught to defend herself from enemies as well as in the arts of her abnormal affinity with flame.  This odd rescuer would send her on various quests with odd tasks, helping Rasha to gain an understanding of the rest of Nuira outside the rainforest that she had first known.




Height: 8ft
Length: 22ft
Wingspan: 44ft
Scale/Fur/Feathers: Mostly magenta scaled, with a white belly, tail fins and under wings.  Black swirling flame like patterns cover the undersides of her wings, fins and up her front leg.  She has several black and white spines going up the back of her front legs and down the front of her face.
Eyes: Teal
Accessories: not normally
Armor: none to keep herself light and agile
Horns/Spikes: black and white swirled spikes running from head to tail, 1 row of black and white swirled spines running up her front legs.
Overall Appearance: (What is your draconiforme’s appearance? Anything not mentioned above. Pictures acceptable.)
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Abilities:
Echo location: able to use sound to perceive surroundings
Reflective scale- when heated by her flame, scales become reflective for 4 posts, camouflaging her usually vibrant scales. (Like the light fury from how to train your dragon 3)
Venom- venom is a neurotoxin hidden in the spines going up her front legs and fangs hidden in her jaws.  Takes 5 posts to have noticeable effects, 10 posts to cause paralysis without an antidote, and lasts for 5 posts before wearing off again.
Antivenom saliva- cures venom inflicted by fangs and/or spines
Plasma blast: concussive blast that burns at 1000 degrees, and causes knockback for any creature under 1 ton in weight.  Has 6 to start and generates one blast every additional 6 posts.
Natural cauterizer: a layer of tissue under the skin and fat layer naturally ignites when exposed to oxygen and burns itself shut to prevent bleeding
Running speed: 35mph flying speed: 80mph diving speed: 140mph
Strengths:
Speed on land on in the air
Ranged fighting
Melee fighting
Heat resistant scale up to 1600 degrees
Weaknesses:
Is smol and therefore easy to squish from big dreggo
Cannot fly if wing or tail fin is damaged
Gives off lots of heat and is painfully obvious to anything that senses thermal radiation
Bright magenta colored and very obvious to see
Thin patch of scale over her heart, making for an easy place to pierce
Fighting Style: Relying mostly on agility and speed, Rasha covers her claws in liquified plasma flame and prefers close combat, quickly zipping between her opponent's attacks before landing some of her own.
Magic:
Aura search: creates a 'flame'  in her paw revealing the aura/soul energy of every living being near her within a 50meter radius.  Can be cast 3 times every 10 posts and recharges one spell every 5 turns of non-use.

So one of the rules with teleportation is that is the main ability as it is almost a banned ability overall. You cannot have a bunch of other abilities mixed in with this one, especially things like venom being fatal when no one knows an antidote. You also lack any strong weaknesses to act with strong abilities, as well as being able to heal yourself as well. I would try focusing on a few abilities and think what are true weakness you would have to make a balanced character.

Bump when edited~

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I removed teleportation and healing spells entirely. The venom is just a normal type of venom. Any character that knows anything about treating venom would be able to find an antidote and reverse effects. Also, made venom effects less severe.

So sorry for delay, I derped and missed this app.

Everything looks good to me, I am just confused as to the cauterize ability, as most scales aren't air tight seals against the skin, which means oxygen would constantly be seeping in. Are your scales air tight, or is your blood what causes cauterization when exposed to oxygen (which would be really bad!), or something else?

1/2 Approved as I find this a minor detail, and the last grader can verify its all good! ^^

*bump*

Added a layer under the skin that ignites when exposed to oxygen.

Everything seems to be in order.

2/2 Approved.