Rake

Name: Rake.
Pronunciation: Its just Rake.
Gender: Male.
Type: Wyvern.
Species: Wyvern.
Age: 21.
Date of Birth: March the 15.
Personality: Rake is a bit of a hothead if he gets nervous and feels threatened. But he is a rather friendly dragon, but he is full of energy and has little manners. But once you get to know him better, he is a good friend, loyal and trustworthy. But he is a bit awkward, so he doesn't know how to act with others around him. Or start a friendly conversation with somebody. Which makes him pretty nervous at the start of a meeting. Rake isn't the sharpest dragon alive. So he is easily tricked or confused.
Hobbies: Collecting gems and shinny objects.
Likes: Shiny things and gems. Being free to travel around the world. Stealing the shinnies from others. Making some trouble around, hunting.
Dislikes: Being told what he can't do and what he must do. Somebody ruining his fun or day. The sea and lakes.
Fears: Scared of drowning in a deep lake or the sea, being captured by guards, so he losses his freedom to do what he wants.
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Place of Origin: Layrian.
Tribe: Rogue.
Position: Zero.
Language: Rake speak most of the time the Universal language. He knows a bit Kishin and Ga'ar, but not much just sime simple words.
Home: He just travels around.
Parents: Mother is still alive, his father is death.
Siblings: He doesn't have any.
Relatives: None.
Mate: Not yet, Mabye one day, when he is older.
Offspring: None.
History: His parents were traders so they travelled a lot between Layrian and Verula. They were not part of any tribe, they were all rogue's and just had a small trade caravan. While his father was still alive. After his father died, they stayed in Verula for a while. Mostly trading with the tribes there. But during a big storm, while there were on the way to the next stop and tribe, Rake got lost and lost his mother, He looked for her for months while he was forced to also look after himself now. Quickly he started to steal food or hunt in the wild for food. When he found something that glittered it was a gem. That started it, his collection for gems and shiny objects. If he found something like that he always took it with him, no matter if it was found or stolen. He just wanted it. As his collection started to grow and grow. Sometimes trading what he had fond for food and supplies if he couldn't hunt or steal it. While he was still looking for his mother. But after 9 months he gave up hope and had more of the sort of his own life going on now. He still thinks of her and where she could be. Hoping one day they will find each other again. While he travels from place to place not sure what he should do now. He kinda likes the freedom he has now. Just doing what he wants and seeing the world. But spends most of his time in Verula. He has a huge fear of water when he nearly drowned in a lake, lucky for him with a lot of trouble and struggle he got himself out of the lake. Why he got in the lake, When he landed near the lake for a drink, the ground dropped below him causing Rake to fall into the water.


Height: 18
Length: 35
Wingspan: 62
Scale/Fur/Feathers: His body is only made of hard Scale's that serves as his armor.
Eyes: Blue.
Accessories: A bag with his collection of gems and shiny objects he found during his travels or stole, and his supplies.
Horns/Spikes: His body is covered in sharp spikes and horns. His tail is rather long and has spikes around it and a long sharp spike at the end of his tail. At the edge of his wings, he has a ridge of small feathers at the end of his wings.
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Abilities and Strengths

Firebolt: He can shoot 3 fireballs from his muzzle, one at a time or all each one. It takes an hour for he can do it again. the Fireball is about 650C tops and can reach around 25-ish feet maximum. The magnitude of impact. If it hits the target would be on fire for one turn of his post. And if it hits the ground it will leave a small crater in the ground. That also is on fire, kinda like a campfire but then bigger, for 2 posts.

He has a weak poison running through his claws, that has a weakening effect making his prey or opponent slower to react and dizzy, it works mostly only on creatures that are smaller than him or around his size. It can last around 2 to 4 posts depending on the size of his target. The larger his target is the faster it wears off.

Strengths: Sinds he fights more with his muscles and his body, he can withstand much more for his age already. And is a bit stronger than normal also for most other dragons around his age. Has a good resistance against heat or fire-based spells.
Weaknesses: Weakness to water and cold-based spells, Rake is not being able to handle extremely cold weather. He also can't swim. Because he gets angry easily if you taunt or insult him, you can trick him easily into a fight.
Fighting Style: He prefers melee combat, he bites and uses his claws, tail to strike his opponents down. When Rake is in the air he just dives mostly towards his target to force him or her on the ground. Or uses his fire to distract the enemy first. After which he pins him or her down with his claws to the ground, mostly he tries to bite violently in its neck too after he hit the ground, with his opponent.
Magic

Abilities and Strengths

Abilities: You've got a really good start here!! Just want to ask you for a few more details. The new character creation guide isn't out yet, but this is going to be the template we're using for abilities and magic! Just make sure you've got everything listed in there, and I'll give em another look over once you've updated it.

oH- And one other thing I wanted to mention here! Time can be kinda tricky to keep track of in roleplay's so please make sure to put your time limits into post limits! Longer times (like 10 minutes or longer) can stay in minutes, but for shorter times like the 2-3 minutes you have, please change that to something like "lasts for 2-3 posts" instead.

Abilities/Magic Template
- Name:
- Brief description of what it does:
- Appearance (if applicable):
- Cooldown time (if applicable, in posts):
- Range (if applicable):
- Magnitude of impact (if applicable):

Strengths and Weaknesses: Pretty much good here! Just wanted to ask for a little clarification here: what do you mean by "Weakness to water and cold based spells. And other forms of magic."? The water and cold magic part is totally clear, no need to explain that further, but are you saying that Rake is weak to all magic? Can you expand on this a bit please? Because if he's weak to all types of magic, then you would need to replace your first weakness since water and cold magic would be included by saying he's weak to all magics.


Can I just say? This is a really good app for a first-timer, you should be proud of yourself! Make sure to either ping me on Discord and/or reply to this topic with "Bump" to let me know you've fixed everything ;)

Bump Thanks and fixed it and also some errors I fond :)

Please fix how everything is bold to make the app easier to read, please!
Make sure to give credit to the artist in your picture!


Weaknesses:  Being Taunted or Insulted and being smarter than him.
How is this a weakness?

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Please change tribe from none to Rogue, then you should be done

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So sorry for the delay, life got busy!

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