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Veokia, the Umbran Flame
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Name: Veokia
Pronunciation:Ve-Oh-Kee-Yuh
Gender: Female
Type: Western
Species:Furred western dragon
Age: 5 years
Date of Birth: April, 12
Personality: Veokia is nice to pretty much everyone, even prey that she kills to eat, giving it a little remorse and thanks for providing her food. When it comes to normal life, she is rather childish in nature, seeing as she is a hatchling, she tends to be overly kind to people, even if they hurt her in some way and prefers that nobody killed each other and had tea or pudding with one another, but she isn't completely childish, however, since she had to train her mind to deal with the stress of surviving on her own at such a young age, so she can go from kind, loving and adorable, to full on predator if she needed to do so. And in very very rare settings would she ever want someone dead enough to use her own Umbran Flames.
Hobbies: Drawing, painting, swimming, etc.
Likes: Reading, other kids, fruities, etc.
Dislikes: Teh veggies, writing, teasing, medicine, etc
Fears: Scary dergs, obviously the fear of death, the dark, etc.
Place of Origin: One of the forests of Nuira
Tribe: Stormcaller
Position: Princess by right of family
Language: Universal, basic Stormcaller
Home: A smol house made of ferns and sticks.(Previous home)
Parents: Darksky and Solarlight(Adoptive).
Siblings: n/a
Relatives: Yian and Glasoc(Adoptive).
Mate: N/A
Offspring: N/A
History:
Height: 8 feet
Length: 12 feet
Wingspan: 5 feet
Scale/Fur/Feathers: Furred
Eyes: blind in one eye, but the other is teal.
Accessories: A crimson red scarf that she holds very dearly to her heart. And a small smooth stone in a bracelet made of silver on her right wrist.
Armor:N/a
Horns/Spikes: Small slightly curved and elegant horns
Overall Appearance:
Abilities:
Abilities:
Fur Cloaking: Her fur capable of bending light around itself temporarily, though it's exhausting to her, lasting 1-2 posts. (Depending on whether or not she chooses to remove it herself. Veokia must wait a time [3 posts] to be able to cloak herself again.) Her fur is however easy to pick out in brightly lit locations, or to those with trained eyes. Veokia's camouflage isn't evolved for combat, and is simply for hunting her prey, but allows her to throw off predatory creatures or dragons during a chase. The downside to said ability, is that movement creates a shimmer that can be easy to catch if a dragon were specifically focused on finding her.
Vitals Vision: Her eyes are capable of dilating into a different film, allowing her to see someone's vitals. (she can use this sight as long as she needs to.)
Strengths:
Agile: Veokia, though being small, makes up for her youthful size being more agile, whilst having gained the strength to do so out in the wilds.
Strong-Willed: Having been alone would have broken most hatchlings, or worse, she has learned to push through thick and thin when time had called.
Weaknesses:
Hatchling: Due to being a youngling, Veokia can seriously be harmed with a simple swipe and easily pinned.
Manipulated: Veokia is easily persuaded into the simplest things, such as promise of reward and safety, spells that numb the mind also work on her.
Fighting Style: Due to being a youngling, Veokia relies heavily on her unique flame breath, with the capacity to coat her claws in such heat to give her enemies second thought.
Magic:
Umbra-pyrokinesis: A powerful flame of a darker hue and nature, causing more damage than a flame should. Materials become withered and warped, and potentially consumed to ash by the destructive breath. While it can potentially burn out quickly as it frequently isolates from potential fuel sources due to its nature, it alone has few ways of being snuffed out.
Water quickly evaporates in its presence, which can eventually stem the flame with enough time and pressure, and depriving it of oxygen seems hard in its own right. This type of power can easily injure or incapacitate its own user, and completely destroy environments, which is an ever-present danger. While this ability is nowhere near as strong as the anime equivalent of this ability, it can, and will cause irreversible damage if not put out quick enough, like a normal fire would.
The maximum temperature Umbra-pyrokinesis can rise to is 2,200 F (1,200 C)
Personality and the Basics
Name: Veokia
Pronunciation:Ve-Oh-Kee-Yuh
Gender: Female
Type: Western
Species:Furred western dragon
Age: 5 years
Date of Birth: April, 12
Personality: Veokia is nice to pretty much everyone, even prey that she kills to eat, giving it a little remorse and thanks for providing her food. When it comes to normal life, she is rather childish in nature, seeing as she is a hatchling, she tends to be overly kind to people, even if they hurt her in some way and prefers that nobody killed each other and had tea or pudding with one another, but she isn't completely childish, however, since she had to train her mind to deal with the stress of surviving on her own at such a young age, so she can go from kind, loving and adorable, to full on predator if she needed to do so. And in very very rare settings would she ever want someone dead enough to use her own Umbran Flames.
Hobbies: Drawing, painting, swimming, etc.
Likes: Reading, other kids, fruities, etc.
Dislikes: Teh veggies, writing, teasing, medicine, etc
Fears: Scary dergs, obviously the fear of death, the dark, etc.
Origin, Culture, and Family
Place of Origin: One of the forests of Nuira
Tribe: Stormcaller
Position: Princess by right of family
Language: Universal, basic Stormcaller
Home: A smol house made of ferns and sticks.(Previous home)
Parents: Darksky and Solarlight(Adoptive).
Siblings: n/a
Relatives: Yian and Glasoc(Adoptive).
Mate: N/A
Offspring: N/A
History:
Physical Appearance and Accessories
Height: 8 feet
Length: 12 feet
Wingspan: 5 feet
Scale/Fur/Feathers: Furred
Eyes: blind in one eye, but the other is teal.
Accessories: A crimson red scarf that she holds very dearly to her heart. And a small smooth stone in a bracelet made of silver on her right wrist.
Armor:N/a
Horns/Spikes: Small slightly curved and elegant horns
Overall Appearance:
Abilities and Strengths
Abilities:
Abilities:
Fur Cloaking: Her fur capable of bending light around itself temporarily, though it's exhausting to her, lasting 1-2 posts. (Depending on whether or not she chooses to remove it herself. Veokia must wait a time [3 posts] to be able to cloak herself again.) Her fur is however easy to pick out in brightly lit locations, or to those with trained eyes. Veokia's camouflage isn't evolved for combat, and is simply for hunting her prey, but allows her to throw off predatory creatures or dragons during a chase. The downside to said ability, is that movement creates a shimmer that can be easy to catch if a dragon were specifically focused on finding her.
Vitals Vision: Her eyes are capable of dilating into a different film, allowing her to see someone's vitals. (she can use this sight as long as she needs to.)
Strengths:
Agile: Veokia, though being small, makes up for her youthful size being more agile, whilst having gained the strength to do so out in the wilds.
Strong-Willed: Having been alone would have broken most hatchlings, or worse, she has learned to push through thick and thin when time had called.
Weaknesses:
Hatchling: Due to being a youngling, Veokia can seriously be harmed with a simple swipe and easily pinned.
Manipulated: Veokia is easily persuaded into the simplest things, such as promise of reward and safety, spells that numb the mind also work on her.
Fighting Style: Due to being a youngling, Veokia relies heavily on her unique flame breath, with the capacity to coat her claws in such heat to give her enemies second thought.
Magic:
Umbra-pyrokinesis: A powerful flame of a darker hue and nature, causing more damage than a flame should. Materials become withered and warped, and potentially consumed to ash by the destructive breath. While it can potentially burn out quickly as it frequently isolates from potential fuel sources due to its nature, it alone has few ways of being snuffed out.
Water quickly evaporates in its presence, which can eventually stem the flame with enough time and pressure, and depriving it of oxygen seems hard in its own right. This type of power can easily injure or incapacitate its own user, and completely destroy environments, which is an ever-present danger. While this ability is nowhere near as strong as the anime equivalent of this ability, it can, and will cause irreversible damage if not put out quick enough, like a normal fire would.
The maximum temperature Umbra-pyrokinesis can rise to is 2,200 F (1,200 C)
Last edited by Veokia on Tue May 04, 2021 10:09 am; edited 11 times in total (Reason for editing : Updated Character Sheet to be clearer and balanced.)
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Re: Veokia, the Umbran Flame
Veokia wrote:Personality and the Basics
Name: Veokia
Pronunciation:Ve-Oh-Kee-Yuh
Gender: Female
Type: Western
Species:Furred western dragon
Age: 5 years
Date of Birth: April, 12
Personality: Veokia is nice to pretty much everyone, even prey that she kills to eat, giving it a little remorse and thanks for providing her food. When it comes to normal life, she is rather childish in nature, seeing as she is a hatchling, she tends to be overly kind to people, even if they hurt her in some way and prefers that nobody killed each other and had tea or pudding with one another, but she isn't completely childish, however, since she had to train her mind to deal with the stress of surviving on her own at such a young age, so she can go from kind, loving and adorable, to full on predator if she needed to do so. And in very very rare settings would she ever want someone dead enough to use her own Umbran Flames.
Hobbies: Drawing, painting, swimming, etc.
Likes: Reading, other kids, fruities, etc.
Dislikes: Teh veggies, writing, teasing, medicine, etc
Fears: Scary dergs, obviously the fear of death, the dark, etc.Origin, Culture, and Family
Place of Origin: Near the Faen River
Tribe: Rogue currently
Position: N/A
Language: she isn't really fluent in any of the languages, but she knows the basics.
Home: A smol house made of ferns and sticks.
Parents: Missing.
Siblings: Missing.
Relatives: None.
Mate: N/A
Offspring: N/A
History:Physical Appearance and Accessories
Height: 8 feet
Length: 12 feet
Wingspan: 5 feet
Scale/Fur/Feathers: Furred
Eyes: blind in one eye, but the other is teal.
Accessories: A crimson red scarf that she holds very dearly to her heart. And a small smooth stone in a bracelet made of silver on her right wrist.
Armor: Three bracers on both of her shins and one on her left forearm made from obsidian with gold symbols of peace, love, and unity.
Horns/Spikes: Small slightly curved and elegant horns
Overall Appearance:Abilities and Strengths
Abilities:
Abilities:
Fur Cloaking: Her fur capable of bending light around itself temporarily, though it's exhausting to her, lasting 1-2 posts. (Depending on whether or not she chooses to remove it herself. Veokia must wait a time [3 posts] to be able to cloak herself again.) Her fur is however easy to pick out in brightly lit locations, or to those with trained eyes. Veokia's camouflage isn't evolved for combat, and is simply for hunting her prey, but allows her to throw off predatory creatures or dragons during a chase. She create an outline when moving?
Vitals Vision: Her eyes are capable of dilating into a different film, allowing her to see someone's vitals. (she can use this sight as long as she needs to.)
Strengths:
Agile: Veokia, though being small, makes up for her youthful size being more agile, whilst having gained the strength to do so out in the wilds.
Strong-Willed: Having been alone would have broken most hatchlings, or worse, she has learned to push through thick and thin when time had called.
Weaknesses:
Hatchling: Due to being a youngling, Veokia can seriously be harmed with a simple swipe and easily pinned.
Deathly allergic to sunflowers --- This isn't officially a weakness, as the likelihood is extremely low.
Manipulated: Veokia is easily persuaded into the simplest things, such as promise of reward and safety, spells that numb the mind also work on her.
Fighting Style: Due to being a youngling, Veokia relies heavily on her unique flame breath, with the capacity to coat her claws in such heat to give her enemies second thought.
Magic:
Umbra-pyrokinesis: A powerful flame of a darker hue and nature, causing more damage than a flame should. Materials become withered and warped, and potentially consumed to ash by the destructive breath. While it can potentially burn out quickly as it frequently isolates from potential fuel sources itself due to its nature, it alone has few ways of being snuffed out. If this is the equivalence of Amaterasu from naruto, this will not be approved as it makes everything a one-hit kill. Seems overpowered considering it would instantly make someone wither away.
Water quickly evaporates in its presence, which can eventually stem the flame with enough time and pressure, and depriving it of oxygen seems hard in its own right. This type of power can easily injure or incapacitate its own user, and completely destroy environments, which is an ever-present danger.
The maximum temperature Umbra-pyrokinesis can rise to is 2,200 F (1,200 C)
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Re: Veokia, the Umbran Flame
Um.... You didn't make any changes to your special ability.
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Re: Veokia, the Umbran Flame
Ok. My own opinion on it, I don't see how the fire ability is seen as overpowered, so.
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Out for edits
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