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Post by Kyuurei on Mon Apr 22, 2019 3:59 pm

Personality and the Basics


Name: Alias. Kyuurei, Real name. Chilam
Gender: Male
Type: Western
Species: Spitzwing
Age: 63
Date of Birth: April 3rd
Personality: Hailing from the harshest chasms of the cold, Kyuurei is a being of ice that doesn't want to feel lonely as he spends the most of his life in isolation, sitting in his own den which is part of the Kaamil territory. Sometimes Kyuurei leaves to go on adventures and/or hone his skills. He may not be the wisest of 'self acclaimed' goody goodies but he tries, he really does.

Kyuurei has a lot of compassion towards animals but has a harder time showing sympathy for dragons, as he had observed that dragons are more likely to be twisted and double-faced than animals, and are responsible for many conflicts on Nuira, not that he ever dealt with these kinds of dragons. Yet he believes that all of the dragons are missing something in their lives, and that is Ice cream.

Hobbies:
~Finding and adding treasures to his collection
~Take care of wolves
~Study
~Ice cream and chill
~Find people to hug

Likes:
~Ice cream
~Cuddles and snuggles
~Animals, especially wolves and birds
~His friends <3
~Making other people happy

Dislikes:
~Greedy, selfish and power hungry dragons, whatever is considered 'evil'
~Remembering memories
~Spicy food
~Drama over something pointless or unnecessary

Fears:
~Losing his loved/protected ones
~Being helpless in a situation
~Manipulative dragons, or at least the thought of being manipulated to be used as a tool

Origin, Culture, and Family


Place of Origin: Inside a mountain nearby Kaamil
Tribe: Kaamil
Position: Inira
Language: Mainly Kenarun, but can also speak Universal as well as language of the wolves
Home: Somewhere in the Icello Region
Parents: Unknown
Siblings: Single child...?
Relatives: At least 21 cousins but all are undiscovered  
Mate: N/A, open
Offspring: N/A
History: His real name is Chilam actually. His origin is unknown and yet, dragons mistook him as the return of a former Inira under the name Kyuurei who disappeared years ago for unknown reasons. As everyone were convinced that he is Kyuurei, Chilam got easily accepted in the tribe, which at the time, was the best place to retreat from 'previous problems'. More to be revealed later.


Physical Appearance and Accessories

Height: 29 feet
Length: 67.5 feet, 46.5 feet if not counting the tail
Wingspan: 101 feet
Scale/Fur/Feathers: blue fur of various hues that covers almost his entire body. The most notable features is he has a light blue to white chest and heavily feathered back of same colour. His wings are a lovely cyan, or light blue, they always seem to shimmer and sometimes reflect light from its surroundings like ice.
Eyes: Notoriously bright pink
Accessories:
~Kyuurei has a dark blue starch which mainly stores rolled up meat for the wolves, most fruits and seeds for the birds. Occasionally he would carry books/scrolls in this.

Armor: No type of armour worn as he doesn't own one.
Horns/Spikes: One set of horns on the top of his forehead that can move to show his expression.
Overall Appearance: TBA

Abilities and Strengths


~Wing Shield: Kyuurei can expand his wings over his head to act as a shield against physical and magical attacks, absorbing its force instead of taking damage and sometimes knocking him away if the attack was too powerful to simply absorb. Though his wings don't cover his back, leaving it vulnerable to attacks. After a decent amount of hits or one powerful attack, his wings will eventually lose all of their feathers and will take 4 posts for them to recover and be able to be used to shield or fly.

~Kyuurei can understand the language of Wolves and birds, having raised many wolves and had been friends with some birds (cough cough)

~He can summon up to five wolves to accompany him (though only two wolves can be with him at the time) by mentally calling for them, it takes a post for one or two wolves to come depending on how wolves that are left that Kyuurei can summon. They are larger than your average wolves found on Earth and have a giant ice flake infused within them as per part of evolution and helps them cope hotter temperatures that, otherwise, regular wolves cannot. They can help Kyuurei in combat or sniff any treasures, hidden paths or for danger. Their height averages around twenty-five feet. Each wolf is summoned once a topic and won't come back in said topic afterwards.

~Thanks to gills, he can breathe while underwater for indefinitely. However, a big drawback to this ability is he can't withstand the pressure beyond 300ft.

Strengths:

~Kyuurei's tail is capable of lifting things up to  third quarters his size

~Super cold resistance, Kyuurei has more resistance than an average ice dragon does

~Kyuurei also refuses to give up or stand down for what he truly believes in, a bold spirit

~High agility and quick reflexes

Weaknesses:

~Kyuurei's scales are easily penetrable with sharp objects like claws and teeth.

~Fire melts his feathers and fur off, exposing his scales weakened from the fire and making him more vulnerable. Feathers and fur grow back upon contract with freezing cold temperatures.

~Heat, long exposure to fires and super hot environmental temperature physically weakens him and when he stays in areas over 35 C temperatures for more than two posts, he won't be able to use his ice abilities to attack as he must use his remaining ice to cool him down.

~Lightweight, though Kyuurei can get a good grip on the ground with his claws, he can be easily blown away with a powerful force as well as thrown off balance when not on the surface such as strong air or water currents

~Kyuurei completely relies on ice and ice magic to keep him alive, he cannot live without any ice inside him

Fighting Style: Avoid physical combat and heat as much as possible
Magic:

Standard abilities

~Ice/Snow manipulation, Kyuurei can create and move vast amounts of ice and snow within his radius (Of 250 feet) though he cannot control water, he can freeze it without touching the water. He uses them to strike and/or freeze his foes and block attacks as well as creating paths or it is just to look cool. He can also levitate the ice/snow objects in the air and throw them without lifting his finger. Levitating medium to big and heavy objects he would need to concentrate or else it fall apart. High temperature areas greatly hinders this ability, reducing it to 30 feet radius.

~Iceburst, requires one post warm-up for white ball but a blue ball can be created without the warm-up. Once it is ready, Kyuurei fires a huge white/small blue ball consisting of ultracold energy from his maw or tail that lasts up to distances up to 90 feet before exploding, creating devastating damage. Iceburst is powerful enough to send a part of a cavern tumbling down (when fully charged) and unblock pathways blocked by tumbled rocks (Even if no charge) However, Kyuurei isn't immune to the explosion nor the debris caused by his Iceburst, (10 feet feet diameter for blue ball or 30 feet diameter for white ball) While charging up the ball, Kyuurei can be disrupted and make him miss the target or it blows up on him. Cannot be used at the same time as when ice are being manipulated

~Reflective Wing shield: An upgrade of the Wing shield. You can tell it's activated when you see the feathers on the wings are much more shiny than usual as well as glowing slightly. Like the name says, it reflects all physical and magical projectiles away when bounced upon, though never at the opponent who threw the projectiles.



Miscellaneous

~Ice aura Kyuurei is really cold to the touch and may inflict frost on his surroundings simply by his presence. This aura also helps him cope with his surroundings

~Snowing! If the area temperature is lower than 20 C, Kyuurei can make it snow. After one post, there is half an inch of snow on the ground within a 120 feet diameter. It's basically useless to him so, yay?

~Ice cream! Kyuurei spends pointless magic to make ice cream using any ingredient as the flavour. He can make as much as he wants, well, 100 litres of ice cream a day is his limit. More than that mentally exhausts him. Good job if you made it that far.


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Post by Oculus on Tue Apr 23, 2019 7:51 pm

@Kyuurei wrote:
Personality and the Basics


Name: Alias. Kyuurei, Real name. Chilam
Gender: Male
Type: Western
Species: Spitzwing
Age: 63
Date of Birth: April 3rd
Personality: Despite hailing from the harshest chasms of the cold, Kyuurei has one of the warmest hearts a dragon could possibly have. Other than payment for his rent in Kaamil, Kyuurei takes the time of his life to tackle issues other dragons, which may caused by self doubt and trauma. He may not be the wisest of 'self acclaimed' goody goodies but he tries, he really does.

Gifted with natural talents and rare abilities, Kyuurei has a lot of compassion towards animals but have a harder time showing sympathy for dragons, as he had observed that dragons are more likely to be twisted and double-faced than animals, and are responsible for many conflicts on Nuira. Yet he believes that all of the dragons are missing something in their lives, and that is Ice cream.

Hobbies:
~Bonding with his friends
~Take care of wolves
~Study
~Ice cream and chill
~Resolve conflict whenever he thinks he is a bad enough boy

Likes:
~Ice cream
~Cuddles and snuggles
~Animals, especially wolves and birds
~His friends <3
~Making other people happy

Dislikes:
~Greedy, selfish and power hungry dragons, whatever is considered 'evil'
~Confinement
~Spicy food
~Drama over something pointless or unnecessary

Fears:
~Losing his loved/protected ones
~Being helpless in a situation
~Manipulative dragons, or at least the thought of being manipulated to be used as a tool

Origin, Culture, and Family


Place of Origin: Inside a mountain nearby Kaamil
Tribe: Kaamil
Position: Inira
Language: Mainly Kenarun, but can also speak Universal as well as language of the wolves
Home: Somewhere in the Icello Region
Parents: Unknown
Siblings: Single child...?
Relatives: At least 21 cousins but all are undiscovered  
Mate: N/A, open
Offspring: N/A
History: His real name is Chilam actually. His origin is unknown and yet, dragons mistook him as the return of a former Inira under the name Kyuurei who disappeared years ago for unknown reasons. As everyone were convinced that he is Kyuurei, Chilam got easily accepted in the tribe, which at the time, was the best place to retreat from 'previous problems'. More to be revealed later.


Physical Appearance and Accessories

Height: 29 feet
Length: 67.5 feet, 46.5 feet if not counting the tail
Wingspan: 101 feet
Scale/Fur/Feathers: blue fur of various hues that covers almost his entire body. The most notable features is he has a light blue to white chest and heavily feathered back of same colour. His wings are a lovely cyan, or light blue, they always seem to shimmer and sometimes reflect light from its surroundings like ice.
Eyes: Notoriously bright pink
Accessories:
~Kyuurei has a dark blue starch which mainly stores rolled up meat for the wolves, most fruits and seeds for the birds. Occasionally he would carry books/scrolls in this.

Armor: No type of armour worn as he doesn't own one.
Horns/Spikes: One set of movable horns on the back of his forehead.
Overall Appearance: TBA

Abilities and Strengths


~Wing Shield: Kyuurei can expand his wings over his head to act as a shield against physical and magical attacks, absorbing its force instead of taking damage and sometimes knocking him away if the attack was too powerful to simply absorb. Though his wings don't cover his back, leaving it vulnerable to attacks. After a decent amount of hits or one powerful attack, his wings will eventually 'break' and will take 4 posts for them to recover and be able to be used to shield or fly.

~Kyuurei can understand the language of Wolves and birds, having raised many wolves and had been friends with some birds (coughs coughs)

~He can summon up to five wolves to accompany him (though only two wolves can be with him at the time), they are larger than your average wolves found on Earth and have a giant ice flake infused within them as per part of evolution and helps them cope hotter temperatures that, otherwise, regular wolves cannot. They can help Kyuurei in combat or sniff any treasures, hidden paths or for danger. Their height averages around twenty five feet. Each wolf are only summoned once a topic and won't come back in said topic afterwards. How does he summon them? How many can he summon at a time, like how long does it take to summon them?

~Thanks to gills, he can breathe while underwater for indefinitely. However, a big drawback to this ability is he can't withstand the pressure beyond 300ft.

Strengths:

~Kyuurei's physical strengths lie most in his head and claws so he close combat with these body parts the most. His tail is capable of lifting things up to the third quarter of his size

~Super cold resistance, Kyuurei has more resistance than an average ice dragon does

~Kyuurei also refuses to give up or stand down for what he truly believes in, a bold spirit

~High agility and quick reflexes

Weaknesses:

~Kyuurei's scales are easily penetrable with sharp objects like claws and teeth.

~Despite capable of breathing fire and lighting, Kyuurei is not resistant to either of them. Fire melts his feathers and fur off, exposing his scales weakened from the fire. Feathers and fur grow back upon contract with freezing cold temperatures. Electricity shocks him and stuns him for a bit (and fur goes all fluff!)

~Heat, although Kyuurei can tolerate fires and super hot environmental temperatures, it physically weakens him and, if exposed to over 35 C temperatures for more than two posts, he won't be able to use his fire or lightning magic as he must stick with ice magic to cool him down.

~Wings, while his wings are broken, Kyuurei won't be able to protect himself or fly whilst his wings are recovering. This is not a weakness, this is a statement.
Any dragon with broken wings cannot fly.


~Lightweight, though Kyuurei can get a good grip on the ground with his claws, he can be easily blown away with a powerful force as well as thrown off balance when not on the surface such as strong air or water currents

Fighting Style: Varied
Magic:

Kyuurei has his ice magic ability since birth, so using ice is very natural. For an unknown reason, Kyuurei decided to master fire and lightning as well. Fire is probably for an ice dragon to learn, although, Kyuurei had eaten a bunch of weird crystals in order to wield both fire and lightning magic. This chart is split up into three types, standard, passive and miscellaneous.

Standard element attacks

Icebeam, it is a line of ice that can reach up to 100 feet instantaneously, though it takes up a post to charge up the beam before unleashing it. If it hits someone, can give them a sensation of burning for two posts as well as a 60% chance of freezing them solid (for as long as until broken free). Freeze one part of them, or all of them?

Icejet, Spear like ice that is easy to melt but he can shoot up to two in one post, yet it be either from his mouth, tail or wing. Can reach up to speeds of 80mph over 80 feet, the spears themselves are rather as small as 4 feet tall and 12 feet long.

Flameblast is another of those charges up attack where Kyuurei has to wait for one post before sending a huge ball of fire out of his maw or tail, this giant ball lasts up to 100 feet before dissipating.

Flamethrower is a stream of fire that can reach up to 50 feet just like Icejet, only that the fire is continuous til out of breath, meaning it can last for up to ten seconds. If cut abruptly before the 10 seconds are used, Kyuurei would need to exhaust the remaining fire in the next post before the cooldown kicks in.

Electric-surge is a beam of wild lightning that is unleashed from Kyuurei's mouth and can spread as far as 60 feet radius and as wide as 110 degrees in a quarter circle. When someone gets hit by this lightning, it gives them a funny sensation in their brain and, if get severe enough, stuns or paralyses them for one post. Any charging time?

Boltburst requires one post warm-up but a weaker version can be created without the warm-up. Once it is ready, Kyuurei fires a huge blue/small red ball of lightning from his maw or tail that lasts up to distances up to 90 feet before exploding, creating devastating damage. Boltburst is powerful enough to send a part of a cavern tumbling down (if fully charged) and unblock pathways blocked by tumbled rocks (Even if no charge) However, Kyuurei isn't immune to the explosion nor the debris caused by his boltburst, (lucky only 10 feet feet diameter for red ball or 30 feet diameter for blue ball)

if any of these standard attacks are used, there is a one post cooldown before Kyuurei can use any other elemental attacks on the list above.

Passive

These auras depend on the type of element Kyuurei has used to attack with or had been created with previously, based on both element attacks and miscellaneous. Here are the three main ones;

Ice aura: Kyuurei is really cold to the touch and may inflict frost on his surroundings. This aura helps him cope with his surroundings

Fire aura: In this aura, Kyuurei is just the right temperature to be cuddled. Wings and claws may be 200 C hot in combat, don't touch them.

Lightning aura: Kyuurei is quicker on his feet and air. May cause several static electricity to himself or to whoever may touch him.

Miscellaneous

~Reflective Wing shield: An upgrade of the Wing shield. You can tell it's activated when you see the feathers on the wings are much more shiny than usual as well as glowing slightly. Like the name says, it reflects all physical and magical projectiles away when bounced upon, though never at the opponent who threw the projectiles.

~Snowing! If the area temperature is lower than 10 C, Kyuurei can make it snow. After one post, there is half an inch of snow on the ground within a 120 feet diameter. It's basically useless to him so, yay?

~Ice cream! Kyuurei spends pointless magic to make ice cream using any ingredient as the flavour. He can make as much as he wants, well, 100 litres of ice cream a day is his limit. More than that mentally exhausts him. Good job if you made it that far.

Main problem with this is you are saying you are strong and great at close combat and have 6 or so different ranged attacks, as well as having aura's that can make it so he is untouchable. You need to add a lot more debilitating weaknesses, or focus on an aspect instead of giving multiple things all into one character to make them overly strong.
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Bump, I made changes to personality, appearance and edited the abilities, strengths and weakness and magic categories.
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