Noctis Umbra Jr.

by **Noctis Umbra** Wed Feb 19, 2020 8:45 am

Personality and the Basics

Name: Noctis Umbra Jr.
Pronunciation: Noc-tis Um-bra Jr.
Gender: male
Type: western
Species: Nightwing
Age: 15
Date of Birth: March 29
Personality: Noctis Umbra is rather shy and tries to avoid contact with dragons and other lesser beings, not to say he is a weakling. He just prefers to stay to himself and watch things unfold while hiding in plain sight. Longs to be a good tracker like his father. He has patience on the level of an adult dragon. Your usual adolescent dragon, thinks he is stronger than he actually is.
Hobbies: tracking, hunting
Likes: shadows, darkness, fishing
Dislikes: bright light, light based magic, anything that isn't meat/fish
Fears: larger dragons, humans

Origin, Culture, and Family

Place of Origin: Shveki
Tribe: Xoya
Position: none yet
Language: Xoyan
Home: in a mountain cave
Parents: Noctis Umbra Sn. and Eclipse Mwezi
Siblings: 2 brothers and 1 sister
Relatives: none
Mate: none
Offspring: none
History: Born into the tribe along with 2 brothers and a sister to his father whom he is named after and his mother. They have lived a relatively peaceful life with only one dangerous incident involving nest of predatory birds. His father roared at the birds which they gathered their young and flew away. His siblings want to become healers and are being trained by Eclipse. Noctis Umbra Jr. wants to follow in his father’s footsteps and become a tracker. He has been out on hunting expeditions with his father, although he has failed to catch anything as of yet. He is learning quickly and will soon get his first successful hunt.

Physical Appearance and Accessories

Height: 24ft
Length: 30ft
Wingspan: 16ft
Scale/Fur/Feathers: black scales that are slightly leaf shaped
Eyes: orange
Accessories: satchel with 1 tome inside, it teaches dark magics
Armor: none
Horns/Spikes: see avatar
Overall Appearance: see avatar

Abilities and Strengths

Abilities: Has poisonous breath that puts the target to sleep, it's effect can last from 1 to 4 hours depending on the target, it is highly flammable, can become fire breath after chewing on platinum, it acts as a catalyst for the fire breath. He is limited to 6 fire blasts due to limited stores of the poison gas. Can manipulate shadows by becoming invisible whilst in shadows, also can use shadows to partially control lesser creatures. I.E. manipulates a shadow to stretch along the ground to hold a lesser creature in place. Effective range is 30ft and he can't hold anything larger than large game such as deer, moose, and elk. Even with those he can only completely hold them up to 10 minutes, after that he starts losing his grip on them. He hasn’t fully developed this ability therefore he cannot hold bigger and stronger creatures in the shadow grip. The creatures mentioned can move slightly and with enough effort can break free due to Noctis' inexperience.
Special Abilities: Gravity Manipulation: Noctis can alter the effect of gravity on himself and others, albeit for only up to 30 seconds at a time. This ability's effective range is 10m, the effect ranges from reducing the effect of gravity which in turn allows himself or the target to 50% move faster and jump higher to increasing the effect which is turn makes the target 50% slower and cannot jump as high.
Strengths: tries to balance both mental and physical strength
Weaknesses: vulnerable to light based magic, his overconfidence can get him into trouble
Fighting Style: ambush short range magic wielder
Magic: Shadow Claw-short ranged dark based magic enhanced melee attack, this spell increases claw length to 3 feet, it has low demand from the caster, Shadow Wave-short range dark based omni-directional energy wave that reaches out to 15m, it has high demand from the caster

by **Solarlight and Darksky** Wed Feb 19, 2020 10:18 am

Ok. So you do need to use the site template, found here, and follow the rules there.

by **Solarlight and Darksky** Wed Feb 19, 2020 2:25 pm

Ok. I think it looks good. 1/2 Approved

by **Noctis Umbra** Wed Feb 19, 2020 3:34 pm

It requires 2 approvals?

by **Oculus** Sun Mar 01, 2020 6:25 pm

Sorry for delay!

Poison Breath: What type of poison? What does it do? How long do the effects last?

Intangible ability needs to be explained out, because it may be denied in the future depending on what it does, so you might want to remove it and later add it whenever you think he would learn something like that.

Weaknesses: Saying he is balanced in physical and mental is not a weakness. This needs to be replaced.

Magic: How far do the shadow claws extend roughly? How far does the shadow wave extend? What does the wave do?

Overall, very good on detailing stuff, just make sure to detail the above mentioned!

Bump when edited ~~or spam my discord~~

by **Noctis Umbra** Sat Mar 07, 2020 5:16 am

Kicks post to top

by **Oculus** Sun Mar 08, 2020 8:54 pm

~2/2 Approved~

by **Noctis Umbra** Mon Mar 09, 2020 2:57 am

Thanks

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