Midnight - Echo of the Night

Name: Midnight
Gender: Male
Type: Wyvern/Western Hybrid
Species: Xenoform
Age: 480 years
Date of Birth: Nov. 7th at exactly Midnight.
Personality:

Midnight has a brutal, bitter personality.  His deep voice and dark temperament, is incredibly talented at intimidation and assertiveness.  He is very willful and intelligent; cunning, yet shows great force when he speaks.  He is introverted, he spends a lot of his free time in solitude.  He has a lot of backbone and is very authoritative.  He isn't very persnonable, he tends to be very rigid.  He is secretive and manipulative to dragons he meets outside of his line of duty.  He developed a dark bitterness from his former life in war, loss, and tragety.

Hobbies: Magic, meditation
Likes: Feeling respected, fighting, solitude, confidence in young dragons
Dislikes: Cowardness, being treated with disrespect
Fears: Loss of a fight or loved one, meaning of a friend but this is due to his past.


Place of Origin:  grew up with the Xøya
Tribe: Xøya
Position: Polizei
Language: Universal
Home: Has a quaint little cave
Parents: N/A (disceased)
Siblings: N/A
Relatives: Unknown
Mate: N/A
Offspring: N/A
History: Midnight likes to keep his past a secret.  He doesn't like to talk about it.  He may get agitated or depressed if one brings asks him about it.


Height: 40 feet
Length: 75 feet
Wingspan: 80 feet for top wings 90 feet for bottom pair
Scale/Fur/Feathers: A bold black with aqua blue highlights that glow.
Eyes: N/A
Accessories: A black blade/sword with a white handle; it is 13 feet long and lightweight, made from a carbon metal:

(Image color inverted; found on Cbswords[dot]com)
Armour: N/A
Horns/Spikes: His head is elongated and shiny, he has two spike like structures on his shoulders; however, they are not spikes, they are how he exhaled breath, they have holes at their tips.
Overall Appearance: He has four wings and three tails tipped with spades.  He has two arms with long three fingered claws, and two mind legs with two long claws on each foot.



Abilities:

- (Benign/Somewhat inhibiting/Useful in the dark) He has echolocation to see, with no eyes this would be difficult otherwise.
- Thunder Cry - An echoing boom of a roar that pulses through the air at sonic speeds [or the speed of sound, 767 mph]  It can strike the opponent off balance mid flight.  It can reach maybe 200 feet before its sudden disappearance.  It disperses at about halfway from a narrow pulse of like a foot in diameter to a more widened 5 feet.
- Lightning - From his forehead a bolt of shadowy lightning can be shot from his head.  It has an aqua blue glow like an outline.  (In use, negates any other abilities during the duration of the post midnights post and the opponent next post if it hits, and can't be used more than once for the post and only once per every other post.  It takes about 10 seconds to charge before it is able to strike, and must recharge for a post.)
- Shadow Slice - when he Strikes his sword, a shadowy, slicing wave cuts through the air about 10 feet.  It has explosive speed striking at about 100 miles per hour.  When he strikes it a wave that cuts through the air emanating about 10 feet, it appears like a black slice, and since his blade is razor sharp it is enough to literally cut the air, the wave appears also to have a transparent slicing trail.  But typically the shadow slice's wave extending from the swiped blade is a primary attack.  The slices effect is highly temporary, from travelling 10 feet at 100 miles per hour and quickly dissapating.

Strengths:

He isn't exactly the strongest dragon ever.  Because his sword is lightweight, Midnight can easily weild it.

He can fly at speeds of up to 68 miles per hour.

Weaknesses:

He is not strong mentally in combat; ironic, considering his personality.

Midnight is very lightweight.  He is very long and has a wide wingspan, sure, but any kind of blunt force attack would be much more devastating than say, perhaps, a breath attack.

He is blind, and though he can see via echolocation, there is a minor delay to it, which can be frustrating not having full accuracy of vision, though it is useful for in the dark.


Fighting Style:

Midnight is highly interactive.  He tends to not be super up close and personal but will fly in to strike.  He tends to use his speed and try to use his Thunder Cry before flying full speed for a powerful swipe.  He likes midair combat, and uses a lightning bolt every now and again at mid range.  

Magic:

Ceptihex - Incantations on his sword appear and glow when he poises it in a certain way, as a result the opponent can become noxious, disoriented, and have blurry vision.  It has an omnidirectional ambience that emanates off Midnights body like dancing, black electrical waves and makes a high pitched screech, it hs an eirie musical tune to the way these waves dance.  The ambient black waves appear as lines that sway, in an electric pattern, and fade at about 500 feet.  They are freely flowing like a dark transparent aura.  The effect can last anywhere from 5 to 10 minutes.  Once the emanating waves reach the opponent, and surround the opponent,
That is when the effect takes place

Midnight is immune to his own magic.

Hello! Welcome to DH! I’ll be grading the initial part of your character to make sure all I say good so you can get to roleplaying as soon as possible!

Origin
We don’t allow space dragons, so this needs to be edited into something else ^^;

Accessories
Please give dimensions of the sword and credit the picture, unless you drew it (length, ect.)

Abilities
Thunder cry: please list the actual speed it travels
lightning: please give range and how long it takes to charge

Strengths
sword strike: please explain how it’s explosive/brutal. This sounds more like how he fights/about the ability instead of a strength. Strengths would be like balance, how strong, reflexes, ect.

Magic
Describe Home thenopponent becomes nauseous or dizzy. Just the sight of this the sword, ring has hit by the sword, ect.


Please bump when updates are made! ^^

Bump

Please read the above for the brutal and explosive sword in Strengths

For the magic, how does the black waves emit? In singular line? On a single plane?

Bump

Talk to me on discord. You haven’t changed things I’ve asked for clarification.

Cant i just be approved?

You need to make the edits so we can make sure every character I see balanced and fair

Occy ya silly we allow space dragons tf you talkin about. Also I think this app is ready for approval.

Bump

~1/2 Approved~

"Because it is so fast, if the blade makes contact with the opponent." I don't really understand XD Did you accidentally delete the second half of this sentence?

Um eh well I omitted that part lemme change that quick

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2/2 Approved.