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Nahkhiir the Bat Queen

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Nahkhiir the Bat Queen

Post by Nahkhiir on Sat Nov 12, 2016 12:46 am

Personality and the Basics


Name: Nahkhirr {Na-Hi-keer}
Gender: Female
Type: Wyvern
Species: Bat Queen Wyvern
Age: 1240
Date of Birth: October 28th
Personality: Nahkhiir is cruel to anything she sees, she acts like a beast more than a dragon due to her growing up with just bats and no other dragon. She has no sense of honor or mercy to those she finds, she makes no attempt to make friends or let them go. Nahkhiir is a ruthless hunter who won't give up until she has killed or mortally wounded her prey. The only way to stop her or at least make an alliance *If you would call it an alliance* is to offer her tons gold and silver for she is greedy. She would try as hard as possible to get her hands on gold or jewels, sometimes her greed clouds her judgement.
Hobbies:Sleeping in caves, stealing gold, hunting.
Likes:Gold, Jewels, Bats, Caves, Night.
Dislikes:Sunlight, other dragons, fire, Water
Fears:Sharks, Phoenixes, Sunlight.



Origin, Culture, and Family



Place of Origin: Gaivan Fuea
Tribe: Rogue
Position: None
Language: Universal (Small pieces of it)
Home: In the Large cave system nearby the Ectan Mountains that Zalamoro and his followers reside in.
Parents: Unknown
Siblings:She killed them.
Relatives: None
Mate: N/A
Offspring: N/A
History:Nahkhiir was orphaned at birth in a cave home to bats, which would soon become her mini army. Nahkhiir lived among the bats, going out at night and hiding from the daylight. After a few years of surviving Nahkhiir had developed a power sensitivity to vibrations, making hunting easier. When she reached the age of 1235 she met Zalamoro, she chased after him, trying to chase him out of her territory but she lost him after he ran into a large cave system, which would soon become her home. She went inside and found piles of gold in one of branches, she stopped chasing Zalamoro and made her home in the branch with the gold. Zalamoro returned and managed to somehow make an alliance with her.



Physical Appearance and Accessories



Height:21'3
Length:22'1
Wingspan: 18'8
Scale/Fur/Feathers:Has strange black speckled purple scales that lighten around her head and tail.
Eyes:She has no Eyes.
Accessories: She wears a golden necklace around her neck.
Armor: Black stained silver armor that goes on her head, tail, and back legs which are her most vulnerable areas.
Horns/Spikes: None
Overall Appearance:



Abilities and Strengths



Abilities:
Camoflague-Due to her spotted scales, it is easier for her to hide in darkness, for her spots break up her form, making it hard to pinpoint her exact position.
Additional senses-
Nahkhiir can find where a dragon is by resting her ears onto the ground and listening for vibrations, even the slightest step or the quietest breath would set off a vibration for her to hear, Nahkhiir can also sense body heat, allowing her to track creatures without having to see. Her range for sensing body heat and vibrations is about 52ft.
Echolocation-
She uses her echolocation similar to how a bat would, since she has no eyes this is crucial for her to do. Her range on Echolocation is about 45-49 ft. Nahkhiir also uses her ability to Echolocate in combat scenarios, she can make earsplitting sounds that can temporary stun a dragon for 10-25 seconds, she can also call her horde of bats to assist her in fighting. Nahkhiir's can also mimic basic sounds, like water dripping, or wind. Only dragons with well trained ears can tell if the sounds are false. Nahkhiir fights with sounds s well, using her ability to make loud sounds she can even stun a dragon for up to a minute but she can only stun a dragon for that long if they have animal-like ears./size]
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Strengths:[Feral Instincts-
Since she grew up with basically no dragon interaction what so ever, Nahkhiir has more feral instincts then a normal dragon, so she has no mercy on anything she finds. She hunts anything in her territory, even if it may be stronger than her.

Nimble Body-
Due to her small build, Nahkhiir is very agile in flight and can maneuver quickly on the ground and in the air.

Feral Tongue-
Since Nahkhiir grew up with bats and other creatures, she can communicate with bats and anything related to a bat.

Strong Mind-
Nahkhiir is very resistant to mind control and mind reading (Like one would want to know what goes on up there).

Weaknesses:
[Sunlight-
Nahkhiir hates sunlight like any bat would, it burns her scales and irritates her ears, making her reluctant to fly at day. She goes out when it is cloudy, however.

Maneuverability-
In small spaces Nahkhiir isn't the most agile, her large wings get in the way and would often get her cramped up in a small space. She also has trouble running on four legs, which forces her to run on two which greatly unbalances her.

Fire Magic/ Light Magic-
Fire and Light magic have the same effect on Nahkhir, the magic can easily burn through her scales and can severely injure her.

Additional Sense Weakness-
Due to her ability to sense body heat and vibrations, she can get easily confused if she receives to many vibrations, causing her to randomly lash out against the creature closest to her in fear and or surprise.

Icy Cold Areas-
Since Nahkhiir hibernates in the winter, Intensely cold areas cause her to become sleepy.

Hollow Bones-
Nahkhiir's hollow bones are good for flight, but they are broken easily, which causes her to be cautious in close combat fighting.


Fighting Style:Sneak attacking
Magic:The only spells she knows is a minor healing spell which doesn't help much, it can heal small scrapes and cuts and weak poisons but she can only use it once every few days.[/size]


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Re: Nahkhiir the Bat Queen

Post by Guest on Sat Nov 12, 2016 1:51 pm

You've got some of the template stuff still lying around, and the image is in the wrong place (and needs to be resized). I'd also suggest adding another weakness or two, just to balance out your character.

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Post by Nahkhiir on Sat Nov 12, 2016 2:31 pm

Bump! Added another weakness, I couldn't think of many more.

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Post by Guest on Sat Nov 12, 2016 3:59 pm

Still need to resize the image and get rid of template stuff.

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Re: Nahkhiir the Bat Queen

Post by Whispering Soul on Sat Nov 12, 2016 4:37 pm

It has been fixed
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Post by Guest on Sat Nov 12, 2016 4:38 pm

You've still got extra template stuff at the top.

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Post by Nahkhiir on Sat Nov 12, 2016 9:00 pm

Bump I can't fix the template stuff
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Re: Nahkhiir the Bat Queen

Post by Oculus on Sat Nov 12, 2016 10:08 pm

You posted inside the coding instead of outside it. Gotta move things over. I started it for you
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Post by Nahkhiir on Sat Nov 12, 2016 10:17 pm

Ill try to fix it but It keeps telling me that I can't post external links until my account is seven days old
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Post by Oculus on Sat Nov 12, 2016 10:42 pm

need to add ranges on echolocation and stuff
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Post by Nahkhiir on Sat Nov 12, 2016 11:33 pm

Bump I gave her echolocation a range of 45-49 ft
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Post by Oculus on Sun Nov 13, 2016 5:43 pm

~1/2 Approved~
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Post by Neru on Tue Nov 15, 2016 8:28 am

What does this minor healing spell do, exactly? That needs more description, so we don't have you healing ridiculous wounds unfairly.
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Post by Nahkhiir on Tue Nov 15, 2016 9:03 pm

BUMP!
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Post by Neru on Tue Nov 15, 2016 9:05 pm

2/2 Approvals given.
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