Blue the lighting wyvern WIP

Personality and the Basics


Name:blue
Pronunciation:n/a
Gender:male
Type:lighting
Species:wyvern
Age:19
Date of Birth:01/01/2002
Personality:cool and pretty chill and like to play it cool and likes to have fun in many ways play or games or just messing about and like to eat fish and other but many fish
Hobbies:music and fighting
Likes:to fight and honor and love
Dislikes:to be hated and disrespect
Fears:betrayal
Quote:follow the storm follow the wind follow your heart to till it contends


Origin, Culture, and Family


Place of Origin:the storm
Tribe:stormcaller
Position:none
Language:universal
Home:the clouds
Parents:n/a
Siblings:n/a
Relatives:n/a
Mate:don’t have one
Offspring:none
History:prefer to keep a secret


Physical Appearance and Accessories


Height:23 feet
Length: 26 long
Wingspan:26 feet
Scale/Fur/Feathers:lighting scale
Eyes:blue
Accessories:none
Horns/Spikes:wyverns horn
Overall Appearance:credit on pinterest: lethemosyne




Abilities and Strengths


Abilitiesso able to call a lighting storm and use it at my will and my will only and able to power boost myself with lighting making myself stronger and powerful for a short bit of time and when I make wound my enemies they can’t heal and wing can generate force to blow stuff away and had a forbidden symbol state to deny death for a bit and when it the can forbidden state can easy overpower others and able to go invisible
Strengths:wind and fire and water and darkness
Weaknesses: love and listen to my love and sand and earth and light
Fighting Style:combat and magic
Magic:lighting

Alrighty, the main thing I'm going to ask you for is just more details in general! Mainly, there are a few minimum requirements that I think you might have missed when initially reading it. So lemme link you back to the new and updated character creation guide too! :)

Personality and the Basics
Type: This refers to your dragon's type! The listed types are here
Date of Birth: Please take out the year! Just put January 1st, as we don't use the traditional system of years here.
Personality: You need at least 5 sentences here! Keep in mind that they do need to be full sentences, not a bullet-pointed list of traits or something like that
Likes: You need at least 3 likes here!
Dislikes: You need at least 3 likes here!
Fears: You need at least 2 fears here!

Origin, Culture, and Family
Place of Origin: What do you mean "the storm"? Do you mean that he was born in the Stormcaller capital under their massive storm? Because you can't really be born in a storm, as there's nothing to stand on up there-
Position: If you're in a tribe, then you've got a position! I'd suggest that you read the Stormcaller lore post and see which position works best for your character.
Home: I'm afraid you can't really live in the clouds either, everyone has to set down some time. If he just wanders around, you can put "Wanderer" or "Nomad" here instead!

Physical Appearance and Accessories
Scales/Fur/Feathers: What do you mean by lightning scale?? Explain please!

Abilities and Strengths
Alrighty, so this is definitely the section that's going to need the most changes

Abilities: Alright, before I even try and grade this section, please make sure to use proper grammar, and to follow the template provided below! I'll take another look once you've done that. ALSO- All of his listed abilities except for using his wings to knock stuff back would actually be magics. Abilities can be explained by science and biological things in your character's body (think squid ink, electric eels, fish gills, etc.), and magic can't be.

All abilities MUST include:
- Name:
- Brief description of what it does:
- Appearance (if applicable):
- Cooldown time (if applicable):
- Range (if applicable):
- How hard it hits (if applicable):

Strengths: I assume you mean magic and abilities that involve those elements?? Please specify!
Weaknesses: How is love a weakness? And in any case, love and listening to love is pretty much the same thing, and sand would also be classified under earth, so you're going to need another 2 weakness here!! Also, the same thing as with as your strengths applies here too, please specify how  earth and light are weaknesses!
Magic: Please specify what you mean by lightning magic! Use the same template as listed above, but I'll repost it down below for you.

All magics MUST include:
- Name:
- Brief description of what it does:
- Appearance (if applicable):
- Cooldown time (if applicable):
- Range (if applicable):
- How hard it hits (if applicable):

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