Storm - The Exiled NightWing

Name: Storm
Gender: Male
Type: Western dragon
Species: NightWing
Age: 19 in dragon years.
Date of Birth: March 4th
Personality: Storm is a dragon that can usually be seen smiling, especially if he is with friends. He can be goofy and playful, but also can be really serious depending on the situation. And while he doesn't like bloodshed or death, he will fight to the death if he has to protect himself or others. Though if there is a way around killing the opponent, he will take it. Death is only a last resort for Storm.
Hobbies: Reading stories from scrolls, going for long flights for fun, practicing his combat.
Likes: Hanging out with Athena, adventuring, and flying as fast as he can.
Dislikes: Dragons that will hurt him or anyone close to him, death, and being bored for too long.
Fears: Not being able to protect his friends and watching them die, or losing them in one way or another. He is also afraid that he will never find his long lost daughter, Sarah, again.




Place of Origin: He was born in the NightWing tribe back on a different world(Read the history section).
Tribe: The Stormcallers
Position: Scholar (?)
Language: Universal
Home: The mountains
Parents: Shadowfang(dad) and Nya(mom), who both died in a battle before Storm hatched.
Siblings: N/A
Relatives: N/A
Mate: N/A
Offspring: Sarah (Adopted daughter)
History:
Both of Storm's parents died while he was still unhatched while they were in a battle. A kind NightWing who was a friend of Shadowfang and Nya took him in and adopted him as his son. Storm was bullied a lot when he was a dragonet in the NightWing tribe because of his small size. His adoptive father died when he was ten. He stayed with the NightWings a while longer until he turned fourteen, when he left and joined the SkyWings.

Storm became friends with some members of the tribe. They trained him until he was as fast and graceful in the air as an actual SkyWing, his small size helping him out.He thought that the SkyWing territory was where he belonged. He eventually became lieutenant of the tribe, King Tion the only one who ranked above him. But that's when everything started to go wrong.

First, Storm best friend and companion, Athena, died to the hands of a merciless killer. After that, his other best friend, Atrex, killed himself out of grief of losing Athena. He couldn't believe what was happening. So he resigned from SkyWing lieutenant and took his adopted daughter, Sarah, deep into the mountains where no one could find them. He needed some time to rest.

There, Storm and Sarah built themselves a log cabin and stayed there for a couple years. After a lot of time passed, he was shocked to find the presumed dead Athena wandering close to his house. He took her in and housed her. She explained how she came back to life and made it through everything up to that point.

That very night, Storm was in bed, when he woke up with a start. Something seemed off. That was just before a portal opened up right below him and he fell in, darkness enveloping him. Inside the portal it was pitch black. He landed on cold hard ground, not able to see anything. It was complete and utter darkness. He yelled and cried in the blackness, his voice seeming to just disappear. He stayed there for what seemed like an eternity, before he fell asleep again from exhaustion.

Storm woke up to find himself on a grassy hill. This was not Pyyria anymore. He had woken up in Nuira.




Height: 30 ft.
Length: 42 ft.
Wingspan: 85 ft.
Scale/Fur/Feathers:Storm is a small, purple NightWing. Down his entire underside, there are lighter purple scales that shimmer like stars to help him camouflage in the air at night. Except for under his wings. Under the wings it looks like the black night sky itself is in them with tons of stars.
Eyes: Green
Accessories: He wears a pendant around his neck with a large, smooth, round ruby in the middle, with obsidian surrounding it. This is enchanted, allowing him to never break a bone, no matter how hard he is hit. This doesn't mean he is invincible or can't get stabbed or bleed, though. He wears obsidian battle claws around his talons to make them extremely sharp in battle. They are enchanted so they never dull or break.
Armor: N/A
Horns/Spikes: He has light blue spikes running along his back. He has very pale blue, almost white horns coming out from the top of his head.
Overall Appearance:




Abilities: Storm can shoot purple orbs of sleeping dust from out of his mouth, and if an opponent breathes it in, he or she will immediately fall into a deep sleep for about fifteen minutes. It can be blocked, but it will make the part of the body that it hits to go numb for a short while. It dissipates when it hits something. The orbs are about a foot in diameter and can go about 175 feet in a straight line before dissipating. (I KNOW THIS CAN LEAVE THE OPPONENT VULNERABLE. I just won't attack them after they fall asleep before asking for permission.
Strengths: Storm can fly really fast(100 Mph), due to the fact that he was trained by the SkyWings, who were dragons that were known for their flying abilities. During battle, he is good at darting in between opponents, due to his small size.
Weaknesses: Storm is very merciful, and will show his opponent mercy if at all possible. This is a weakness because whoever he showed mercy to usually comes back at him later. Also, the more he uses his sleeping mist, the more it fatigues him, making him have to use it wisely. He also is willing to sacrifice himself for the ones he loves, which can sometimes mean running right into the middle of all of the danger. Magic is another vulnerability he has. He is more weak to it than other dragons.
Fighting Style: Storm likes to try to take his opponents into the air, because that's where he his fastest and can fight the best. But he is also very quick on the ground, landing in quick hits with his sharp battle claws or shooting them with his sleeping breath from a distance. He puts all of that together for a fast paced fighting style.
Magic: N/A

1/2 approved.

This is a copy pasted app. You need to remove all the Nightwing and Skywing references and edit it for DH.s

Your sleeping orbs effect is way too long with a way too far range. Your speed is reaaaaally fast, and your weakness of being small is not true at all considering the sizes you put for him. Considering that small size is two of your weaknesses, new weaknesses need to be added since storm isn't small.

Bump when edited.

Edited.

-Changes to his sleeping mist:
He can't send it out in a wide area anymore. Just as orbs.
Reduced distance it can travel.
Reduced sleep time to fifteen minutes.

-Reduced flying speed from 120 to 100 mph.

-Removed weakness of being small.

-Added weakness of being too merciful.

-Added weakness of being weak against magic.

I didn't change his origins with the NightWing thing, since we aren't supposed to have any restrictions on species. Plus you were going to talk to Artemise.

Uh...

-- 2/2 Approved?